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The Whispering Blade

A blacksmith, a glowing sword, and the forgotten kingdom that calls through riddles

By NIAZ MuhammadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read
In the quiet village of Emberhollow, nestled between the Shadowridge mountains and endless whispering woods, lived a seventeen-year-old blacksmith named Eldon Vale. Orphaned as a child and raised by his aging mentor, Master Darnic, Eldon had known nothing but fire, steel, and the comforting clang of the hammer upon anvil. Life was simple. Predictable. Safe. Until the night the sword appeared. It was a crisp autumn evening. Eldon had been working late, shaping horseshoes and fixing old plows when a sudden gust of wind blew through the forge—though all the windows were shut. The fire flared blue, and the anvil sparked violently. There, resting atop the anvil as if it had always belonged, lay a sword. Its hilt was obsidian black, carved with ancient runes that shimmered faintly. The blade itself was unlike anything Eldon had ever seen—metal that seemed to absorb light, yet shimmer with an inner glow. And when he touched it, it hummed—not with vibration, but with voice. That night, long after the forge had gone cold, Eldon lay awake with the sword beside him. As the moon rose high, a soft whisper began to drift from the blade. > "The crown sleeps beneath roots of ash. One heart beats where none should be. The flame forgets, the steel remembers— What once was lost, shall rise in thee." Eldon jolted up, eyes wide. "Who’s there?" he asked, but only the sword answered—silent again. Night after night, the sword whispered more riddles, more cryptic verses that hinted at a lost kingdom, a sleeping king, a terrible war. Eldon scribbled them down, studying them by candlelight. Something ancient was speaking to him—something that knew him. Then came the fire. One evening, as villagers gathered for the harvest celebration, riders emerged from the forest, faces hidden behind iron masks. Bandits. Raiders. No warning. No mercy. Flames rose. Screams echoed through the square. Eldon ran toward the forge, heart pounding, unsure what he could do. Then he saw it—the sword, glowing like molten silver. It sang to him. > "Blood will burn, and truth will bleed, But only flame can plant the seed. Take the blade, or all shall fall— The forge has called, now heed the call." His hands trembled. He had never wielded a real weapon before. He was a smith, not a warrior. But something deep inside awakened. He grabbed the sword. The moment his fingers closed around the hilt, a surge of energy roared through him. His vision blurred. The whispers became a chorus—chanting, crying, calling. He stepped into the street. The nearest raider charged at him. With no training, Eldon should have been cut down in seconds. But the sword moved with him. Or perhaps, it moved for him. It parried, it struck, it burned. Every blow left trails of glowing light. The raiders, startled by the young blacksmith’s fury—and by the magic pulsing from the blade—began to flee. But not before one of them spoke. > "The Blade of Velmir has returned," the masked leader hissed. "The Flameborn has awakened. The Kingdom stirs…" Then he vanished into the smoke. The village smoldered behind Eldon. Ash drifted through the air like snow. People stared in awe—some in fear. He dropped the sword. It stopped glowing, now cool and still. But it still watched him. Later that night, as he sat alone in the forge, the sword whispered again. > "You are not only of Emberhollow. You are the last ember of Velmir, Forged in fire, born to reign. Seek the roots beneath the ash. The kingdom remembers you." Eldon looked at the blade. He thought of the kingdom in the riddles, of the magic in his blood he never knew existed. The sword had saved his village. But at what cost? If he kept it, he would no longer be just a blacksmith. He would become a flame in a war that had long burned out—until now. The blade pulsed gently, waiting. Eldon exhaled. The world had changed, and so had he. With trembling hands, he lifted the sword once more. This time, he did not fear it. He listened.

In the quiet village of Emberhollow, nestled between the Shadowridge mountains and endless whispering woods, lived a seventeen-year-old blacksmith named Eldon Vale. Orphaned as a child and raised by his aging mentor, Master Darnic, Eldon had known nothing but fire, steel, and the comforting clang of the hammer upon anvil.

Life was simple. Predictable. Safe.

Until the night the sword appeared.

It was a crisp autumn evening. Eldon had been working late, shaping horseshoes and fixing old plows when a sudden gust of wind blew through the forge—though all the windows were shut. The fire flared blue, and the anvil sparked violently.

There, resting atop the anvil as if it had always belonged, lay a sword.

Its hilt was obsidian black, carved with ancient runes that shimmered faintly. The blade itself was unlike anything Eldon had ever seen—metal that seemed to absorb light, yet shimmer with an inner glow. And when he touched it, it hummed—not with vibration, but with voice.

That night, long after the forge had gone cold, Eldon lay awake with the sword beside him. As the moon rose high, a soft whisper began to drift from the blade.

> "The crown sleeps beneath roots of ash.
One heart beats where none should be.
The flame forgets, the steel remembers—
What once was lost, shall rise in thee."



Eldon jolted up, eyes wide. "Who’s there?" he asked, but only the sword answered—silent again.

Night after night, the sword whispered more riddles, more cryptic verses that hinted at a lost kingdom, a sleeping king, a terrible war. Eldon scribbled them down, studying them by candlelight. Something ancient was speaking to him—something that knew him.

Then came the fire.

One evening, as villagers gathered for the harvest celebration, riders emerged from the forest, faces hidden behind iron masks. Bandits. Raiders. No warning. No mercy.

Flames rose. Screams echoed through the square. Eldon ran toward the forge, heart pounding, unsure what he could do.

Then he saw it—the sword, glowing like molten silver.

It sang to him.

> "Blood will burn, and truth will bleed,
But only flame can plant the seed.
Take the blade, or all shall fall—
The forge has called, now heed the call."



His hands trembled. He had never wielded a real weapon before. He was a smith, not a warrior.

But something deep inside awakened.

He grabbed the sword.

The moment his fingers closed around the hilt, a surge of energy roared through him. His vision blurred. The whispers became a chorus—chanting, crying, calling.

He stepped into the street. The nearest raider charged at him.

With no training, Eldon should have been cut down in seconds. But the sword moved with him. Or perhaps, it moved for him. It parried, it struck, it burned. Every blow left trails of glowing light. The raiders, startled by the young blacksmith’s fury—and by the magic pulsing from the blade—began to flee.

But not before one of them spoke.

> "The Blade of Velmir has returned," the masked leader hissed. "The Flameborn has awakened. The Kingdom stirs…"



Then he vanished into the smoke.

The village smoldered behind Eldon. Ash drifted through the air like snow. People stared in awe—some in fear.

He dropped the sword. It stopped glowing, now cool and still. But it still watched him.

Later that night, as he sat alone in the forge, the sword whispered again.

> "You are not only of Emberhollow.
You are the last ember of Velmir,
Forged in fire, born to reign.
Seek the roots beneath the ash.
The kingdom remembers you."



Eldon looked at the blade. He thought of the kingdom in the riddles, of the magic in his blood he never knew existed.

The sword had saved his village.

But at what cost?

If he kept it, he would no longer be just a blacksmith. He would become a flame in a war that had long burned out—until now.

The blade pulsed gently, waiting.

Eldon exhaled.

The world had changed, and so had he.

With trembling hands, he lifted the sword once more.

This time, he did not fear it.

He listened.

FantasyHistoricalShort Story

About the Creator

NIAZ Muhammad

Storyteller at heart, explorer by mind. I write about life, history, mystery, and moments that spark thought. Join me on a journey through words!

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  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    good warking

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