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The Serpent's Heart

After her father's disappearance, a woman travels to a mysterious island to find the hidden truth and uncovers an ancient cult's secrets. Will she find the truth, or will she become another victim of the island's dark past?

By BGPublished 7 months ago 5 min read

My father traveled to the most remote corners of the Earth, searching for lost cities, forgotten tribes, and ancient myths. But his last journey was different. It was a search for something he had lost long ago—a piece of himself. He had spent his entire life looking for a mythical island, a place that was said to hold the secrets of the universe. He called it the "Serpent's Heart."

He never returned. After a month of silence, I received a small package in the mail. It was his last will and testament, a map, and a small, leather-bound journal. The journal was filled with his notes, sketches, and piece of riddles. He had left me a puzzle, a treasure hunt that would lead me to the Serpent's Heart.

I packed my bags and set off on a journey to the last known coordinates on his map only to find what happened to my father on that mysterious island. After a long flight and a bumpy boat ride, I saw it. A small, mist-shrouded island, shrouded in mystery and silence. The air felt heavy, and a strange sense of unease settled in my stomach.

As I stepped onto the shore, I noticed a strange symbol carved into a large rock. It was a serpent, its tail in its mouth, swallowing itself. A note was tucked into the crevice of the rock, it was from my father.

“The first step on your journey, my dearest Maya, is to find the Serpent's Eye. It is a place of great power, a place where the veil between worlds is thin”.

I looked at the map, my heart pounding in my chest. I had to find the Serpent's Eye. The first riddle was a simple one: “I am a mouth that speaks without a voice, a stream that flows without a sound. I am the entrance to a forgotten world. What am I?”

I walked through the dense jungle, the air thick with humidity and the smell of damp earth. After hours of walking, I stumbled upon a waterfall. The water flowed down a huge cliff, its roar echoing through the trees. It was the mouth that spoke without a voice. I walked behind the waterfall, my hand on the cold, damp stone. There it was, a small cave hidden behind the flowing water. This was the Serpent's Eye.

As I entered the cave, I saw another note from my father, and a second riddle: “I am a thousand eyes that watch over the land, a thousand voices that speak in the wind. I am the guardian of the Serpent's Heart. What am I?”

I walked deeper into the cave, my heart pounding in my chest. I found myself in a large chamber, with a huge opening in the ceiling. The stars were shining, a thousand eyes watching me from above. The wind howled through the opening, a thousand voices speaking in a language I couldn’t understand. This was the guardian of the Serpent's Heart. I was in a natural observatory. A constellation, one that I had never seen before was perfectly aligned in the middle of the opening. It was a serpent, its eyes staring at me.

As I looked at the constellation, the serpent's eyes seemed to glow. Suddenly, the light went down onto a large stone in the center of the chamber, illuminating a third note and a final riddle: “I am the one who holds the world in my hands, the one who gives life and takes it away. I am the Serpent's heart. What am I?”

I sat on the stone, my mind racing. I looked at the walls of the cave, covered in ancient drawings. They depicted a story of a king's troops, a powerful army that had conquered the island. They were searching for a source of power, a source that would make them invincible. The drawings showed them entering the cave, their faces filled with greed and ambition. The last drawing showed them all dead, their bodies lying on the ground, their faces frozen in terror. The serpent had defeated them.

I looked at the constellation again, at the serpent's eyes. It was a snake, but it wasn't just a snake. It was the Serpent's Heart, a mythical source of power that would bring life and take it away. It was a curse and a blessing. My father had written in his journal that it was a source of great power, but it came at a terrible price.

I heard a low rumble, the walls of the cave began to shake. I looked at the stone in front of me, at the note from my father. I knew the answer. The serpent was not a snake, it was a star, a dying star. It was the heart of the universe, and it was dying. My father had come to the island to find it, to understand its power, and to save it.

He had left me the clues, not just to find the Serpent's Heart, but to understand its power, its purpose. The king's troops had tried to steal its power, and it had consumed them. My father had come to save it, to give it his life. He had sacrificed himself for the Serpent's Heart.

Tears streamed down my face. I had come to the island to find my father, to understand his last journey, but I had found so much more. I had found his legacy, his sacrifice, and his love. The cave started to collapse, the ceiling crumbling, the walls shaking. I knew I had to leave, but I couldn't. I had to stay. I had to tell his story. The Serpent's Heart was a story of a father who had given his life for his daughter. A story of a daughter who had found her father, not in flesh, but in spirit. I wasn't scared anymore. I felt his presence, his love, his sacrifice. He was the Serpent's Heart.

He was the one who held the world in his hands, the one who gave life and took it away. He was the one who had given me life, and he had taken it away from himself to give it to the world. As the rocks started to fall, I whispered his name, "Dad," my voice a broken echo in the darkness. I had found him, and I knew he was with me, in the Serpent's Heart, forever.

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BG

Hi, I am budding writer with a passion for crafting tales of mystery, horror, and love.

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