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The Silent Witness

A detective and a mute artist vs. the Shadow Syndicate that owns the City

By Md. Muzammal Rahman PirPublished 7 months ago 6 min read
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Rain lashed against the windows of Senator Gregory Harrow’s office, the sound like a thousand whispered secrets. Detective Elias Vorne stepped inside, his sharp gray eyes missing nothing—the too-perfect placement of the gun in the senator’s hand, the lack of powder burns, the faint scent of cologne that didn’t belong to the victim.

This wasn’t suicide.

Officer Ruiz, a rookie with nervous hands, gestured to the corner. "She found him."

A woman sat hunched in a chair, her dark hair plastered to her face, her fingers gripping a notepad like a lifeline. Her eyes—wide, terrified—locked onto Elias.

"Did she see anything?" Elias asked.

Ruiz handed him a crumpled note:

"He didn’t kill himself. The man in the black coat shot him."

Elias crouched in front of her. "What’s your name?"

She hesitated, then wrote:

Lila Caine. I clean here.

"Lila," Elias said softly, "can you describe the man?"

Her pencil moved in quick, sure strokes—a tall figure in a long coat, his face obscured, but with a distinct symbol on his lapel: a serpent coiled around a dagger.

Elias’s blood turned to ice.

The Black Serpent Syndicate.

A secret cabal rumored to control the city. And Lila was the only witness.

Elias had seen that symbol before.

Ten years ago.

A warehouse fire. His partner, Jake, screaming as flames consumed him—just seconds after showing Elias a file on the Syndicate. The official report called it an accident. Elias knew better.

He’d spent a decade digging, but the Syndicate buried their trails deep.

Now, staring at Lila’s sketch, the past clawed at him.

"You’re safe with me," he told her.

She wrote:

"No one is safe."

Elias took Lila to a safe house, but within hours, armed men stormed in.

They knew the location.

Elias barely got Lila out alive. As they fled, his phone buzzed—a message from Captain Draven:

"Bring her in, Elias. It’s protocol."

But Elias had told no one where they were.

Someone inside the police was Syndicate.

Lila hadn’t always been mute.

Age 7: A car accident killed her parents. She saw the driver—a man with a serpent ring. When she tried to tell, he pressed a finger to his lips. "Speak, and you die."

That night, her voice vanished.

Now, sketching in the safe house, she showed Elias another drawing—a younger version of herself, watching the same symbol on a man’s lapel.

"They’ve been watching me for years," she wrote.

The fluorescent lights of the subway station flickered like a failing heartbeat as Elias pulled Lila into the shadows. The distant echo of boots on concrete told him what he already knew—they were being hunted.

"They’re here," he mouthed.

Lila’s fingers trembled as she scribbled in her notebook:

"How many?"

Elias peered around the corner. Three men in dark suits moved with military precision, their eyes scanning the platform. The glint of metal beneath their jackets confirmed they were armed.

"Three. Syndicate." Elias tapped his wrist where the serpent-and-dagger tattoo would be.

Lila’s breath hitched. She flipped to an old sketch—a subway tunnel map, hand-drawn in perfect detail. She circled a maintenance hatch near the end of the platform.

Elias’s eyes narrowed. "You know these tunnels?"

She nodded sharply.

A train screeched into the station. The Syndicate men turned toward the sound.

"Now!" Elias grabbed Lila’s wrist and they bolted.

The Chase Begins

Bullets sparked off the tiles as they dove into the train. The doors hissed shut just as a Syndicate operative lunged for them. Elias threw his weight against the door, crushing the man’s fingers. A scream was cut short as the train lurched forward.

But they weren’t safe.

Two more Syndicate men had made it onboard.

Lila dragged Elias through the packed car, her small frame slipping between passengers effortlessly. Behind them, the enforcers shoved people aside, their cold eyes locked onto their targets.

The Leap Between Cars

At the rear of the train, Elias kicked open the emergency door. Wind and noise roared into the compartment. The tunnel walls blurred past, inches from death.

Lila’s grip on his arm was iron-tight as Elias gauged the distance to the next car.

"We jump on three!" he yelled over the din.

"NO TIME!" Lila’s eyes went wide.

One of the Syndicate men raised his gun—

Elias didn’t wait. He shoved Lila across the gap just as the gun fired. The bullet grazed his shoulder, but he barely felt it. He leaped after her, crashing onto the next car’s platform as another shot shattered the window above them.

The Trap

Lila was already moving, yanking open the hatch to the undercarriage. She pointed down.

Elias understood. "They won’t expect it."

They dropped beneath the train, clinging to the maintenance ladder as the wheels screamed beneath them. The Syndicate men rushed past overhead, searching the cars.

Lila’s hand shot out, pointing to a narrow service tunnel approaching fast.

"Jump!" Elias commanded.

They let go—

The world spun as they hit the gravel siding, rolling hard. Elias’s vision swam, but Lila was already pulling him up. Behind them, the train roared away, their hunters still aboard.

For now, they were alive.

But the Syndicate never gave up.

The safe house was compromised. The police were hunting them. There was only one place left to go—up.

Elias and Lila scaled the fire escape of the old Gazette building, the highest point in the district. The wind howled around them, carrying the scent of rain and gunpowder.

Below, black cars screeched to a halt. Doors slammed. They were out of time.

Lila’s hands flew across her sketchpad:

"Now what?"

Elias checked his revolver. Two bullets left. "We end this."

The Enemy Revealed

The rooftop door burst open.

Chief Inspector Aldric stepped into the moonlight, his service pistol steady in his grip. The serpent-and-dagger pin on his lapel gleamed.

"Elias," he sighed, like a disappointed father. "You were always my best. Why throw it away for her?"

Elias’s jaw tightened. "You killed Jake. You killed the senator. How many others?"

Aldric smiled. "Only the ones who mattered."

Lila moved first—a knife flashed in her hand, hurled with startling precision. Aldric twisted, but the blade still sliced his arm. He snarled and fired.

Elias tackled Lila behind an AC unit as bullets chewed the metal.

"Stay down!" he ordered.

But Lila wasn’t listening. She grabbed Elias’s revolver, her eyes burning with something feral. Before he could stop her, she rolled into the open and fired.

The shot went wide, but it forced Aldric back. Elias lunged, catching the older man in a brutal grapple. They crashed against the rooftop ledge, Aldric’s gun skittering away.

Aldric kneed Elias in the ribs, then gripped his throat. "You should’ve joined us," he hissed. "We could’ve owned this city."

Elias’s vision darkened—until a sketchbook slammed into Aldric’s face.

Lila stood there, breathing hard, her hands clenched around the book like a weapon.

It was all the opening Elias needed.

He drove his elbow into Aldric’s temple, then flipped him toward the edge. The chief inspector clawed at the air, his legs dangling over the 20-story drop.

"Jake says hello," Elias whispered—and let go.

Aldric’s scream was swallowed by the night.

Six Months Later

The headlines called it "The Syndicate Massacre."

With Aldric’s death and Lila’s evidence, the dominoes fell fast. Mayors, judges, even the police commissioner—all exposed. The city breathed easier.

But Elias still woke some nights, reaching for his gun.

Lila’s New Life

The sketch that changed everything hung in the precinct lobby—a detailed portrait of Aldric, his serpent pin clear as day. Beneath it, a plaque:

"The Silent Witness Speaks."

Lila sat at her new desk in the Forensic Art Unit, her hands flying across fresh paper. She still didn’t speak, but now—

"Caine!" A detective tossed her a case file. "We need a composite. Can you—?"

She was already sketching.

Elias’s Promise

Elias found her at dusk, watching the city from the rooftop where it ended.

"You okay?" he asked.

She handed him a note:

"They’re still out there. The ones we didn’t catch."

Elias lit a cigarette, the flame reflecting in his tired eyes. "Then we keep hunting."

Lila smiled—small, fierce—and pulled out her sketchbook.

Somewhere in the city, a serpent stirred.

But now, it had two predators.

HorrorMysteryShort StorythrillerClassical

About the Creator

Md. Muzammal Rahman Pir

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