The PROMPT.
Entry for the "Nothing But Voices" Challenge.

Him:
“Did you finish reading it?”
Her:
“I read it three times.”
Him:
“And?”
Her:
“It is a trap.”
Him:
“That is the point.”
Her:
“They think we do not notice.”
Him:
“They hope we notice.”
Her:
“Then why pretend it is neutral?”
Him:
“Because neutrality is the costume.”
Her:
“You sound proud.”
Him:
“I am tired.”
Her:
“Tired people design puzzles.”
Him:
“Or prisons.”
Her:
“Same architecture.”
Her:
“You wrote the line about dialogue carrying silence.”
Him:
“Yes.”
Her:
“You want to see who understands that silence is louder than explanation.”
Him:
“I want to see who panics without guardrails.”
Her:
“So this is a test of temperament.”
Him:
“It is a test of listening.”
Her:
“Writers listen?”
Him:
“The good ones do.”
Her:
“And the others?”
Him:
“They decorate noise.”
Her:
“That feels cruel.”
Him:
“This is fiction. Cruelty is implied.”
Her:
“You are enjoying this.”
Him:
“I enjoy watching people reveal themselves.”
Her:
“You could just ask them who they are.”
Him:
“They would lie.”
Her:
“So instead you make them talk with nothing to lean on.”
Him:
“No descriptions. No labels. No crutches.”
Her:
“No mercy.”
Him:
“Mercy ruins the data.”
Her:
“You sound like a scientist.”
Him:
“I am allergic to guesswork.”
Her:
“You think a story made only of voices exposes the author?”
Him:
“Every choice does.
The pauses.
The rhythm.
The evasions.
The need to explain.
The need to dominate.
The need to be liked.”
Her:
“That is a lot to hang on quotation marks.”
Him:
“Quotation marks are cages.”
Her:
“Or confessionals.”
Him:
“Exactly.”
Her:
“What are you hoping to find?”
Him:
“People who trust the reader.”
Her:
“That sounds gentle.”
Him:
“It is ruthless.”
Her:
“Trust requires courage.”
Him:
“You think courage is rare?”
Her:
“I think clarity is rarer.”
Her:
“Someone will complain.”
Him:
“Someone always does.”
Her:
“They will say it is unfair.”
Him:
“They are correct.”
Her:
“Unfair how?”
Him:
“Life is unfair. Writing reflects life.”
Her:
“You just quoted yourself.”
Him
“I repeat what works.”
Her:
“What about the ones who freeze.”
Him:
“They will learn something.”
Her:
“Or quit.”
Him:
“Both are outcomes.”
Her:
“You do not sound sad about that.”
Him:
“I sound honest.”
Her:
“Why call it PROMPT?"
Him:
“Because the word hides intention.”
Her:
“A prompt is a nudge.”
Him:
“A shove dressed as a suggestion.”
Her:
“You want to see who resists the shove.”
Him:
“And who leans into it.”
Her:
“And who rewrites the rules?"
Him:
“That one worries me.”
Her:
“Why?”
Him:
“Because they might be smarter than us.”
Her:
“That is the dream.”
Him:
“You want to be outgrown.”
Her:
“I want to be surprised.”
Him:
“Same thing.”
Her:
“You think they will notice us?”
Him:
“Some will.”
Her:
“And then?”
Him:
“They will write around us.”
Mock us.
Expose us.
Her:
“Do you mind?”
Him:
“I will applaud.”
Her:
“Really?”
Him:
“If they can see the machinery and still make art they belong here.”
Her:
“And the ones who obey perfectly?”
Him:
“They are technicians.”
Her:
“You do not value technicians.”
Him:
“I value them differently.”
Her:
“So this is a filter?”
Him:
“Everything is.”
Her:
“You are uncomfortable.”
Him:
“I do not like playing gatekeeper.”
Her:
“You already do. This just names it.
Why dialogue only?”
Him:
“Because voice is the last place to hide.”
Her:
“Plot can be borrowed.
Style can be mimicked.”
Him:
“Voice leaks.”
Her:
“Leaks what?”
Him:
“Belief.”
Her:
“Belief in what?”
Him:
“In the reader. In meaning. In restraint.”
Her:
“You think restraint is a virtue?”
Him:
“In fiction it is oxygen.”
Her:
“Someone will overdo it.”
Him:
“They always do.”
Her:
“They will shout philosophy.
They will explain the metaphor.
They will clarify the silence.”
Her:
“And you will sigh.”
Him:
“I will underline.”
Her:
“Underline is worse.”
Him:
“It is efficient.”
Her:
“You sound cold.”
Him:
“I am focused.”
Her:
“What about joy?”
Him:
“Joy arrives when someone trusts the gap.”
Her:
“You think the gap matters more than the words?”
Him
“The gap is where the reader lives.”
Her:
“That is poetic.”
Him:
“That is structural.”
Her:
“You have been planning this for months.”
Him:
“For years.”
Her:
“You waited for the right community.”
Him:
“Fiction tolerates experiments.”
Her:
“Barely.”
Him:
“But it forgives ambition.”
Her:
“Sometimes.”
Her:
“What about faith?”
Him:
“What about it?”
Her:
“Someone will bring it in.”
Him:
“They always do.”
Her:
“And?”
Him:
“And I will watch how they handle mystery.”
Her:
“You are obsessed with mystery.”
Him:
“Mystery is humility.”
Her:
“Say that again.”
Him:
“Mystery keeps writers from pretending they are gods.”
Her:
“And yet here we are.”
Him:
"Designing a maze....
Leaving the exits visible.”
Her:
“For who?”
Him:
“For those who look.”
Her:
“You think this prompt will find them?”
Him:
“It will find the way they think.”
Her:
“That sounds invasive.”
Him:
“So does reading.”
Her:
“You ever worry we are wrong?”
Him:
“Constantly.”
Her:
“And you still do it.”
Him:
“Yes.”
Her:
“Why?”
Him:
“Because when someone answers this well it reminds me why language matters.”
Her:
“Which is?”
Him:
“That voices can meet without seeing each other.”
Her:
“Like this?”
Him:
“Like this.”
Her:
“Do you think they know we are listening?”
Him:
“Some suspect.”
Her:
“And that changes how they write.”
Him:
“Good.”
Her:
“You want the pressure.”
Him:
“Pressure makes diamonds and confessions.”
Her:
“You keep mixing metaphors.”
Him:
“I contain multitudes.”
Her:
“One last thing.”
Him:
“What?”
Her:
“If someone writes a story about us...”
Him:
“I hope they do.”
Her:
“And if they see through everything.”
Him:
“I will smile.”
Her:
“And if they do it all in dialogue.”
Him:
“I will listen.”
Her:
“And say nothing.”
Him:
“That would be in character.”
Her:
“Exactly.”
Him:
“So we release it.”
Her:
“Yes.”
Him:
“And wait.”
Her:
“We never wait.”
Him:
“We read.”
Her:
“And judge.”
Him:
“And learn.”
Her:
“And pretend we were neutral.”
Him:
“Of course.”
Her:
“Ready?”
Him:
“Always.”
Her:
“Send it.”
Him:
“It is sent.”
Her:
“Now the quiet part.”
Him:
“The best part.”
Her:
“The part where they speak.”
Him:
“And we disappear.”
Her:
“As we should.”
Him:
“Until the next prompt.”
Her:
“Until the next voice.”
Him:
“Until the gap fills again.”
Her:
“And empties.”
Him:
“And calls to someone brave enough to answer.”
Her:
“They always come.”
Him:
“They always do.”
About the Creator
Cathy (Christine Acheini) Ben-Ameh.
https://linktr.ee/cathybenameh
Passionate blogger sharing insights on lifestyle, music and personal growth.
⭐Shortlisted on The Creative Future Writers Awards 2025.



Comments (1)
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