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The Test

A Test of Magic Gone Awry

By Kent BrindleyPublished 3 years ago 1 min read
The Test
Photo by Cristian Escobar on Unsplash

It was the final day of my training in the mystic arts. Family, friends, and elders from all around Mystica had come out to support this momentous day. I had been rather proud of my progress in the magic arts and was ready to demonstrate for the masses as my final trial. My day, however, was interrupted by a meddlesome rival named Helbreth...

Helbreth stood pinned to a Tangle Tree now. The masses had assembled around us in a tight circle. My final public test had changed: "Punish or Spare." I aimed my brother's hand-me-down brass wand...

Fantasy

About the Creator

Kent Brindley

Smalltown guy from Southwest Michigan

Lifelong aspiring author here; complete with a few self-published works always looking for more.

https://www.instagram.com/kmoney_gv08/

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  • Kim Loostrom3 years ago

    Really compelling, great set up with a cool twist!

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