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the Timekeeper’s Promise

A tale of fate, courage, and the clock that could change destiny

By Iazaz hussainPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

In the heart of Eldoria, a city where time was measured not by hours but by heartbeats, there lived a young inventor named Kael. He was known throughout the city for his strange machines—devices that hummed, ticked, and shimmered with blue light. But his most ambitious creation was hidden deep in his workshop beneath the clocktower: The Timekeeper’s Heart — a mechanical clock said to control the flow of time itself.

Kael had built it not for fame or fortune, but to save his sister, Lira, who had fallen into an endless sleep after a mysterious storm struck their home two years ago. Doctors had given up, priests had prayed in vain, and so Kael turned to the only force left — time.

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The Forbidden Mechanism

The Timekeeper’s Heart wasn’t like ordinary clocks. It ran not on gears alone, but on memories. Each turn of its golden hand required a memory to be burned away from the user’s mind — a sacrifice of what once was, to change what could be.

Kael had already given up much: his memories of childhood, his laughter, even his mother’s face. But Lira’s life was worth every loss. On the night of the eclipse, when the stars aligned in the shape of the Serpent’s Eye, Kael prepared to turn the dial one last time — to reverse the storm, to undo her fate.

Just as he placed his trembling hand on the lever, the door creaked open.

“Kael,” said a voice — soft yet commanding.

He turned to see Eldrin, the city’s High Warden of Time, cloaked in silver robes, eyes glowing faintly with the shimmer of the Clockstone embedded in his chest.

“You know the law,” Eldrin said. “No one may alter the flow of time. The balance must hold.”

“I don’t care about your balance,” Kael said fiercely. “She’s my sister. I’ll give anything.”

Eldrin sighed. “Even your soul?”

Without hesitation, Kael nodded.

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The Shift Begins

Eldrin stepped closer, his gaze softening. “Then may you understand what you are truly asking.”

He touched the clock’s glass, and it pulsed like a living heart. The gears began to spin backward, faster and faster, until the air shimmered. Kael turned the lever, and the world split into light.

The walls of his workshop dissolved. Time itself folded like pages of a book, and Kael was thrown into the past — the day of the storm.

Rain lashed against the windows. Lightning split the sky. He saw himself — a younger version — trying to shut the door as Lira ran outside to save their cat from the rain.

Kael screamed, “No! Don’t go!”

But his voice echoed without sound. He was only a shadow in his own past. Desperate, he reached out — and the Timekeeper’s Heart glowed from within his chest, a second pulse beside his own.

The rain froze midair.

Kael realized the power was his now. He stepped forward, time bending with each breath. He reached Lira, lifted her, and pulled her away just as lightning struck.

The world went white.

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The Price of Time

When Kael opened his eyes again, he was back in his workshop. The Timekeeper’s Heart sat silent on the table, its glow gone.

For a moment, he thought he’d failed. But then he heard a voice — faint, sleepy.

“Brother?”

Lira stood by the doorway, alive, confused, smiling.

Kael’s heart leapt. He ran to her, holding her tight. “You’re safe,” he whispered, tears mixing with laughter.

But as he looked at her face, he felt a cold emptiness bloom in his mind.

“Who… are you?” he asked weakly.

Lira froze. “It’s me. Lira.”

He smiled sadly, stepping back. “Lira… that’s a beautiful name.”

The memories of her — every laugh, every word, every shared dream — had been erased. In saving her life, he had sacrificed his memory of her.

Eldrin appeared once more in the doorway, watching quietly.

“The balance holds,” he said. “Time takes what it is owed.”

Kael turned to him, eyes glassy. “Was it worth it?”

Eldrin nodded. “Only you can decide that.”

The Legacy of the Timekeeper

Years later, Lira would grow to become Eldoria’s finest inventor, continuing her brother’s work though he could no longer remember her. She often visited his grave at the base of the clocktower — the very place where the Timekeeper’s Heart was sealed forever.

Above the inscription on his tomb were the words:

> “He gave up time to give her life — a brother’s love beyond eternity.”

And each year, as the eclipse returned, the clocktower would glow faintly — as if Kael’s heart still beat within the gears of time, keeping his promise to protect her, even beyond memory.

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