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The Play That Killed the King

In the candlelit shadows of 1600s Venice, a playwright pens a tragedy

By Muhammad SabeelPublished 8 months ago 4 min read

The first draft was stained with ink and wine. Matteo Bellini, the finest playwright in Venice—some whispered in all of Italy—leaned back in his carved walnut chair as the last candle on his desk flickered low. The lagoon winds whispered against the arched windows of his studio, high above the Piazza San Marco.

He had done it. A new tragedy. Raw. Gripping. Commissioned by none other than Prince Alonzo di Castello, heir to the throne of the Republic of Montelira. The prince wanted a story of betrayal and downfall, something “Shakespearean,” he said, though Matteo had always found the Englishman too fond of ghosts.

But Matteo gave him what he wanted: a tale of a noble king deceived by his most trusted general. A poisoned goblet. A silent assassin. A kingdom thrown into chaos before justice, finally, arrives too late.

It was to premiere in two weeks at the Teatro Rosso. A royal debut.

Yet as he read the final monologue aloud, something twisted in his gut. The language was too precise. The scenes too vivid. The plot too...possible.

The king in the play—named just “The Sovereign”—had been crowned with phrases Matteo barely remembered writing. Phrases he'd overheard, perhaps, while dining with the prince's circle. Court gossip. Passing remarks. And the assassin in the story? A tall man in a red cloak with a scar on his jaw. He existed. Matteo had seen him beside the prince once, quietly polishing a blade during a hunting party.

Matteo shook off the chill. Coincidence, he told himself.

Still, he made his way to the Teatro Rosso the next morning.

“Is Prince Alonzo in town?” he asked Giulio, the theater master, over espresso and smoke.

Giulio raised an eyebrow. “No. Gone north to Montelira. Said he’d return for the premiere. Why?”

Matteo forced a smile. “Just...hoping to share a draft.”

But Giulio leaned in. “Matteo, the prince was pleased. He called your script ‘prophetic.’ Said you understood his soul.”

Matteo felt cold.

That night, he returned to the script and read it through again. The king’s final lines haunted him:

> “Let the bells toll not for me, but for the dream I wore like a crown—unaware the dreamers had sharpened their knives.”

Too exact. Too close to truth.

He needed answers.

The next day, disguised in a tattered cloak, Matteo boarded a river barge and headed north to Montelira.

The capital was a grim castle built against a jagged cliffside. By the time Matteo arrived, snow dusted the ramparts.

He found an old friend, Lucia, a court seamstress and former actress.

“In Venice,” he whispered to her in the market square, “they’re calling my play prophetic. I fear it’s more than metaphor.”

Lucia’s eyes narrowed. “You’re not the first to say so. There are rumors. Whispers. The king has fallen ill. But some say it's no illness. And Alonzo...he's everywhere. Giving orders as if he already rules.”

Matteo’s stomach turned.

That night, Lucia snuck him into the castle. They crept through passageways once used by actors performing for the court. Matteo heard laughter behind thick wooden doors—and a voice. Alonzo’s.

He peered through a carved screen into the banquet hall.

Alonzo sat at the head of the table. Young, handsome, and gleaming with ambition. He raised a goblet and toasted:

“To destiny! And to our dear playwright—who unknowingly set the stage.”

Laughter echoed.

One guest asked, “Will the old king watch the play?”

“Unlikely,” Alonzo said, his smile sharp. “He may not survive the dress rehearsal.”

Matteo nearly gasped.

He turned to flee—but knocked over a loose brick.

Alonzo looked up. “Who's there?”

Lucia grabbed Matteo’s sleeve and pulled him down a servant's stairwell. They ran, hearts pounding, until they burst into the snow outside.

“You must stop the performance,” she said breathlessly.

“I must warn the king,” Matteo replied.

But neither would be easy.

Back in Venice, Matteo stormed into Giulio’s office.

“We must cancel the play,” he demanded.

Giulio blinked. “What madness is this?”

“It’s not fiction. The prince plans to kill the king. The play is his alibi!”

Giulio’s face darkened. “That’s treason to say aloud.”

“Then let it be treason,” Matteo said. “But I’ll rewrite it. Add a scene. Expose everything.”

Opening night arrived.

The theater was packed. Torches blazed. Alonzo himself sat in the royal box—alone.

The curtain rose.

The first acts played as written. The audience was riveted. But in Act IV, a new scene appeared. One no actor had rehearsed.

A lone figure stepped onto the stage. Dressed not as a character—but as the playwright himself.

Matteo Bellini.

He spoke directly to the audience:

“This stage holds more than fiction. Tonight’s tale is not of yesterday, but of tomorrow. You watch not a tragedy imagined—but one prepared.”

Gasps.

Guards moved to the stage. Alonzo stood.

But Matteo pointed.

“Behind that crown lies a dagger. Tonight’s villain does not die. He ascends.”

Alonzo shouted, “Seize him!”

But it was too late.

The audience surged. Whispers became shouts. And from the back of the theater, a cloaked man ran—waving a royal seal.

“The king lives!” he cried. “And Alonzo is under arrest!”

Chaos erupted.

Weeks later, peace returned.

The play was banned—but Matteo's words were printed and smuggled across Europe.

Alonzo was imprisoned for treason. The king, though frail, lived on long enough to crown a more loyal successor.

And Matteo? He returned to his desk. The next script, he decided, would be a comedy.

For he had learned one thing: sometimes, the truth needs only a stage to reveal itself.

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About the Creator

Muhammad Sabeel

I write not for silence, but for the echo—where mystery lingers, hearts awaken, and every story dares to leave a mark

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  • Coy Davidson8 months ago

    This play sounds intense. It's crazy how Matteo's words seem to match real events. Makes you wonder if there's more to it than coincidence. Have you ever had a creative piece turn out in an unexpected, almost spooky way? I'd be freaked out if I were Matteo. He's gotta be worried about what this means. And the fact that the prince called it "prophetic" adds to the mystery. What do you think he should do next?

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