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The Summit

A Short Horror Story by Audrey Rose

By Audrey RosePublished about a year ago 5 min read

The Summit

They could see the summit in the distance, its peak teasingly close yet undeniably challenging. The group paused, contemplating the best approach to reach their destination. It seemed close enough to touch, but their path was fraught with obstacles and narrow trails that would be difficult to navigate as a unit.

"We might have to split up," one of them suggested, breaking the silence. They all knew that staying together provided safety and companionship, but the terrain demanded a different strategy.

As they assessed the situation, the idea of separation became increasingly appealing. By dividing into smaller groups, they could move more swiftly and efficiently, each taking a slightly different route to converge at the summit. The plan was risky, but the prize—a breathtaking view and a sense of accomplishment—beckoned them forward.

With a mixture of determination and apprehension, they agreed to the plan. They carefully plotted their routes, ensuring everyone had the necessary supplies and knew the rendezvous point at the top.

"See you at the summit," one said, offering a reassuring smile. They all nodded in agreement, their spirits buoyed by the shared goal and the promise of reunion.

As the groups set off, the atmosphere shifted. The air grew heavier, thick with an unsettling stillness, as if the mountain itself was holding its breath. Shadows danced between the trees, and the sunlight, once bright and inviting, began to wane, casting long, eerie silhouettes on the ground.

The first group, consisting of three members, took the left trail, which meandered through a dense thicket. Their laughter echoed through the trees, but each sound felt swallowed by the oppressive silence surrounding them. As they ascended, the path twisted and turned, growing steeper, and the foliage thickened around them.

Suddenly, one of them, Sarah, stumbled upon something peculiar—a series of strange markings carved into a nearby tree. They were jagged lines, forming an intricate pattern that seemed to writhe under her gaze. "Hey, look at this!" she called out, but when her friends approached, the markings felt less like art and more like a warning.

"Maybe we should keep moving," Jake suggested, his voice shaking slightly. The unease crept in, but Sarah dismissed it, eager to explore further.

Meanwhile, in the second group, Mark and Lisa ventured up the right trail. Their path seemed less daunting, but a thick fog rolled in, obscuring their view. The trees warped and twisted, their gnarled branches reaching out like skeletal hands. As they pressed on, Mark felt an inexplicable sensation, as if something unseen was trailing them just out of sight.

"Do you hear that?" Lisa whispered, her eyes wide. Mark paused, straining his ears. A faint whispering floated through the air, like voices carried on the wind. It was unintelligible, but the tone was urgent, almost desperate.

"Maybe it's just the wind," he replied, though doubt gnawed at him. They quickened their pace, the whispers growing louder, echoing their own thoughts, twisting them into something sinister.

Back with the first group, Sarah's curiosity was piqued as she led them deeper into the thicket. The path became increasingly overgrown, the trees closing in around them. As they pressed on, it felt as though the forest was shifting, rearranging itself to keep them trapped within its grasp. The laughter faded, replaced by an unsettling quiet.

Suddenly, a scream shattered the stillness—a blood-curdling cry that echoed through the trees. It was followed by a sickening silence. Sarah's heart raced as she glanced at her friends, panic etched on their faces. "We need to find out what that was!" she insisted, but fear gripped them.

They moved cautiously towards the sound, the air thick with dread. Each snap of a twig underfoot felt like a countdown, inching them closer to an unseen terror. As they neared a clearing, the fog rolled in thick and heavy, swallowing the last remnants of daylight.

In the other group, Mark and Lisa had also reached a clearing, but it was eerily quiet. The whispers had faded, replaced by an unsettling stillness. "Where's everyone else?" Mark wondered aloud, glancing around, but the trees offered no answers.

As the fog thickened, shadows loomed larger, and the air turned frigid. Then, out of the corner of his eye, Mark caught movement—a dark figure darting through the trees. His heart raced as he pointed it out to Lisa, but when they turned to look, there was nothing but the barren landscape.

"Maybe we should head back," Lisa said, her voice trembling. But before they could retrace their steps, a chilling laugh erupted from the shadows, echoing the fear that had settled in their hearts.

Meanwhile, Sarah's group stumbled into the clearing, just as the sound of laughter faded. The sight before them was horrifying—an old, dilapidated cabin stood alone, its windows shattered, dark shapes flitting behind the glass. The air was thick with the stench of decay, and an overwhelming sense of dread washed over them.

Realizing they were not alone, Sarah turned to her friends, but they were already retreating, panic-stricken, their instincts kicking in. Before they could escape, the door of the cabin creaked open, and a figure emerged, cloaked in shadows, its face obscured by a dark hood.

"Welcome," it whispered, the voice slithering through the air like a serpent. "I've been waiting for you."

The group froze, their hearts pounding as the figure stepped closer, the fog wrapping around them like a cage.

Sarah's breath hitched in her throat as the figure extended a hand, revealing long, bony fingers that seemed to beckon her forward. The air grew thick with an unsettling energy, both magnetic and repulsive.

"Come closer," it urged, the shadows swirling around it as if alive.

Her friends exchanged terrified glances, their instincts screaming at them to run. But something about the figure’s presence held Sarah in place, an unexplainable pull drawing her towards the unknown. She took a hesitant step forward, her heart racing with a mix of fear and curiosity.

In an instant, the figure materialized before Sarah, extending a hand to touch her, and she disintegrated into a cloud of dust.

The forest fell eerily silent, the echoes of terrified screams swallowed by the night. One by one, her friends were claimed by the shadows, their desperate cries fading into the darkness. They were drawn into the depths of an ancient terror, leaving only the whisper of the wind as a reminder of their existence.

Horror

About the Creator

Audrey Rose

I believe that the best horror isn't just about scares—it's about tapping into deeper fears and telling stories that resonate long after the final page is turned.

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  • Camillia Campbellabout a year ago

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