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THE SCARY HOTEL

THE SPIRIT OF HOTEL

By Asif AliPublished 3 years ago 3 min read

The old hotel stood at the edge of a desolate town, its towering structure casting long shadows over the deserted streets. The townsfolk spoke of it in hushed whispers, warning of the eerie happenings that occurred within its walls. Despite the warnings, curious souls seeking adventure and thrill dared to spend a night in the infamous hotel. It was on one such dark and stormy night that a group of friends decided to test their bravery and check-in.

The lobby was dimly lit, the flickering chandeliers casting an eerie glow on the faded wallpaper. The creaking floors echoed with each step as the friends approached the reception desk, where a solitary figure awaited them. The concierge, dressed in a black suit, had a hauntingly vacant stare.

"Welcome," he said in a voice that sent shivers down their spines. "Room 666 is ready for you."

Uneasy, yet fueled by their desire for adventure, the friends made their way to the room. As the door creaked open, they were met with an icy gust of wind that seemed to whisper chilling secrets in their ears. The room was cold, the air heavy with an otherworldly presence.

As the clock struck midnight, strange occurrences began to unfold. Shadows danced along the walls, taking eerie shapes that seemed to mock the guests. Objects moved inexplicably, while whispers echoed through the corridors. Each friend felt a growing sense of unease, but none were willing to admit their fear.

They decided to explore the hotel, their footsteps echoing through the empty hallways. The flickering lights cast eerie shadows on the peeling wallpaper, making the hotel's dark history feel palpable. The grand ballroom, once filled with laughter and music, now stood silent and haunting.

Suddenly, a bloodcurdling scream pierced the silence, freezing the group in their tracks. Their hearts pounded in their chests as they raced toward the source of the sound. They found one of their friends standing near a dusty mirror, eyes wide with terror.

She pointed at the mirror, her voice trembling. "There was... someone behind me," she whispered.

They peered into the mirror but saw nothing except their own frightened reflections. The hotel seemed to be playing tricks on their minds, toying with their deepest fears.

Determined to find answers, they delved further into the hotel's dark secrets. They discovered a hidden room in the basement, filled with dusty books and ancient artifacts. The room seemed untouched for centuries, its secrets waiting to be unraveled.

As they pored over the books, a heavy silence settled in the air. Suddenly, the room was filled with an otherworldly presence. A gust of wind extinguished the flickering candles, plunging them into darkness. Terrified, they fumbled for their flashlights, casting beams of light across the room.

In the dim glow, they saw a figure emerge from the shadows. It was a ghostly apparition, dressed in old-fashioned attire. Its eyes glowed with an ethereal light as it floated towards them, its voice barely a whisper.

"I am the spirit of the hotel," it spoke, its voice filled with sorrow. "Trapped for eternity, seeking redemption."

The friends listened in awe as the spirit revealed the tragic tale of a long-forgotten murder that occurred within the hotel's walls. The spirit pleaded for their help in setting its soul free, promising that once released, the hotel would find peace.

Filled with a newfound courage, the friends set out to uncover the truth behind the murder, digging through archives and old newspaper clippings. With each clue they uncovered, the spirit grew stronger, its ethereal form fading away.

Finally, they discovered the identity of the murderer, long deceased but still haunting the hotel. Armed with this knowledge, they performed a ritual, releasing the spirit from its torment.

As the first rays of sunlight peeked through the windows, the friends felt a profound sense of relief. The hotel was quiet, the air calm and serene. The dark history that once plagued the establishment seemed to dissipate.

They left the hotel, forever changed by their experience. They had faced their deepest fears, confronted the supernatural, and brought peace to a restless spirit. The hotel, once feared by all, became a place of healing and redemption—a reminder that even in the darkest of nights, there is always a glimmer of light.

Horror

About the Creator

Asif Ali

i like to create fictions;articles, and poetry.With a vivid imagination and a penchant for creating relatable characters, I shall capture the hearts of readers around the world.

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  • Novel Allen3 years ago

    A well written story. So glad they made it out,

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