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the winning lost

a poet of a lone victor

By Aya D.Published 4 months ago 1 min read

Ha! Finally! I made it!

The cheers of success,

celebrations of accomplishment,

rewards for endless nights.

Yes, I made it.

Future locked in, drowned in comfort.

The estranged worry of failure,

the begotten fear of being lowly.

I made it. I made it?

Yet the echo of my voice,

a congratulatory disguise

masking emptiness in perfection.

“Did I make it? “-

a whisper from my shadow,

The haunting question of a weakened soul,

a nobody buried deep within.

Golden trophies,

the lavishness of luxury-

But at what cost?

Lost chances, stolen time.

I won, an achievement indeed.

A goal obtained.

But the sense of purpose-

Oh~ so long and forgotten.

For whom are these gains?

From where comes the applause?

A lone victor,

with a lonely victory.

Alone at the top,

a head above the clouds,

covered in the mist of success,

with nowhere left to go.

Psychological

About the Creator

Aya D.

creator of desdeignierx, world created that makes peace with a chaotic soul

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  • Muhammed Ismail4 months ago

    The contrast between success and emptiness is so powerful

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