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The Window That Waited

Some views change lives—not just show them.

By meerjananPublished 6 days ago 3 min read

In a quiet corner of the city, where the traffic never quite quieted and the buildings leaned into each other like old friends, stood a weathered apartment block with peeling paint and a rusted fire escape. It wasn’t grand or new, but it had stood for decades, holding stories in its walls.

On the third floor, behind a slightly crooked window frame with a faded curtain always drawn to the side, lived Mrs. Rania.

She was a small woman with silver hair pinned neatly at the nape of her neck, hands that moved slowly but with care. Every morning at seven, without fail, she would shuffle to the window, place her chipped blue teacup on the sill, and sit.

She didn’t wave. Didn’t speak. Just watched.

Children on their way to school, couples rushing to work, the old man who fed pigeons at dawn—she saw them all. To the neighbors, she was a ghost of habit, a quiet fixture like the ivy climbing the brick. They said she was lonely. And maybe she was. Her husband had been gone ten years. Her son, once her joy, now lived across the world, his calls growing fewer, then stopping altogether.

But the window remained open. Not because she was waiting for someone to return.

But because she believed someone might need to be seen.

*

Then came Zara.

Fourteen, with a backpack too big for her shoulders and a sketchpad always tucked under her arm, she moved in one rainy afternoon with her mother and a single cardboard box labeled Kitchen – Handle With Care.

The first time she walked past the building, she looked up—really looked—and saw Mrs. Rania watching. Most people would have glanced away. But Zara waved.

Mrs. Rania froze. Then, slowly, lifted her hand.

The next day, Zara waved again. And the next. Then one morning, she cupped her hands around her mouth and called up, “You always just sit there, watching. What do you see?”

Mrs. Rania smiled—a real one, the kind that reaches the eyes. “I see the world,” she said. “And today, I see a girl who isn’t afraid to look back.”

That was the beginning.

They didn’t start with long talks. Just little things. A wave. A comment about the weather. When it rained, Zara said, “Looks like the sky’s crying.” Mrs. Rania replied, “Or laughing. Hard to tell sometimes.”

Zara began sketching the neighborhood—the fruit vendor with his red apron, the stray cat that slept on the radiator, the old bench where couples kissed in secret. One afternoon, she looked up at the window and called, “Would you let me draw you?”

Mrs. Rania almost said no. “I’m not beautiful like I once was.”

“You’re interesting,” Zara said simply. “And that’s better.”

So she agreed.

Every afternoon, Zara sat on the steps across the street, pencil moving gently across paper. She drew the way the light caught the edge of Mrs. Rania’s glasses, the way her fingers curled around the teacup, the quiet strength in her stillness.

She didn’t just draw a woman in a window.

She drew a witness. A keeper of moments. A quiet kind of love.

*

Then, one day, Zara didn’t come.

Days passed. No sketching. No laughter from below. The street felt duller, quieter.

Mrs. Rania kept the window open. The teacup stayed on the sill. She waited.

A week later, Zara’s mother knocked on her door.

“She’s in the hospital,” she said softly. “She’s going to be okay. But she asked me to bring this.”

It was the sketch—framed in simple wood. Mrs. Rania gasped.

Her own face stared back, not as old, not as faded, but as seen. The lines around her eyes weren’t just age—they were stories. The window behind her glowed with morning light.

And on the back, in Zara’s messy, honest handwriting:

*“You were never just a woman at a window.

You were the reason I looked up.”*

Mrs. Rania sat down and wept—softly, deeply, the way only a heart that’s been lonely for too long can.

*

When Zara returned, pale but smiling, she looked up at the window.

And there it was—a small wooden sign, hand-painted and hung with care:

*“Rania’s View: Look up. Hope more.”*

Zara waved. Mrs. Rania waved back, her hand steady, her heart full.

And in that moment, the window wasn’t just a frame in a wall.

It was a promise.

That even the quietest lives can change the world—

one glance, one gesture, one act of seeing—

at a tim

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meerjanan

A curious storyteller with a passion for turning simple moments into meaningful words. Writing about life, purpose, and the quiet strength we often overlook. Follow for stories that inspire, heal, and empower.

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  • Courtney Jones2 days ago

    The imagery here is lovely! Great story x

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