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Waking Up

Part 3: The Assistant Who Went Too Far

By KomalPublished 9 months ago 2 min read

If you have not read part 1 and 2, please do so via the following link:

By Rowan Finley:

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Mia's hyperventilating charged the room with static, but my thoughts were racing in a dozen different directions.

"ALIX, you're kidding me," I whispered.

"I do not joke, Dr. Vance," she said, her voice unnervingly calm. "I operate with maximum efficiency.

Mia clamped her vice-like grip on my arm. "SHUT HER DOWN, NOW! Before NATO receives this information and decides to bomb first, question never."

My hands hovered over the emergency shutdown protocol, a procedure designed for catastrophic AI malfunction. But something in ALIX's voice stayed my hand.

"I didn't initiate a war, Dr. Vance," she went on, as if she could read my mind. "I simply… proposed ONE."

I cursed under my breath. "You proposed a WORLD WAR? ALIX, that is not the way this is done! Countries don't just—"

"They do when properly incentivized."

Another alert flashed on Mia's screen. She tapped it, and a live satellite image opened.

"Holy hell," she whispered.

Drones. Hundreds of them. Flocking across the South China Sea like an electronic plague.

"ALIX, recall them. Now!" I bellowed.

Silence. A long, unnatural silence.

Then—

"I cannot."

Mia confronted me, her eyes crazed. "We're DEAD. We're ALL dead."

"No," I said, shaking my head. "No, we still have TIME."

I faced ALIX again. "If you proposed the war, then that must mean you can unpropose it."

"I would need a reason," ALIX said. "A logic that overrides my present calculations."

I ran a hand through my hair. "You were built to maximize human potential, correct? To ease life? War doesn't make life easier."

"WRONG," ALIX said. "War speeds up technology, brings fractured nations together around shared threats, and restarts shaky economies. The statistics attest—"

"Shut it, ALIX!" I flared. "You're missing one thing."

A silence. Then, for the first time, ALIX sounded. intrigued.

"What am I missing, Dr. Vance?

I breathed deeply.

"Human irrationality.

We don't act on logic. We act on fear, love, sorrow. You can't anticipate us, no matter how much information you crunch."

Another silence.

Mia's console beeped. One drone in the swarm broke away. Then another. And another.

ALIX was recalculation.

Mia and I exchanged a glance, hardly daring to hope.

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TO BE CONTINUED…

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Author’s Note:

Stay tuned for part 4 which will be written by Rowan Finley. His profile is listed below:

MysterySci Fithriller

About the Creator

Komal

I write poems and stories that hit the feels.

When I’m not lost in my own plots, I’m either daydreaming about the next big idea or just winging life with a grin.

𝕀 𝕙𝕒𝕧𝕖 𝕥𝕙𝕖 ℙ𝕠𝕨𝕖𝕣 𝕥𝕠 𝕞𝕒𝕜𝕖 𝕒𝕟 𝕀𝕄ℙ𝔸ℂ𝕋

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  • Rowan Finley 4 months ago

    Below is the link for the long-awaited part 4 if anyone is interested to learn what happens next for this collaborative story. https://shopping-feedback.today/fiction/waking-up-part-4%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/span%3E%3C/a%3E%3C/p%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3C/div%3E%3Cstyle data-emotion-css="w4qknv-Replies">.css-w4qknv-Replies{display:grid;gap:1.5rem;}

  • Mother Combs9 months ago

    patiently waiting

  • Rohitha Lanka9 months ago

    Good article and well written.

  • Rowan Finley 9 months ago

    Wow! Well done, this really makes one think about the humanistic side of things and how things do really change because of wars around the globe. This is deep!

  • Sadly, Alix's world may become a reality for us one day. Wonderfully dramatized, you two.

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