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The Quiet Love

Echoes of the Unspoken

By Taslim UllahPublished 7 months ago 3 min read

The sun dipped low behind the curtain, casting long golden shadows across the living room. The clock ticked on the wall, rhythmic and patient, like the heartbeat of a home that had endured much and asked for little. Fatima folded the freshly laundered clothes while Irfan sat across the room, reading the newspaper in silence. No music played. No laughter echoed. Yet, something far deeper than noise filled the room — something sacred, something unspoken.

They had been married for thirty-two years.

To outsiders, their marriage may have seemed dull — quiet dinners, short conversations, no extravagant displays of affection. No anniversary trips posted on social media. But their love was not forged in the fires of grand gestures. It was shaped slowly, like a potter molding clay, steady and quiet.

It began with an arranged marriage in a village neither had left before their wedding. She had barely turned twenty-one, shy and unsure, with eyes that never met his during the ceremony. He was twenty-eight, responsible and reserved, a man who had spent most of his life supporting his widowed mother and two younger siblings.

The early days were awkward. Words came slow and formal, like strangers playing polite roles. She cooked meals not knowing his favorites; he ate them all without complaint. They lived like two travelers in the same train compartment — close in space, distant in connection.

But over time, the quiet became their language.

He never said "I love you," but he came home every night with her favorite mangoes in season. She never called him "jaan" or "meri mohabbat," but she stayed up through his cough-filled nights, brewing warm tea and rubbing his back until the fever subsided.

There was a time, early in their marriage, when she cried in the bathroom, overwhelmed by loneliness. Irfan never said anything, but she noticed how he began waking up earlier, making her tea before she even left the bed. No words — just gestures that held meaning.

Then came the children.

Two boys and a girl. The house filled with cries, laughter, broken toys, and the occasional chaos of school mornings. Fatima became the heart of the home — always moving, always doing. Irfan worked longer hours, and the silence between them grew — but not in a bitter way. It was the silence of effort, of duty, of giving your all so others could have more.

As the children grew and the house emptied again, the silence returned — but this time, it was warm.

Now, in the quiet twilight of their lives, they no longer needed words to fill the spaces between them. She would look at the way he refilled her water jug without asking and smile. He’d nod slightly when she adjusted the curtain to block the harsh sunlight from his eyes. It was a kind of conversation only time could teach.

There were no weekend getaways. No passionate poems. No candlelit dinners.

But there were daily rituals — small things that spoke volumes.

Like the way he left the newspaper folded with her crossword untouched. Or how she cut his toast diagonally because she remembered, from a passing remark twenty years ago, that he liked it that way. Or the quiet walks to the local park, where they’d sit on the bench watching birds without speaking.

One winter evening, their daughter, now married and living abroad, called and asked, "Ammi, do you and Abbu ever talk about love?"

Fatima chuckled, glancing at Irfan, who was busy fixing the heater. "Beta," she said, "We talk about it every day — just not with words."

Their love was not loud. It didn’t dance in public or shout in poems. It whispered through years, through routines, through presence. It stayed during arguments, survived financial hardships, and healed during illnesses.

And perhaps the most powerful part of it all — it never needed to be explained.

That night, after dinner, Irfan brought her a cup of warm milk without her asking, just like he had done for years. She took it, their fingers brushing briefly, and whispered a thank you.

He nodded.

And in that quiet exchange — in that moment of unremarkable simplicity — lived a love louder than any sonnet.

Horror

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Taslim Ullah

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