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The Vampire's Bite

A Cold Night's Warning

By zulfi buxPublished about a year ago 4 min read

Darkwood had always been a town cloaked in shadows, and everyone knew the warnings about the forest. Whispers of creatures lurking in the dark and strange occurrences had become part of the town’s folklore. Elara, seventeen and bold, never believed in such things. The stories of curses and shadows seemed like nonsense to her. So, one cold, misty night, she found herself wandering through the town’s narrow streets alone, drawn inexplicably toward the edge of the woods.

She noticed how the fog seemed thicker, swallowing each streetlamp as she passed, casting an eerie glow across the path. Just as she decided to turn back, a figure emerged from the mist, standing still in the shadows. He was tall, with skin so pale it almost glowed, and his gaze was intense, almost hypnotic. His eyes pulled her in, dark and consuming, as though they could see into her very soul.

“Good evening, Elara,” he said, his voice low and smooth.

Elara’s heart raced. How did he know her name? She tried to speak but could only manage a shaky whisper. “Do I… know you?”

He smiled, and for a moment, she glimpsed teeth sharper than they should have been. “Not yet. But you will.”

As he reached out, his fingers brushed against her neck, leaving a prickling sensation that made her gasp. But as quickly as he appeared, he vanished back into the mist, leaving her alone and shivering.

The next morning, Elara woke with a dull ache near her collarbone. She rubbed her neck and froze when she saw her reflection. Just beneath her jaw were two small, reddish puncture wounds, barely visible but unmistakably real. She touched them gently, recalling the strange man from the night before. Had she imagined him? The memory felt more like a dream, yet the marks on her neck told her otherwise. She spent the day feeling strangely different, almost as though a veil had lifted from the world around her. Her senses felt heightened—sounds were sharper, lights brighter, and she noticed details she had never seen before.

An odd hunger gnawed at her, too, one that no food seemed to satisfy. It wasn’t long before she found herself at the forest’s edge again, the place where she’d encountered him. Deep down, she knew he would return. That night, as the fog settled over the town, he appeared, waiting, his eyes still dark and mesmerizing. She felt a powerful pull toward him, something she couldn’t resist, like a moth drawn to a flame.

“You feel it, don’t you?” he murmured, his voice a quiet promise. His hand reached out, gently tracing the marks on her neck. “The hunger, the change. You’ve been marked, Elara. The bite has started something in you that cannot be undone.”

She felt herself shiver, part fear, part fascination. “What’s happening to me?”

“You’re caught between worlds,” he replied. “Between your life as it was and a life in the shadows, a life with me. But you have a choice. You can either embrace what you’re becoming or fight it, though the thirst will haunt you forever.”

Elara struggled with his words. The thought of giving up her life, her family, and friends sent a pang of sorrow through her. But there was also a thrilling allure, a promise of power and mystery, a life beyond anything she’d ever known.

“I… I don’t know if I can give everything up,” she said, her voice barely a whisper, torn between her humanity and the strange new instincts awakening within her.

He nodded as though he understood her hesitation. “The change will come if you allow it, Elara. But once you choose, there is no turning back.”

In the following days, Elara found herself slipping further from her old life. Her friends noticed her growing distance, her pallor, the dark shadows under her eyes. She avoided everyone, fearing the strange hunger that twisted inside her, a hunger she was terrified of yet struggled to resist. One evening, she found herself staring at her best friend, Mia, feeling an overwhelming urge she barely managed to suppress. The warmth of Mia’s skin, the heartbeat pulsing just beneath her flesh, called to Elara in a way that terrified her.

Panicked, Elara ran to the forest, where she knew he’d be waiting. She found him standing among the trees, his expression calm and knowing. She looked up at him, tears in her eyes, exhausted from the struggle. “I can’t keep living like this. I can’t resist it anymore.”

He placed a hand on her shoulder, his touch cool and comforting. “Then surrender, Elara. Embrace who you are meant to be.”

She closed her eyes, taking a deep breath, and let go of her last hold on her old life. She felt darkness envelop her, filling the empty spaces inside her. When she looked up, the world seemed different, more vivid, her senses keener than ever. She knew she had crossed a line, that she was no longer fully human. But she was something more now, something powerful and eternal.

From that night on, the townsfolk spoke of Elara in hushed tones. Some claimed to have seen her in the shadows of the forest, an ethereal beauty with dark, piercing eyes. Her story became a legend, a cautionary tale for anyone who dared to venture too close to Darkwood’s edge.

Fan FictionHorrorMicrofictionMysteryShort Story

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