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The Secret Hidden in an Old Garden

Some mysteries are buried in places where no one dares to look… until one heart dares to find them.

By The Pen of Farooq Published 6 months ago 3 min read

In a small, quiet town called Raven’s Hollow, there was an ancient, forgotten garden. It sat behind a crumbling brick wall, its gate twisted with ivy and age. No one had stepped inside for over fifty years. The townspeople whispered that the garden was cursed and that terrible things happened to anyone who entered.

But for Lina, a curious twelve-year-old with bright eyes and an even brighter imagination, the old garden was not something to fear. It was a mystery waiting to be solved.

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Lina had grown up hearing strange tales about the garden. They said a girl named Elara vanished there decades ago, and since then, eerie lights flickered at night, and soft voices sang forgotten songs. Some even claimed the trees whispered names in the wind. Most of the town stayed far away, but Lina couldn’t stop thinking about it.

Every time she passed by the rusted gate, she felt something calling her. It wasn’t fear. It was a feeling of longing — as if the garden itself was waiting for her.


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One cool autumn afternoon, while the wind danced through the leaves, Lina made a decision. She grabbed her flashlight, a notebook, and a small snack, then slipped through a gap in the wall. The air inside the garden felt heavy, thick with the scent of earth, wildflowers, and something ancient. Vines crept over statues, and flowers bloomed in impossible colors.

But what caught Lina’s attention was a faded stone bench in the center of the garden — and the old, leather-bound book lying on it.


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The book was covered in dust, its edges cracked and worn. With trembling hands, Lina opened it. Inside were pages filled with neat, looping handwriting. It was a diary. And on the first page was a name: Elara Whitmore. The girl who had vanished.

Lina’s heart raced as she turned the pages. The diary spoke of secret hiding places, forgotten love, strange sounds, and a treasure buried deep within the garden. Elara wrote about how the garden changed in the evenings, how it glowed under moonlight, and how a doorway appeared if you knew where to look.

The final entry was incomplete, ending with a hurried, broken sentence:
"I hear them calling. The light… it’s near… under the old oak…"


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Following the diary’s clues, Lina moved through the overgrown paths until she found an ancient oak tree. Its trunk was massive, its branches twisting toward the sky. Beneath it, the earth was soft, almost as if it had been disturbed.

Without hesitation, Lina knelt down and started digging with her hands. The soil crumbled easily, and soon her fingers struck something solid — a small wooden box.

Inside the box was a delicate silver locket, a yellowed photograph of a young girl with kind, familiar eyes, and a letter addressed "To the one who finds this."


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The letter revealed Elara’s secret: she hadn’t vanished. She had discovered something magical in the garden, a shimmering doorway to another world, a place of peace and endless beauty. Fearing others would destroy it or misuse its power, she chose to leave the letter and disappear forever.

The locket, the letter said, would reveal the doorway when worn at sunset.


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As evening arrived, Lina placed the locket around her neck. A gentle warmth spread through her chest, and a shimmer appeared between two willow trees nearby. It was like a curtain of light, softly glowing, rippling like water. The garden, too, seemed to come alive — flowers swayed though there was no wind, and distant bells chimed softly.

Lina stepped forward, her heart pounding. She reached out her hand toward the light, and as her fingertips brushed against it, the world seemed to pause.

For a moment, she imagined seeing Elara’s face smiling back at her from the other side.


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Just then, a sudden voice behind her called out, "Lina! Where are you?" It was her grandmother. The old woman’s voice, usually so calm, was filled with worry. Lina turned back, torn between the strange shimmering portal and the familiar voice of home.

Her hand lingered in the glow for a moment longer. A feeling of warmth, of welcome, of endless possibility washed over her.

Would she stay? Would she go through? Or would she leave the garden with its secret, like Elara once did?


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And there the story leaves you, dear reader.

Would you have stepped through that shimmering light?
Would you leave the world you knew to chase a hidden magic no one else believed in?
Or would you turn back, forever wondering what lay beyond?

Sometimes, the biggest secrets lie in the places others fear to look.
And sometimes, it takes a heart like yours to find them.

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About the Creator

The Pen of Farooq

Just a soul with a pen, writing what hearts feel but lips can't say. I write truth, pain, healing, and the moments in between. Through every word, I hope to echo something real. Welcome to the world of The Pen of Farooq.

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Nice work

Very well written. Keep up the good work!

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  1. Excellent storytelling

    Original narrative & well developed characters

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