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The Silent Visitor

A story of unexpected surprises and silent struggles

By Rohitha LankaPublished 9 months ago 1 min read

One day, a man jumped out of a box..

Suddenly, the woman's husband came home..

The woman put on makeup and powdered her all over and told her to stand in the living room and not to move....

The man who came into the house saw her and asked what was this. The woman said, "Oh, when I went shopping this afternoon, I found a beautiful picture, so it's the real thing, right?"

The man said, "Hmm, beautiful, beautiful." He stopped talking and washed his face, went to sleep with the woman after dinner.

...

Aru was still standing there, not even moving.. He was drunk..

..

Around two in the morning, the man got up, made a glass of milk, bought a packet of biscuits, went to the man who was completely naked, and said this..

"Here, drink this milk and sit down..

I too, until one day, stood there, not even breathing, in a different house, bathing in flour... There was no one to give me a sip of water.

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  • Sera9 months ago

    Funny thing,husband has same experience!!!

  • Nikita Angel9 months ago

    Good

  • Sera9 months ago

    So funny and best written

  • Marie381Uk 9 months ago

    Pic looks painfully heated 🏆🖌️📕💙💙💙💙

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