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THE WINGS OF SACRIFICE

A Story of Silence, Steel, and Unspoken Dreams

By HassanPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The first light of dawn gilded the spines of Sara’s engineering textbooks. Her fingers traced the blueprint in her diary – a suspension bridge, elegant and precise, arcing over an imaginary river. NUST. Civil Engineering. The dream pulsed in her veins like a second heartbeat. But as Lahore stirred outside her window, her mother’s voice echoed in her mind, sharp as shattered glass: "Girls don’t fly so far from the nest."

The House of Chains

Sara’s home was a museum of duty:

  • Abbu (Father): Shrunken by diabetes and dialysis, his eyes held a silent plea. "Who will care for me when you’re gone?"
  • Ammi (Mother): Weary shoulders bowed under unspoken burdens. "Zain is our answer – an engineer himself! He’ll shelter you."
  • Dadi (Grandmother): A relic of rusted traditions, her prayer beads clicking like a countdown. "Sacrifice is a woman’s jewel, beti. Family is your sky."

The Gilded Cage

Zain arrived on Friday evenings – her parents’ "perfect match." His eyes scanned Sara’s bookshelf with detached curiosity. "You’ll quit studying after marriage, yes? My mother needs rest; the house is yours to manage." His gift – a stainless-steel cookware set – gleamed like a jailer’s key. Sara’s bridge sketch crumpled in her fist.

The Silent War

  1. Stolen Application: Sara secretly mailed her NUST application. When the acceptance letter arrived, Ammi tore it like a death warrant. "Selfish girl! Your duty is HERE!" Dadi’s voice slithered through the chaos: "Thorns protect the rose. Suffering sweetens destiny." Sara’s defiance erupted: "I am not a rose! I am steel!"
  2. Mehndi Night: Henna vines bloomed on Sara’s palms – intricate chains masquerading as art. Relatives clucked approvingly: "Lucky Zain! A free caretaker AND a wife!" "So educated, yet she’ll cook for him?" Zain handed her a cake decorating kit: "Practice for my birthday."

The Breaking Point

Midnight. Abbu’s breath rattled – a broken engine. Sara raced him to the hospital. As nurses hooked him to whirring machines, his frail hand clutched hers: "Marry Zain… only then can I rest."

Desperate, Sara called Zain. His voice crackled, indifferent: "Hospitals depress me. I’ll come tomorrow."

The Awakening

Alone in the sterile hallway, Sara opened her diary. The bridge stared back – not lines on paper, but bones in her soul. She saw:

  • Abbu’s Fear: Not of death, but of burdening her.
  • Zain’s Truth: He wanted a servant, not a wife.
  • Ammi’s Prison: A life spent pleasing others, leaving nothing for herself.

A cry tore from Sara’s throat – raw, unchained:

"NO."

She faced Ammi, trembling but unbroken:

"I won’t marry him. I’ll enroll part-time at COMSATS. I’ll care for Abbu… but as an ENGINEER. Not Zain’s maid. Not your sacrifice. MY life. MY rules."

Ammi’s slap stung, but her words cut deeper:

"Who’ll marry you now? Who’ll protect our izzat (honor)?"

Sara clasped Abbu’s limp hand: "I will protect myself."

The New Architecture

1. Blueprint of Compromise:

  • 5 AM: Cook Abbu’s sugar-free meals.
  • 8 AM: Lectures on structural physics.
  • 3 PM: Hospital vigils, textbooks open on her lap.
  • Midnight: Drafting assignments by dim phone light.

2. The Scorned Cage:

Zain’s family cursed her: "Too educated! Arrogant!" Dadi wept into her tasbeeh: "You shame us!"

3. The Unlikely Ally:

One monsoon afternoon, Dadi pressed cold prayer beads into Sara’s palm: "My wings were clipped long ago… but yours? Make them storm clouds, beti."

4. Abbu’s Epiphany:

Post-dialysis, weak but lucid, he traced Sara’s bridge design: "I… never saw the architect. Only the daughter."

The Unchained Horizon

Rain lashed against COMSATS’ windows as Professor Ahmed explained seismic load distribution. Sara’s pen flew, sketching a new structure in her diary – "The Homecoming Bridge" – pillars rooted in tradition, deck soaring toward freedom.

Her phone lit up:

Ammi: "Abbu framed your sketch. Come home. Dinner’s waiting."

Outside, drenched sparrows fought the downpour, wings beating toward hidden nests. Sara smiled – not the meek curve expected of daughters, but the fierce grin of a woman building her own sky.

She wrote in her diary:

"Family is not a cage. It’s the foundation. Build your wings anyway."

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About the Creator

Hassan

Nature lover & storyteller 🌿✒️ Sharing the beauty of birds, wildlife & emotional journeys through words. Let’s fly together through stories that touch the soul. 🕊️✨

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