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The Weight of Wings

A Tale of Freedom and Farewell

By Shohel RanaPublished 7 months ago 3 min read
A Tale of Freedom and Farewell

A Tale of Freedom and Farewell

The desert stretched endless and bronze under the midday sun, its dunes carved by a wind that never rested. At the edge of a crumbling outpost, where rusted satellite dishes tilted like forgotten sentinels, stood Kael, a tinkerer with grease-stained hands and eyes that held too many questions. Beside him, perched on a makeshift stand, was Sable, a mechanical bird he’d built from scraps of old drones and salvaged wire. Its wings gleamed, each feather a sliver of polished metal, catching the light like a promise.

Kael had spent years in the outpost, alone save for the hum of his machines and the occasional trader passing through. The world beyond was a blur of stories—cities swallowed by sand, skies choked with ash. But Sable was his answer to it all, a creation meant to fly where he could not. Every night, he’d tweak its gears, whispering to it as if it could hear. “You’ll see it for me,” he’d say, adjusting a servo. “The world that’s left.”

Today was the day. Kael carried Sable to the highest dune, his boots sinking into the warm sand. The bird’s frame was light, but its weight felt heavier in his hands, as if it carried every sleepless night he’d poured into it. He set it down gently, checking the solar cells along its wings. They shimmered, drinking in the sun. Sable’s glass eyes, scavenged from a broken scope, glinted as if alive.

He knelt beside it, his fingers brushing the cool metal. “Go find it,” he said, his voice rough from disuse. “Find something worth seeing.” He flipped a switch, and Sable’s wings twitched, then hummed, a soft whir rising as they caught the air. For a moment, it hovered, unsteady, then shot upward, slicing through the sky like a blade.

Kael shielded his eyes, watching as Sable climbed higher, its silhouette shrinking against the vast blue. He’d programmed it to search—to seek out signs of life, green, anything that wasn’t sand. A tiny camera in its chest would record what it saw, beaming images back to the outpost’s cracked screen. But as it vanished over the horizon, a pang hit him, sharp and unfamiliar. Sable was gone, and he was still here.

Hours passed. Kael sat by the outpost’s receiver, the screen flickering with static. The desert was silent, save for the wind’s low moan. He sipped water from a dented canteen, his eyes fixed on the empty display. What had he expected? A forest? A city untouched by ruin? Or just proof that something, anything, still lived out there?

The screen blinked. A grainy image appeared—jagged cliffs, a ribbon of water glinting far below. Kael leaned forward, his breath catching. Sable was flying over a canyon, its wings steady. The image shifted: a patch of green, stubborn and small, clinging to the rock. Not a forest, not a city, but life. Kael’s chest tightened. He hadn’t realized how much he’d needed to see it.

Another image came, then another—more green, a cluster of stunted trees, their leaves trembling in the wind. Sable was finding something, piecing together a world Kael could only imagine. But the final image was different: a storm cloud, dark and heavy, swallowing the sky. Lightning flashed, and the screen went black.

Kael waited, the receiver silent. He called Sable’s signal, his fingers clumsy on the controls. Nothing. The storm had taken it, or its power had failed. He stepped outside, scanning the horizon, but the sky was clear here, mocking him with its emptiness. Sable was gone, its wings stilled somewhere far away.

He sat on the dune again, the sand cooling as the sun dipped low. The outpost felt quieter now, the hum of his machines hollow. He thought of Sable’s last images, that stubborn green against the rock. It wasn’t much, but it was enough to know the world hadn’t given up. He hadn’t either, not yet.

Kael stood, brushing sand from his hands. Tomorrow, he’d start again—new wires, new scraps, a new bird. He’d build until something flew far enough to bring him back a reason to keep going. The desert stretched on, but for the first time in years, it didn’t feel endless.

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Shohel Rana

As a professional article writer for Vocal Media, I craft engaging, high-quality content tailored to diverse audiences. My expertise ensures well-researched, compelling articles that inform, inspire, and captivate readers effectively.

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