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The Town That Forgets

A Girl Who Remembers in a World That Cannot

By Nadeem Shah Published 6 months ago 5 min read

editer Name : Nadeem Shah

Every night, the town of Elowen forgets. Like clockwork, as the moon rises past the chapel bell tower, a hush falls over the crooked streets and ivy-covered homes. By dawn, memories are wiped clean—names, events, heartbreaks, joy, shame—gone like chalk in the rain.

Except for one person.

Seventeen-year-old Mara Langley remembers everything.

Mara wasn’t always the only one. Her mother used to remember, too. She told Mara that their minds were different—immune to the forgetting. She said it was a blessing. But Mara learned better. Remembering in a town that forgets is not a gift. It’s a burden.

The first time she realized she was alone was the morning after her mother died.

The townspeople stood at her door with puzzled expressions, wondering why she was crying, why she wouldn’t answer their greetings, why she wore black.

When she whispered, “My mother died last night,” they looked at her with pity and confusion.

Then the mayor said, “You poor thing. You must have had a terrible dream.”

And just like that, they turned and walked away.

That was three years ago.

Each morning, Mara journals everything she remembers in a locked red leather notebook. She hides it beneath a loose floorboard under her bed. Names, arguments, secret kisses, broken promises, cruel mistakes—she documents it all. It’s the only truth in a world of forgotten lies.

And she’s discovered a lot. Too much.

Like how Mr. Welling from the bakery steals money from the town donation jar every Thursday. Or that pretty Mrs. Holloway is having an affair with the butcher’s son. Or that young Simon Rooks confessed to setting fire to the greenhouse, thinking no one would ever remember.

They were all right.

No one does.

Except Mara.

Every day, the town reboots.

The people of Elowen wake as if life is brand new. They wear smiles like masks and greet each other with cheerful curiosity, as if every introduction is the first. Mara plays along, of course. She’s learned how to reintroduce herself with a warm voice and steady smile.

But inside, the weight of memory grows heavier. She sees the cracks in their joy. The fear behind their eyes. Deep down, even if they don’t know what it is, they feel it—something is not right.

One Thursday morning, Mara finds a letter in her coat pocket.

There is no name, just a single line written in hurried ink:

“I remember too.”

Her heart stutters. She reads it again. Could it be a prank? Her mother once warned her—if anyone else remembered, they might be dangerous. People driven mad by remembering what they weren’t meant to hold.

She clutches the note all day, searching faces for recognition. But everyone smiles and waves like they always do.

Except one boy.

He sits alone by the fountain with a book he never reads. He doesn’t smile. He doesn’t wave. And when she walks past, he looks at her like he knows her.

Like he remembers.

His name is Elias Grey. Seventeen, quiet, homeschooled. She recalls him from her journals. He’s never done anything worth noting, really. Always on the periphery.

Until now.

She waits until dusk, then approaches him in the fading light.

“You wrote this?” she asks, showing him the note.

He nods, expressionless. “I’ve been watching you. You remember, don’t you?”

Mara hesitates. No one has ever said that to her before. She nods, slowly.

His eyes darken. “We’re not supposed to remember.”

“I know.”

They sit in silence for a long time.

Finally, he whispers, “Do you know why this happens?”

“No. My mother never told me. She just said it started before she was born.”

“Well…” Elias looks around cautiously. “I think I know. I found something.”

That night, he takes her to the outskirts of town, past the forest and into a rusted bunker half-buried in ivy. Inside are flickering lights, dusty panels, and a computer terminal with a glowing screen.

“I come here every night. This place resets the town.”

“What?”

He shows her a file labeled “Neuro-Wipe Alpha Protocol: Elowen.001.”

It details a decades-old experiment—neural gas released into the air, resetting long-term memory nightly, under the guise of peacekeeping and emotional stability. Originally designed to treat trauma after some unnamed catastrophe. The town had agreed, or maybe they were forced. The document didn’t say.

They were being controlled. Programmed to forget.

“But why are we immune?” Mara asks.

“I don’t know. Maybe a mutation. Maybe something our parents did.”

Mara’s hands tremble. “What happens if we stop it?”

Elias looks at her, dead serious. “Then everyone remembers.”

They debate for days. Elias wants to shut it down.

Mara is torn.

She thinks of little Emily Dorr who forgets her abusive father each day and plays with butterflies like nothing happened. Of Ruth at the tailor’s who forgets she’s widowed and still hums love songs while sewing. Of how her own grief would be erased—finally.

But then she thinks of justice. Of truth. Of people finally knowing who they are, what they’ve done. Of facing their demons. Of healing the right way, not through forgetting, but remembering and growing.

And so, on the seventh night, they decide.

They wait until midnight.

The system is password-locked, but Elias has cracked the code over months. They deactivate the neuro-gas sequence and shut down the auto-wipe function. For the first time in decades, the memory fog won’t come.

Mara doesn’t sleep that night. She lies awake, heart pounding.

Morning comes with no mist. No forgetting.

Screams echo through the town.

People stagger from their homes, clutching their heads, sobbing, yelling, panicking. It’s like the town is waking up from a coma, suddenly remembering everything—betrayals, deaths, abuse, mistakes, love lost. The truth floods in like a broken dam.

Mara runs to the square. Faces twist in recognition, horror, shame.

Mr. Welling sobs in the street. Mrs. Holloway hides behind a shutter. Simon Rooks runs, terrified, from his mother’s stare.

Some collapse in guilt. Others seek forgiveness. A few lash out in confusion.

But one by one, they look to Mara.

"You knew," someone whispers.

She nods. No use denying it.

"Why did you do this to us?"

Her voice is steady, though her throat burns.

“Because you deserve the truth. Even when it hurts.”

Weeks pass.

The town is changed forever. The forgetting never returns. There are fights. Therapy. Families torn apart, and slowly, some stitched back together. People leave. Others arrive. The town breathes with pain and promise.

And Mara finally closes her red journal for good.

She doesn’t need to write it all down anymore.

Now, everyone remembers.

And for the first time in her life…

She’s not alone.

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About the Creator

Nadeem Shah

Storyteller of real emotions. I write about love, heartbreak, healing, and everything in between. My words come from lived moments and quiet reflections. Welcome to the world behind my smile — where every line holds a truth.

— Nadeem Shah

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  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    nice keep it up

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