The Room That Waited
A story about memory that refused to stay buried
Lucian wakes to a door that was never there. Some rooms are built by memory, others by regret. But this one — this one remembers him first.
They say rooms remember what we forget. Dust is only the body of time, collecting itself. Every house keeps a secret architecture — doors that lead nowhere, walls that hum with things unsaid. And sometimes, when silence grows patient enough, it builds its own threshold.
Lucian didn’t build the door.
He knew every corner of his apartment — every hinge that creaked, every hairline crack that spidered down the wall like frozen lightning. Yet that morning, a door waited at the end of the hallway where there had never been one before. It stood in the narrow space between the kitchen and his bedroom, painted the same faded ivory as the walls, as if it had always been there and simply decided to make itself known.
The air around it felt wrong — thick, cold, slightly metallic, like a room holding its breath. Light from the living room fell short of reaching the frame, stopping just shy, as though afraid to touch it.
He stared at it for a long while, coffee cooling in his hand. His reflection in the darkened TV screen behind him didn’t move.
“Clever,” he murmured.
When he finally approached, the floorboards creaked once — not under his feet, but somewhere beyond the door.
The handle was brass, dulled with age, the metal worn smooth where countless hands had turned it. He ran a finger along its edge. Warm.
On instinct, he stepped back. He could smell it now — not rot, not mold, but the scent of forgotten things: old paper, extinguished candles, something faintly sweet beneath the dust. It reminded him of cathedrals left to the spiders, of air that had learned to sing only to itself.
He thought of his reflection — the other Lucian, the one who now lived in the light. Had he opened this door first? Was this what crossing meant?
He touched the handle again. The brass pulsed once beneath his hand — a heartbeat, faint and deliberate.
“Ah,” he said softly. “So you’ve been waiting.”
The door opened with a sigh, as though relieved to be remembered.
The air inside the room was thick — not with dust, but with stillness. It wasn’t dark exactly, but the light there felt older, the way candlelight remembers flame long after it’s gone out.
Lucian hesitated at the threshold, one hand braced against the doorframe. The wood felt soft, almost bruised beneath his palm. He inhaled once, slow, testing the air as if scent might tell him which century this space belonged to.
It smelled of wax and stone, the faint sweetness of wilted flowers. The air was cool and damp, like breath left waiting too long.
The first thing he noticed was the silence — not the absence of sound, but the presence of listening.
Something in the room was aware of him.
He stepped forward. The floor responded softly beneath his shoes, not creaking, but sighing, as though he were walking on old parchment. A narrow corridor extended inward, its walls lined with mirrors cloaked in linen sheets. They swayed faintly as he passed, stirred by air that didn’t exist.
At the end of the corridor, the space widened — a square room no larger than a chapel. Furniture waited beneath shrouds: a small table, an armchair, what might once have been a piano. Dust hung suspended in the air, unfallen.
He circled the table slowly. Upon it lay a single framed photograph facedown, the glass spidered with cracks. He didn’t touch it yet.
There was a faint hum somewhere behind him — familiar, rhythmic. He turned, but nothing moved. The sound came from within the walls. It took him a moment to realize what it was: breathing.
Not loud, not human. The kind of breath light makes when it passes through water.
Lucian’s chest tightened. “So,” he said quietly, “you built yourself a house.”
He crossed to the piano and brushed a hand across the sheet draped over it. The dust stirred and fell like ash. Beneath, the instrument gleamed faintly — black lacquer, unblemished. Not a mark of age on it.
He lifted the cover. The keys were pristine ivory, though they should have yellowed. When he pressed one, it sang a note soft and pure, too resonant for a dead instrument. The sound lingered, folding itself through the air until the room vibrated with it.
The mirrors trembled.
Beneath the linen, faint movement.
He pulled the nearest cloth aside.
His reflection stood behind the glass.
Not the usual mirrored Lucian — this one was younger. His hair lighter, his expression uncertain, almost hopeful. He looked at Lucian the way one looks at a memory they’re not sure they belong to.
Lucian exhaled slowly, the note from the piano still ringing between them. “How far back do you go?”
The younger reflection pressed a hand against the glass. For a moment, Lucian thought he felt warmth radiating through it — not the cold, static energy of the mirrored world, but something human.
He didn’t move. The air shifted. The other Lucian mouthed something.
A single word.
Stay.
Lucian shook his head. “You’ve had enough of me,” he whispered. “And I’ve had enough of waiting.”
He turned toward the table. The photograph still lay facedown. He reached for it, but before his fingers met the frame, the door behind him closed. Not slammed — simply decided.
The air folded in on itself. The breathing stopped.
Every sheeted mirror shivered once, the cloth rippling like muscle under skin.
And then the voice — soft, not echoing, coming from every corner of the room and none.
You left the light on.
Lucian turned toward the door. It hadn’t vanished, only retreated — as though distance could exist in places built from memory. The brass handle glowed faintly, pulse by pulse, like a second heartbeat.
He took one step. The floor shifted underfoot — not creaked, not cracked, but breathed. The sound was soft and damp, like lungs filling after a long silence. He froze, not out of fear but recognition.
He had heard that sound before — the slow inhale of something waking, something remembering the taste of light.
His reflection in the nearest mirror blinked. The younger version of himself tilted his head and smiled — that small, human gesture he had practiced for centuries until it became almost convincing.
“You left the light on,” the voice said again, gentler this time. The sound didn’t echo. It folded inward, like breath trapped in a jar.
Lucian looked up. The mirrors no longer held still images; each reflected a different version of him. A hundred lifetimes lined the walls — scholar, soldier, wanderer, lover — each standing in their own light, caught between stillness and motion.
In one mirror, he was covered in soot and ash, in another, dressed in a 19th-century coat still slick with rain. In several, his reflection stared back as if newly awake. None of them moved in sync.
He pressed a hand to his chest. The air in the room responded, tightening. “You shouldn’t be here,” he whispered.
The younger reflection stepped closer until his face pressed against the glass. His expression wasn’t cruel — it was concerned.
Someone had to stay.
The words appeared, faint and fogged, scrawled across the inside of the mirror like condensation.
Lucian’s throat went dry. “Stay where?”
In the remembering.
The piano key he had touched earlier sank on its own, humming a note of dissonant warmth. Another key joined it, then another, until the room filled with the sound of chords building on air alone. The dust swirled upward. The light pulsed with the music.
He turned in a slow circle. Each reflection now moved, slightly out of rhythm — gestures delayed, smiles misaligned. Their mouths formed words he couldn’t hear but somehow understood: every version asking the same thing.
When do we get to leave?
Lucian’s hand fell to his side. The photograph on the table was glowing faintly now, the cracks in the glass filling with light that seeped outward like veins of molten gold.
He reached for it again, this time turning it over.
The image was of a room — this room — perfectly preserved, but empty. The piano gleamed. The mirrors hung uncovered. The door was closed.
Except, in the photograph, a figure stood where he now stood, looking directly at the camera. Himself. Or not quite. The man in the image had a shadow that faced the wrong direction.
Lucian’s vision wavered. He staggered back, clutching the photograph. The light in the room changed — grew denser, heavier, full of movement. The reflections began to hum.
And in that vibration came a realization: this room wasn’t part of his home. It was part of his memory.
Every mirror held a moment he had chosen to forget — every version of himself he had stepped away from. When the reflection gained autonomy, when the light began to live, this room had formed to contain what was left behind.
He looked toward the door. The brass handle no longer glowed; it shimmered like the edge of a coin sinking underwater.
“Let me out,” he said quietly.
The reflections spoke in unison, their voices folding into the sound of the piano, into the breathing walls.
You are out. We are what’s left.
Lucian stood perfectly still. The photograph’s glow faded in his hand, leaving only warmth — not comforting warmth, but the feverish heat of something burning slowly.
The air around him quivered. The younger Lucian — the one nearest the door — placed his palm against the glass. The gesture was simple, almost compassionate.
Lucian hesitated, then mirrored it. The surface between them softened, rippling once like the surface of water disturbed by touch.
For a single moment, the reflection’s warmth spilled through — not the heat of blood, but the ghost of sunlight filtered through centuries of glass. It soaked into his skin, and he felt it moving inward, threading itself through memory and marrow alike.
The piano stopped. The air fell still.
He looked down at his hand — the faint shimmer fading, a thin line of light tracing each vein.
When he looked back up, the mirrors were empty.
Only the one nearest the door remained alive, holding a single reflection — not him, not the younger one, but the light itself, pulsing slow and steady, as though the room had chosen to keep breathing on its own.
He took a step forward, but the floor didn’t move. The door didn’t open. The room had decided its purpose again: to keep what was forgotten from leaving.
Lucian exhaled, soft, almost relieved. “So this is what I left behind.”
From somewhere deep within the walls came an answering whisper — faint, half formed, the echo of his own voice.
No. This is what stayed.
Some doors don’t stay closed; they wait until you’re tired enough to forget why you shut them.
If you ever wake to a new hallway in your home — a wall that hums, a doorknob that feels warm — don’t open it out of curiosity. Curiosity is how rooms remember their names.
Just turn off the light. Step back. Let it wait for someone else.
About the Creator
Rebecca A Hyde Gonzales
I love to write. I have a deep love for words and language; a budding philologist (a late bloomer according to my father). I have been fascinated with the construction of sentences and how meaning is derived from the order of words.
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