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The Weeping Angels

You Blink, You Die

By mayta emilyPublished about a year ago 6 min read
Jack and Elena facing off against the weeping angel in the dark

Elena had always been drawn to the stories that echoed through her small town of Eldridge Hollow. Whispers of the Weeping Angels, statues that could move only when unobserved, filled the air like a chilling breeze. The townsfolk spoke of them in hushed tones, warning children not to blink in their presence. But for Elena, these tales were more than mere folklore; they were an invitation to adventure.

One crisp autumn evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon, casting long shadows across the town square, Elena and her best friend Jake decided to investigate the old statue that stood at the center of Eldridge Hollow. It was a weathered figure of a woman weeping, her face hidden behind delicate hands. Rumor had it that she was once a guardian of the town, but something sinister had transformed her into a Weeping Angel.

“Are you sure about this?” Jake asked, his voice tinged with skepticism. “What if it’s just an old statue?”

Elena shot him a determined look. “That’s exactly what we’re here to find out. Come on!”

As they approached the statue, an eerie silence enveloped them. The townspeople had long since retreated into their homes, leaving only the distant rustle of leaves in the wind. Elena felt a thrill of excitement mixed with fear as she stood before the stone figure.

“Do you think it can really move?” Jake asked, glancing around nervously.

“Only when you’re not looking,” Elena replied with a smirk. “So keep your eyes on it.”

They stood there for what felt like hours, staring at the statue. Just as Elena began to doubt her courage, she noticed something strange—the statue seemed to have shifted slightly. Her heart raced as she blinked rapidly, trying to convince herself it was just her imagination.

“Did you see that?” she whispered. Jake squinted at the statue. “See what? It’s just standing there.”

But Elena was sure of it. The statue’s hands had moved ever so slightly apart. She took a deep breath and stepped closer, her eyes never leaving its face.

Suddenly, a flicker of motion caught her eye from the corner of her vision—a shadow darting behind them. She turned quickly, but nothing was there.

“Did you hear that?” she asked, her voice trembling. Jake rolled his eyes but looked uneasy nonetheless. “It’s probably just a raccoon or something.”

But as they turned back to the statue, they gasped in unison. The Weeping Angel had moved closer—just inches away from where it had been standing moments before.

“Run!” Elena shouted, grabbing Jake’s arm and pulling him away from the square.

They sprinted down the cobblestone streets, hearts pounding in their chests. Behind them, they could almost feel the weight of unseen eyes watching their every move.

The next day, shaken but determined to uncover the truth, Elena sought out Mr. Thompson, the town’s historian. He was known for his extensive knowledge of Eldridge Hollow’s legends and lore.

As she entered his cluttered study filled with dusty books and ancient artifacts, Mr. Thompson looked up from his desk with weary eyes.

“Elena,” he said slowly, “what brings you here?”

“I need to know about the Weeping Angels,” she replied urgently. “They’re real! I saw one move!”

Mr. Thompson sighed heavily and leaned back in his chair. “The Weeping Angels are not just stories for children,” he warned gravely. “They are creatures that feed on time itself—when they touch you, they send you back into your own past.”

Elena’s breath caught in her throat. “But how do we stop them?”

“The only way to keep them at bay is to keep your eyes on them,” he said softly. “But remember—if you blink…you die.”

Determined to confront the threat head-on, Elena devised a plan with Jake’s reluctant support. They would gather mirrors from around town—anything reflective—to create a barrier against the Angels’ movements.

As night fell once more over Eldridge Hollow, they set out armed with mirrors and flashlights. They returned to the town square where shadows danced ominously under the moonlight.

“Elena,” Jake said nervously as they positioned mirrors around the statue, “what if this doesn’t work?”

“It has to work,” she replied firmly. “We can’t let anyone else disappear.”

With their makeshift reflective barrier in place, they took their positions behind the mirrors and focused intently on the Weeping Angel.

Minutes passed like hours as they stood in tense silence, watching for any sign of movement from the statue. Just when Elena thought they might be safe, she felt a sudden chill sweep through the air—a prelude to danger.

Without warning, one of the mirrors shattered under an unseen force. Glass shards scattered across the cobblestones as Elena and Jake jumped back in shock.

“Stay focused!” Elena shouted as she adjusted their remaining mirrors to reflect light toward the Angel.

The Weeping Angel began to twitch violently; its stone face contorted in rage as it strained against its own nature—desperate to move without being seen.

Suddenly, Jake gasped and pointed toward another shadow lurking at the edge of town—a second Angel had emerged from behind a tree!

“More than one!” he yelled in panic.

Elena’s heart raced as she realized they were surrounded; two Angels were now closing in on them from opposite sides.

With adrenaline coursing through her veins, Elena grabbed Jake’s arm and pulled him toward an alleyway that led deeper into town. They needed to find a way out before both Angels could close in on them completely.

“We need to find somewhere safe!” Jake panted as they ran.

Elena spotted an old church at the end of the street—the heavy wooden doors might provide some refuge against their pursuers. They dashed inside just as one of the Angels lunged forward from behind a nearby tree.

Inside the church was dimly lit by flickering candles; shadows danced along the walls like specters waiting for their moment to strike.

“Close your eyes!” Elena commanded as they pressed against a wall lined with stained glass windows reflecting eerie colors across their faces.

“What? Are you crazy?” Jake exclaimed.

“If we can’t see them…they can’t see us!” she insisted desperately.

They stood there in silence for what felt like an eternity until finally gathering enough courage to peek through their fingers at the door.

Just when they thought it was safe—the door creaked open slowly as one of the Angels entered silently like a wraith emerging from darkness. Its stone eyes locked onto them instantly; it knew they were there even without direct sight!

In that moment of terror-filled clarity, Elena remembered Mr. Thompson's words about using reflections against them—she grabbed a shard of glass from her pocket and held it up toward both Angels now converging on their position!

“Look! Look at yourselves!” she shouted desperately while keeping her own gaze fixed firmly on them through its reflection!

The Angels recoiled momentarily—confused by their own images—but then lunged forward again with renewed ferocity!

With no time left for hesitation or doubt now—they sprinted toward an open window at the back of church where moonlight spilled inside illuminating everything around!

As they leaped through into night air outside—Elena felt something cold brush past her shoulder—a fleeting touch that sent chills down her spine! She turned instinctively but found nothing there except darkness swallowing everything behind her!

Panting heavily under stars above—they stumbled into woods surrounding Eldridge Hollow where trees loomed tall like guardians watching over secrets hidden deep within shadows!

But even then—Elena couldn’t shake feeling watched—even after escaping those deadly statues—an unsettling sensation lingered like whispers echoing through branches rustling gently overhead…

“What if they’re still out there?” Jake murmured nervously glancing back toward town illuminated faintly by distant lights flickering ominously ahead…

Elena swallowed hard—her heart racing faster than ever before! “We’ll figure this out together,” she promised—but deep down uncertainty gnawed away at her resolve…

As dawn began breaking over horizon—a new day awaited—but questions remained unanswered—and dangers still lurked beyond sight…

And somewhere within those woods—the Weeping Angels waited patiently for someone else who dared blink…

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mayta emily

Hi! I'm a curious explorer of science, earth, politics, and fiction. I delve into scientific discoveries, complex ecosystems, and political dynamics, while also weaving speculative tales that challenge perspectives and spark imagination.

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