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"Trapped in the Shadows"

''Two Teenagers are Trapped in a Department Store Overnight, only to Realize they're not Alone''

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read
"Trapped in the Shadows"
Photo by Taylor Deas-Melesh on Unsplash

The mall was eerily silent as Sarah and Jake wandered through the darkened department store. They had come in for a quick visit, sneaking in after hours just for a bit of harmless fun.

"I thought we’d be out of here before it closed," Sarah said, glancing at her phone. The screen displayed 11:45 PM. "We need to hurry up."

Jake, wearing a mischievous grin, shrugged. "Relax. It’s not like we’re in any real danger. It’s just a store."

Suddenly, a loud clatter echoed through the store, causing both teens to freeze. "Did you hear that?" Sarah whispered, her voice quivering slightly.

"Probably just the air conditioning or something," Jake said, trying to sound reassuring. "Let’s just ignore it and keep moving."

They proceeded to the toy section, where Jake picked up a toy gun and pretended to aim it at Sarah. She laughed, but her amusement quickly faded as she heard another noise—a soft shuffling sound coming from the back of the store.

"Okay, now I’m getting creeped out," Sarah admitted. "Maybe we should head for the exit."

Jake nodded in agreement, and they made their way back toward the front of the store. As they approached the entrance, they realized with mounting dread that the doors were locked tight.

"What the hell?" Jake exclaimed, pulling at the gate. "We’re stuck."

Sarah's face went pale. "This isn’t good. We need to find another way out."

They tried the emergency exits, but each one was locked or alarmed. Panic set in as they realized their options were running out.

"We need to stay calm," Jake said, though his voice betrayed his anxiety. "Let’s find a phone or something. We can call for help."

They made their way to the store's office, hoping to find a phone or a way to contact the outside world. But as they searched, they heard the shuffling noise again, closer this time.

"Did you hear that?" she asked, her voice trembling.

Jake nodded, his face grim. "Yeah, I heard it."

They moved cautiously toward the sound, which seemed to be coming from the back storage room. The door was slightly ajar, and as they pushed it open, they were met with a horrifying sight.

In the dim light, they saw a figure hunched over a stack of boxes. The figure was draped in tattered clothes, its face obscured by a hood.

"Who’s there?" Jake called out, his voice shaky.

The figure straightened up slowly, revealing a gaunt, hollow face with sunken eyes. The figure's gaze locked onto them, and it made a low, guttural noise.

Sarah and Jake backed away, fear gripping them. "We need to get out of here, now!" Sarah whispered urgently.

They turned to run, but the figure suddenly lunged at them with surprising speed. They darted through the store, the figure’s footsteps echoing ominously behind them. They reached the back of the store, where they stumbled upon a small maintenance room. Jake grabbed a fire extinguisher and held it out like a weapon.

The figure rounded the corner, and Jake swung the extinguisher, causing a cloud of white powder to explode into the air.

They sprinted through the store, searching desperately for another exit. Just as they reached the front of the store again, the security gate began to rise, and a group of security guards and police officers rushed in.

"Are you two okay?" one of the officers asked, concern etched on his face.

Sarah and Jake nodded, their faces pale and shaken. They recounted their harrowing experience, and the officers assured them that they’d investigate the figure they had encountered.

They never learned who or what the figure had been, but they knew one thing for sure: they’d never be sneaking into a store after hours again.

Horror

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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  • Latasha karenabout a year ago

    Nice article

  • ReadShakurrabout a year ago

    Excellently written

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