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The Ticking Hourglass

A Moment in Time That Could Rewrite History

By Karenshy JohnybyePublished about a year ago 4 min read

Eliot had always prided himself on being a skilled time traveler, capable of navigating the intricate web of history without leaving a trace. The rules were simple: observe, never interfere. A well-timed intervention could unravel centuries of progress, causing untold damage to the fabric of time. But as Eliot stepped into the year 1912, the world around him began to feel strangely different.

The air was thick with anticipation, and the distant hum of the city felt oddly loud in his ears. He was in New York, just a few days before the infamous sinking of the Titanic. It was a pivotal moment in history—one that he had studied thoroughly, knowing every detail. Yet, something felt wrong. The timeline seemed... off. It was as though the very essence of history was holding its breath, waiting for something to happen.

Eliot had been trained to avoid making any impact on major historical events, but as he stood at the docks, watching the grand ship prepare for its fateful voyage, a deep unease crept into his chest. The whispers of history echoed in his mind, but there was something else—something new, something unseen. He couldn’t put his finger on it, but he knew that this time, he couldn’t just observe.

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The next day, Eliot found himself standing at the edge of a bustling dock, surrounded by passengers boarding the Titanic. As he blended into the crowd, a sharp voice cut through his thoughts.

“Excuse me, sir! Are you lost?”

Eliot turned, startled, to find a woman standing in front of him, a concerned look on her face. She was young, her dark hair tied in an elegant bun, her eyes wide with curiosity. It was clear she didn’t belong to the usual crowd of wealthy first-class passengers.

“No, I’m not lost,” Eliot replied, trying to keep his tone casual. “Just admiring the ship.”

She gave him a skeptical look but nodded. “I’ve never seen anything like it. I’m on my way to London, and I hear this ship is unsinkable.”

Eliot froze. The word “unsinkable” echoed in his mind, a haunting reminder of the disaster to come. But he couldn’t let her know anything. He had to maintain the timeline. But there was something in her eyes that tugged at him, a sense of fate, as though she were somehow connected to this event in a way he couldn’t understand.

“I wouldn’t be so sure about that,” Eliot said softly, his voice low. “The sea is unpredictable.”

The woman gave him an odd look but smiled, seemingly unaffected by his cryptic words. “Perhaps. But I suppose we’ll find out soon enough.”

Eliot’s heart pounded as she turned to board the ship. He watched her disappear into the crowd, and for the first time in his life, he felt the weight of history pressing down on him. He couldn’t stop what was coming, could he? He had been taught to preserve the past, not meddle with it, but this woman—this moment—felt like an unspoken challenge.

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As the Titanic sailed into the night, Eliot found himself torn. He had been observing, collecting data, and carefully avoiding any involvement in the historical events surrounding him. But now, as the ship moved farther into the Atlantic, he couldn’t shake the feeling that something was amiss. His training told him to leave, to return to his own time before the inevitable disaster struck. Yet, something inside him urged him to stay, to watch, to understand why he had been drawn to this moment in time.

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The ship's fate was sealed. Eliot knew the events that would unfold: the iceberg, the panic, the sinking. But he couldn’t bear the thought of simply watching it happen. As the night wore on, he began to question the very nature of his existence as a time traveler. Was he just a passive observer? Or was there a reason he had been brought here, to this precise moment?

At midnight, Eliot’s worst fears were realized. The ship struck the iceberg, and chaos erupted on board. Screams echoed through the halls, and the sound of rushing water filled the air. Eliot was paralyzed with indecision. He knew what would happen next—the lifeboats would be launched, the rich would survive, and the poor would perish. But this was no longer just history. This was real, and he was here, a part of it.

Eliot found himself on the deck, unable to ignore the fear in the eyes of the passengers. People were clamoring for lifeboats, some trying to escape the freezing waters, while others were frozen in shock. He searched the crowd frantically, his mind racing.

Then, he saw her.

The woman he had spoken to earlier was standing near the edge of the deck, her eyes filled with terror. The chaos around her was overwhelming, but she wasn’t moving. Eliot’s heart raced. He knew he couldn’t intervene, but seeing her there—helpless, scared—he couldn’t stand by.

In a split second, his training was forgotten. He rushed toward her, his instincts overriding the rules. He grabbed her hand, pulling her toward one of the lifeboats. Her eyes widened in disbelief, and for a moment, she seemed to hesitate.

“You have to come with me!” Eliot urged, his voice trembling.

“Why?” she asked, her voice cracking. “Why are you helping me?”

“I don’t know,” Eliot said, breathless. “But I can’t just let you die.”

As they reached the lifeboat, the woman’s face softened, a look of gratitude mixed with confusion. She climbed aboard, her eyes never leaving Eliot as the boat was lowered into the freezing sea.

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The next morning, Eliot stood alone on the deck of the sinking ship, the icy waters rising around him. He knew what he had done was wrong, that he had altered the course of history. But as he watched the woman’s lifeboat drift into the distance, he couldn’t bring himself to regret his decision.

The Titanic was going down, and he had done what he could to save at least one life.

As the water overtook him, Eliot closed his eyes, wondering if his actions had irrevocably changed the future.

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About the Creator

Karenshy Johnybye

A writer fascinated by fantasy, mystery, and human emotions. I craft stories that blend the real and the magical, exploring challenges and life lessons in unique, captivating worlds.

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