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The Quiet House on Elm Street

The perfect routines of a house where something went unsaid.

By The Night Writer 🌙 Published about 4 hours ago • 5 min read

"The clock has struck three, the coffee is cold, and the shadows are beginning to speak. Welcome back to the desk of The Night Writer, where the stories are brewed in the dark."

The morning sun, what little of it broke through the perpetual haze that hung over Elm Street, dappled across the breakfast table. The ceramic mugs, chipped from years of enthusiastic use, steamed gently. The smell of burnt toast, a comforting constant in this house, mingled with the faint, sweet scent of maple syrup.

​“Another beautiful day,” Martha said, pushing a plate of perfectly crisp bacon towards David. Her voice was light, a melody composed of habit and effort.

​David nodded, his eyes fixed on the newspaper. “Indeed. Forecast says clear skies by noon. Good for the garden.” He took a strip of bacon, crisp and dark at the edges, and chewed thoughtfully. “The petunias are really coming along this year, wouldn’t you say?”

​Martha hummed in agreement, stirring her tea. “They are. Such a vibrant red. You always did have a knack for the petunias.” She paused, a small, almost imperceptible tremor in her hand as she lifted the mug to her lips. “Did you remember to put out the bird feeder? I heard the sparrows quite early this morning.”

​“First thing,” David confirmed, turning a page with a rustle. “Wouldn’t want our little friends to go hungry. It’s important to maintain a routine, you know. Keeps things… balanced.”

​The third chair at the table remained empty. It was pulled out just so, a napkin folded neatly beside a clean plate. A small, blue plastic cup, adorned with faded cartoon animals, sat by the plate. Everything was in its place.

​“I was thinking,” Martha continued, her gaze drifting towards the window, where the thin light struggled against the haze, “we should really get around to painting the spare room this weekend. It’s looking a bit… tired.”

​“Oh, the spare room,” David mused, lowering the newspaper slightly. His eyes, though focused on Martha, seemed to look through her, at some distant, unmarred horizon. “Yes, a fresh coat would be good. Perhaps a light cream. Something calming. We do like things calming, don’t we?”

​“We do,” Martha agreed, her smile unwavering. “It’s important to keep our environment serene. For… for everyone’s well-being.”

​Later, David went to the garage to tinker with the lawnmower, its engine sputtering with a familiar, mechanical cough. Martha moved through the house with a quiet grace, dusting the antique mantelpiece, straightening the framed photographs – all of them meticulously chosen, none showing a third, small face.

​She paused by the open door of what used to be a brightly decorated bedroom. Now, it was a spare room. The walls were a pale, neutral beige, the crib long gone, replaced by a neatly made futon and a stack of untouched magazines.

​“Lovely light in here today,” she murmured, as if to an unseen companion. “Perfect for reading. Or just… thinking.”

​David came back inside, wiping grease from his hands with a rag. “Lawnmower’s purring like a kitten now. Good as new. I always say, a little maintenance goes a long way. Prevents bigger problems down the line.”

​“You’re so good at that, dear,” Martha said, emerging from the spare room. Her hands smoothed down her floral apron, a familiar, comforting gesture. “Always fixing things. Making them right.”

​“Someone has to,” David replied, his voice even, devoid of any discernible emotion beyond a practiced calm. “It’s part of the… responsibility.” He looked at the empty blue cup still on the breakfast table. “Did we forget to put that away?”

​Martha glanced at it, her expression unchanged. “Oh, dear. My mistake. I’ll just… take care of it.” She picked up the cup, her fingers brushing against the faded cartoon animals. “Such a sweet little cup. Reminds me of… simpler times.”

​In the afternoon, the haze thickened, casting a milky pall over Elm Street. The silence in the house was deep, broken only by the gentle tick of the grandfather clock in the hall and the distant drone of a neighbour’s leaf blower.

​“I heard Mrs. Henderson talking about her grandson,” Martha mentioned, sitting on the porch swing, slowly rocking back and forth. “He’s started kindergarten. Such a big milestone, isn’t it?”

​David was watering the petunias, his back to her. “Indeed. The years certainly do fly by. One minute they’re small, the next they’re off to school. A remarkable progression.” His tone was academic, like a lecturer discussing a botanical cycle.

​“Yes,” Martha said, her eyes fixed on the empty swing beside her, swaying gently in a phantom breeze. “Remarkable.”

​She recalled, not in images, but in a distant, muffled echo, the day the swing set had arrived. The excited squeals, the tiny hands reaching out, the promise of endless summer afternoons. Now, the swing set in the backyard stood perfectly still, painted a fresh, unblemished white, the rust carefully sanded away. It was a monument to perfect upkeep.

​“We really should consider getting those porch lights fixed,” David called out, his voice cutting through the stillness. “One of them flickers. It’s not very… inviting.”

​“No,” Martha agreed, her voice a soft whisper into the gathering dusk. “It’s not inviting at all. We want everything to be just right. Don’t we?”

​As evening settled, the house glowed with a warm, amber light. David was reading in his armchair, the newspaper replaced by a book on historical gardening. Martha was knitting, the needles clicking softly, rhythmically, creating a pattern that seemed to absorb all sound.

​“I was thinking of making your favorite stew for dinner tomorrow,” Martha offered, her voice unwavering, a perfectly placed note in the quiet symphony of the room. “With the extra carrots from the market. You do love the carrots.”

​“That would be lovely, dear,” David replied, not looking up from his book. “It’s important to have consistency, isn’t it? Familiar flavors. Predictable comfort.”

​The blue plastic cup, now washed and dried, sat on the kitchen counter, next to the neatly stacked dishes. It was ready for its next use, though its purpose had been quietly, collectively, forgotten.

​The night outside deepened. The haze over Elm Street never truly lifted, a soft, grey blanket over everything. In the quiet house, filled with the warmth of habit and the hum of unspoken agreements, everything was perfectly, profoundly, normal. The gap between what was known and what was said stretched into an infinite, comfortable space. And in that space, they continued to live, maintaining the surface of things, as if nothing at all was wrong.

"Daylight is coming to claim the quiet, but these words stay with you. If you enjoyed this journey into the midnight hours, leave a heart or a tip to keep the candles burning. Sleep well—if you can. — The Night Writer."

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About the Creator

The Night Writer 🌙

Moonlight is my ink, and the silence of 3 AM is my canvas. As The Night Writer, I turn the world's whispers into stories while you sleep. Dive into the shadows with me on Vocal. 🌙✨

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