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Vows Between Heartbeats

A Love That Speaks in Silence and Lasts Beyond Time

By Muhammad WisalPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

The storm arrived just past midnight.

Rain tapped against the windows like impatient fingers. Thunder rolled through the sky, loud enough to rattle picture frames. But inside the small house on Maple Street, it was warm, soft-lit, and silent—except for the rhythmic beep of the heart monitor beside the bed.

Amara sat by the window, wrapped in her late husband’s favorite cardigan. Her hand rested gently in his — firm, warm, and still alive, even if the rest of him seemed caught in the in-between. Samuel hadn’t spoken for days. His breaths were slow, his heartbeat steady but faint, and the doctors had said what they always said: “Any time now.”

But Amara didn’t believe in countdowns. She believed in moments.

They had built their life in small moments: Sunday mornings reading on the porch, dancing barefoot in the kitchen, long drives without a destination, and late-night talks about nothing that somehow meant everything. Their love had not needed grand gestures. It had lived quietly, between heartbeats.

They met 40 years ago in a bookstore. She was running late for a college lecture. He was reading in the philosophy aisle with a look of quiet concentration. When she bumped into him, he dropped his book. She picked it up and read the title aloud: “Time and Love: The Two Illusions.”

She looked up. “Do you believe that?”

He smiled. “No. I believe love is the only thing that makes time real.”

That was the beginning.

They married two years later, in a garden where the tulips hadn’t quite bloomed yet, but she said it didn’t matter. “We’ll grow into them.” And they did — into the house, into parenthood, into arguments about burnt toast and into peace that followed every storm.

When Samuel was diagnosed with a rare heart condition at 65, they didn’t panic. They planted more flowers. They traveled less, read more. He began writing her small poems again, something he hadn’t done since their honeymoon. And she cooked his favorite meals with too much butter and laughed when he snuck a second serving.

Now, as the machine marked his slowing heartbeat, Amara whispered, “You still owe me one last dance.”

Her fingers gently traced his knuckles. They were wrinkled, lined by years of work and love — hands that had held their children, hands that had built furniture, fixed fences, wiped tears, and written vows in the form of everyday kindness.

“Do you remember,” she said softly, “how we used to listen to the rain on the rooftop and guess how long the storm would last?”

His eyelids didn’t flutter, but she imagined he was listening — he always had.

“I used to say you had a thunder heart,” she continued. “Loud, stubborn, but only ever trying to protect something.”

There was no reply, only the hum of machines and the hush of the storm.

Amara reached into a small drawer in the bedside table. She pulled out a folded napkin — the one he had written on years ago, during a picnic where he proposed again for no reason at all. On it were six words:

"I vow to find you again."

They had joked about reincarnation. He believed in it. She said she was too practical. But that napkin became sacred. A symbol of their pact — that if time failed them, love wouldn’t.

She placed the napkin beside him, under his hand. “You always said love exists in pauses. Maybe that’s why you’ve been so quiet lately. Saving the last vow for the space between this world and the next.”

Then she hummed their wedding song. Off-key. Tender. Timeless.

The rain softened.

And as the sky calmed, so did the room. The heart monitor gave one last echo. Then silence.

But it wasn’t empty.

Amara smiled through her tears. Her heart hurt, but it beat stronger with every memory, every vow whispered between heartbeats.

She stood, opened the window just enough to let the scent of wet earth in, and whispered, “Go. I’ll find you again.”

Because love, real love, doesn’t end with silence.

It continues in the echoes — in the thunder that fades but always returns, and in the spaces between heartbeats where vows are never forgotten.

Moral of the Story:

True love isn’t loud. It lives quietly in moments, in shared silences, and in promises that don’t need repeating. Love like that never dies — it just waits for the next heartbeat.

FableMicrofictionPsychologicalStream of ConsciousnessYoung AdultLove

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