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**The Stranger in the Rain**

**"The Kindness of a Stranger"**

By AbbasPublished about a year ago 3 min read

It was one of those dreary afternoons in Islamabad, where the sky was a heavy shade of gray, and the air hung thick with humidity. I had spent the day running errands, and by the time I left the last store, the rain had begun to fall. It wasn’t the gentle drizzle that sometimes cooled the city; this was a torrential downpour that blurred the world into indistinct shapes.

I dashed to my car, only to realize, with a sinking feeling, that I had locked the keys inside. The realization hit me like a wave, and I stood there, soaked, helpless, and frustrated. The rain drenched me as I tried in vain to see if I could find a way in. My phone, of course, was inside the car, and there I was—no way to call for help, no way to go home.

As I stood there in a growing puddle of my own despair, a figure approached me. He was an older man, maybe in his sixties, with silver hair and kind eyes.

“Need some help?” he asked, his voice carrying warmth and understanding. I looked at him, uncertain of how to respond. He was a stranger, after all, but his presence was reassuring.

“I locked my keys inside,” I admitted, feeling embarrassed. “And my phone too.”

He smiled gently, as if he had seen this happen a hundred times before. “Well, let’s see what we can do,” he said, crouching down to inspect the car. I watched as he examined the situation, his eyes narrowing in concentration. “Do you have a wire hanger or something similar?”

I blinked, surprised. Who carried wire hangers these days? But then I remembered—my grandmother, who lived in a nearby village, had given me an old toolkit that was still in the trunk. I nodded and pointed. “There’s a toolkit in the trunk, but…”

The man chuckled softly. “Don’t worry, I’ve got this.” With an almost magical dexterity, he managed to wedge his umbrella handle under the trunk latch and popped it open. I marveled at his skill as he rummaged through the toolkit, pulling out a thin wire.

He straightened the wire, creating a small hook at the end, and then, with the precision of a surgeon, slipped it through the car window’s weatherstripping. I watched in awe as he maneuvered the wire, his fingers deftly working to reach the lock. It took a few tries, but finally, there was a soft click, and the car door swung open.

I couldn’t believe it. Relief flooded through me, and I turned to thank him, but before I could say anything, he simply smiled and handed me my keys. “There you go. You should probably get a spare key made,” he suggested, his tone light.

“I will,” I promised, still in shock at how easily he had solved my problem. “Thank you so much. I don’t know what I would have done without you.”

The man tipped his umbrella slightly, giving me a small nod. “Happy to help. Just remember—kindness goes a long way. Pay it forward when you can.” And with that, he turned and walked away, disappearing into the rain as quickly as he had appeared.

I stood there for a moment, holding my keys, feeling an unexpected sense of gratitude. This stranger had helped me in a moment of need, asking for nothing in return. I never saw him again, but his simple act of kindness stayed with me, reminding me that even in the most trying times, there are always good people willing to help.

Holiday

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Abbas

Versatile writer skilled in both tale & stories. Captivate readers with engaging content & immersive narratives. Passionate about informing, inspiring, & entertaining through words.

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