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The Whispering Grove

Some forests are alive — and they remember who listens.

By Malik BILALPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The Whispering Grove

Subtitle: Some forests are alive — and they remember who listens.

Deep within the forgotten wilds, past the jagged cliffs and rivers that hummed ancient songs, there lay a forest untouched by time: the Whispering Grove.

Legends said the Grove was enchanted. That trees could think. That roots remembered. That the wind carried stories not just of the present, but of things long lost. Most who heard such tales dismissed them as folklore. But the villagers who lived near the woods spoke with unease. They whispered that people who wandered too deep into the forest rarely returned — and when they did, they were changed.

Seventeen-year-old Elira had heard these stories all her life. But when her older brother, Kian, disappeared while hunting near the edge of the Grove, fear turned the myth into reality.

The village sent a search party. They found no sign of him — not even footprints. The elders claimed he had been “taken by the forest,” their voices low and final. But Elira refused to believe it. Kian was all she had left after their parents died during the last frost. He couldn’t just vanish.

So, one misty morning, before the village stirred, Elira packed a satchel with bread, a flask of water, and her brother’s carved wooden flute. He had made it by hand from a birch tree and used to play tunes that made the crows caw and the cats dance. It was all she had of him now.

As she reached the edge of the Whispering Grove, a chill ran down her spine. The trees were taller than any she'd seen before, their bark gnarled like clenched fists, their branches curling like they were reaching for something… or someone.

She stepped inside.

Instantly, the world changed. The birds stopped singing. The wind vanished. The air thickened with the scent of damp earth and sweet, golden sap. It was too quiet — not silent, but expectant. Like the forest was holding its breath.

Elira pressed on. The path twisted unnaturally, but she didn’t question it. Strange shapes flickered in the corners of her eyes — shadows that melted into the trees. At one point, a silver fox with antlers darted across her path and vanished into the undergrowth. She blinked. Was it real? In the Whispering Grove, it was hard to tell.

After what felt like hours — or days — she arrived at a clearing lit by soft, amber light. At its center stood an enormous willow tree, its trunk wider than a cottage. Its leaves shimmered like moonlight, and its roots pulsed with energy. Beneath it sat a boy playing a wooden flute.

Elira’s breath caught.

“Kian?”

The boy stopped playing and looked up. It was him. Older. His hair longer, his face thinner, his eyes… distant, yet familiar.

“Elira,” he said, as if he had been expecting her. “You came.”

She ran to him, throwing her arms around him. He hugged her back, but there was a stillness to him. Something otherworldly.

“What happened to you?” she asked.

He smiled faintly. “The forest called me. I didn’t know at first… but it needed someone. Someone who could listen.”

He explained that the Grove was not just alive — it was aware. It remembered every creature that ever walked its soil. But it was old, and its memories were fading. The forest had chosen him to stay and help it remember. Every tree held stories in its rings. Every breeze whispered a tale. And his flute, his music, helped bring those memories back.

“I don’t belong outside anymore,” he said softly. “But you do.”

Tears welled up in Elira’s eyes. “Then I’ll stay too.”

“No,” Kian said, his voice gentle but firm. “The Grove needs me now. But you… you have to live. Carry its stories with you.”

Elira reached into her satchel and handed him his old flute. “Play it,” she said. “So the forest never forgets.”

He smiled, touched the flute to his lips, and began to play a tune — one she recognized from childhood. It wrapped around her like a hug, soft and warm. As the notes filled the air, the Grove seemed to respond. Leaves shimmered. Roots shifted. The wind stirred again.

Elira turned to leave. She didn’t look back, but she could feel the forest watching, grateful.

When she returned to the village, people whispered about her eyes — how they gleamed like amber, how her footsteps made grass grow. Her garden bloomed even in winter. She healed animals with her voice. Children claimed they could hear music when they stood near her window at night.

And sometimes, when the wind blew just right, it carried the sound of two flutes — one played in the world of men, the other deep within the Grove, keeping the memories alive.

Because the forest listens.

And it never forgets those who truly hear.

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Malik BILAL

Creative thinker. Passionate writer. Sharing real stories, deep thoughts, and honest words—one post at a time.

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