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"Unspoken Distances"

''A Man Meets with his Estranged Father to Discuss the Inheritance Left by his Late Mother''

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
"Unspoken Distances"
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The coffee shop was quiet, its soft lighting casting a warm glow over the wooden tables and worn leather chairs. Mark sat near the window, his fingers tapping a nervous rhythm on the edge of his cup. Outside, the rain fell in steady sheets, blurring the cityscape into a wash of grays and muted colors.

The bell above the door chimed, and Mark’s heart skipped a beat. His father, Robert, walked in, his tall frame slightly stooped, the once broad shoulders now hunched with age. He looked around the room, his eyes settling on Mark with a brief flicker of recognition, then something else—regret, perhaps, or simply weariness.

Mark stood up, hesitated, then sat back down. Robert approached the table, his steps slow, as if each one took more effort than the last. When he finally reached Mark, there was an awkward pause before he pulled out the chair and sat down across from his son.

“Mark,” Robert said, his voice raspy, softened by time and distance.

“Dad,” Mark replied, the word feeling foreign on his tongue.

They sat in silence, the years of estrangement hanging between them like an invisible barrier. Mark had rehearsed this conversation in his mind a thousand times, but now that he was here, the words wouldn’t come.

Robert cleared his throat. “I’m sorry about your mother. She was… a good woman.”

Mark nodded, the pain of his mother’s passing still fresh, a wound that hadn’t yet begun to heal. “Yeah, she was.”

The silence stretched on, uncomfortable and heavy. Mark wanted to reach across the table, to bridge the gap that had grown between them over the years, but he didn’t know how. He hadn’t seen his father in over a decade, not since the divorce.

Finally, Mark spoke, his voice tense. “I didn’t ask you to meet me here to talk about Mom. It’s about the will.”

Robert nodded, his expression unreadable. “I know.”

“She left everything to both of us,” Mark continued, trying to keep his voice steady. “The house, the savings, everything. But… I don’t want it.”

Robert looked up, surprise flickering in his eyes. “You don’t?”

Mark shook his head. “No. I want you to have it. You need it more than I do.”

Robert’s gaze softened, but there was a hardness underneath, a lifetime of pride and stubbornness. “I don’t need your charity, Mark.”

“It’s not charity,” Mark said, his frustration bubbling to the surface. “It’s what Mom would have wanted. She wanted us to… to mend things.”

Robert sighed, his shoulders slumping further. “Some things can’t be mended, son.”

The words hit Mark like a punch to the gut. He had hoped—perhaps foolishly—that this conversation might be a first step toward repairing their broken relationship.

Mark felt a lump in his throat, but he swallowed it down. “I just… I don’t want to fight anymore.”

“I’m not fighting,” Robert said quietly. “I’m just… accepting.”

Mark stared at his father, the man who had once been larger than life, now reduced to a shadow of that memory. He realized then that the distance between them wasn’t just physical; it was emotional, and it was permanent.

“Fine,” Mark finally said, his voice hollow. “You take the inheritance. Do what you want with it.”

Robert nodded, but there was no satisfaction in his eyes. “Thank you.”

Mark stood up, pushing his chair back with a scrape. “I’ve got to go.”

“Take care of yourself, Mark,” Robert said, his voice heavy with finality.

Mark nodded, turning away before the tears could spill over. He walked out of the coffee shop, the rain hitting his face like cold needles. He had come here hoping for closure, but instead, he found only an emptiness that he knew would never be filled.

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Amazing

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