Understand-ments
and seeking enlightenment...
The Prophet’s Pyramid rose in front of her, imposing and enchanting. A chain floated inches above the first step, high, solid and sharp; yet there was no one around to keep the rules from being broken.
She climbed onto the first step and her mind grew clear, so she began the ascent. After the fifth step she realised just why it was forbidden to climb and she began the descent.
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Comments (2)
Oooo, this was a very intriguing tale!
I really like this one a lot. Good luck with the challenge Sandra!