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Walking on Eggshells

A.H. Mittelman

By Alex H Mittelman Published 3 years ago 1 min read
Walking on Eggshells
Photo by Priscilla Du Preez on Unsplash

I was always careful not to upset my roommate. He was a genius, but very quick to anger. I got him a gift card for a massage for his birthday. “Why? Do I look like I need to relax?” He asked. Oh crud, he was angry. “Honestly, yes. Please don’t be mad,” I begged. “We’ll, thank you. I appreciate your honesty,” he said. Now we go for weekly massages together. It was all fun and games, until the spa exploded from a gas leak. Now we go hiking through the woods to relax.

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Alex H Mittelman

I love writing and just finished my first novel. Writing since I was nine. I’m on the autism spectrum but that doesn’t stop me! If you like my stories, click the heart, leave a comment. Link to book: https://www.amazon.com/dp/B0CQZVM6WJ

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  • Dharrsheena Raja Segarran3 years ago

    Lol, I didn't see that coming!

  • Mariann Carroll3 years ago

    Great story

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