A little boy , Krish got angry with his mother and shouted at her, " I hate you ! I hate you! ".He shouted for not buying toys for him. As she lost her husband recently in a car accident, she has only enough money to support family expenses and kindergarten expenses of krish. Because of reprimand of fear, Krish ran out of the house suddenly. When his mom came from kitchen and searched for krish, he is nowhere inside and around the house. She felt bad on being a mother to kid who couldn't even afford what her kid wants. Krish went up to the valley and shouted,” I hate you !I hate you!" The echo returned " I hate you ! I hate you!". Having never heard of an echo before, he was scared and returned to his mother for protection.
He said there was a bad boy in the valley who shouted, "I hate you! I hate you!". The mother understood that its a echo. So she asked krish to go back to the valley and shout, "I love you! I love you!". The little boy went and shouted "I love you ! I love you" and back came the echo. It taught a little boy a lesson, that our life is like an echo; We get back what we give.
"When you are good to others , you are best to yourself ".whether it's your thoughts actions or behaviour, sooner or later they return - and with great accuracy. Treat people with respect on your way up because you will be meeting them on your way down.
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Vishnu Priya
I believe that words have the power to shape the world and inspire change.My name is Vishnu Priya and I am a writer with a focus on suspenseful thrillers and sci-fi, technologies.I'm excited to continue crafting stories
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There is an excellent moral in your story. It sounds like "Give positivity and it shall return." Well expressed!