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The Unwanted Package:

Some secrets are too heavy to stay submerged forever.

By The Writer...A_AwanPublished 23 days ago 3 min read
The Unwanted Package:
Photo by Mathias Reding on Unsplash

The package arrived on a Tuesday—a day so painfully ordinary that it felt scripted. It sat motionless on my porch, wrapped in thick brown paper and bound with a coarse twine that looked as if it belonged to a different century. There was no return address, no courier stamp, and no postage marking. There was only my name, Elias Thorne, written in a cramped, shaky hand that felt hauntingly familiar.

I carried it inside, the weight shifting oddly in my grip. It felt like a collection of stones, or perhaps jagged glass. Setting it on my kitchen table, I stared at it for a long time. In an age of digital tracking and instant notifications, an anonymous delivery isn’t a surprise; it is a threat.

My mind raced through the possibilities. A late birthday gift? A clerical mistake? Or perhaps something from them? I hadn’t spoken to anyone from my hometown in ten years. I had spent a decade meticulously constructing a wall between the man I am now and the boy I used to be. I thought the distance was enough to keep the past at bay.

With a kitchen knife, I sliced through the twine. The sound of the paper tearing felt deafening in the silence of my apartment. Inside the box, nestled within mounds of dried, yellowed newspaper, sat a single, heavy object: a vintage brass Polaroid camera.

My breath hitched. My heart didn't just beat; it thrashed against my ribs like a caged animal. I knew this camera. It was the exact model Sarah had used the night of the bonfire—the night the woods swallowed her whole and never gave her back.

I pulled the camera out. It was ice-cold to the touch, smelling of damp earth and old machine oil. Stuck to the bottom was a single, undeveloped Polaroid film. My fingers trembled as I realized the camera was still loaded. There was exactly one exposure left.

Logic screamed at me to throw the box into the incinerator. But curiosity is a predatory thing; it feeds on fear until there is nothing left. I took a deep breath and pressed the shutter button.

The mechanical whir of the camera was a jagged scream in the quiet room. The film ejected slowly—a small, grey-black square of plastic. I watched it, my vision blurring, as the chemicals began to react. Faint, ghostly shapes began to emerge from the darkness of the frame.

First, the background appeared: the jagged, dark silhouette of the Pine Barrens. Then, the foreground: a figure standing near the edge of the quarry. As the image sharpened, the blood drained from my face, leaving me cold.

It was a photograph of me. Not the man I am today, but the eighteen-year-old version of me, standing over the ledge of the water, gripping a heavy stone. But that wasn’t the detail that made my skin crawl. The part that froze my soul was the reflection in the dark water below. Standing directly behind my younger self was a girl with long, matted hair, her pale hand reaching out toward my heel.

Sarah.

The photo shouldn’t exist. No one else was there that night. I had made absolutely sure of it. I had lived my life believing that the secret of what happened at the quarry had died with her.

Then, I heard it. A soft, muffled thump from the hallway.

I spun around, my heart hammering against my chest. Another package had been slid through the mail slot. This one was smaller—a thin, white envelope. I tore it open with frantic, sweating fingers. Inside was a single, rusted key—the key to the old locker we used to share at the local library.

The realization hit me like a physical blow. Someone knew. Someone had been watching for ten long years, waiting for the exact moment I felt safe before pulling the rug out from under my existence.

I looked back at the first package. Underneath the layers of old newspaper, there was something else. I dug deeper and found a small glass vial filled with murky, stagnant water and a single strand of long, dark hair. A note was taped to the glass.

"The earth does not forget, Elias. And the water does not keep what is not its own. See you at the quarry at midnight. Or the next package goes to the police."

The "Unwanted Package" wasn't just an object; it was a summons. As the clock on the wall ticked toward 11:00 PM, I realized that the past isn't a place you leave behind. It is a debt that eventually comes to collect with interest.

I grabbed my coat, the brass camera still heavy in my pocket. The hunter had finally become the hunted, and the silence of the night was about to be broken by a truth I could no longer hide.

MysteryPsychologicalthrillerHorror

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The Writer...A_Awan

16‑year‑old Ayesha, high school student and storyteller. Passionate about suspense, emotions, and life lessons...

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