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"The Passenger Who Wasn’t There"

I gave a stranger a ride-then realized my backseat was empty

By ETS_StoryPublished 5 months ago 3 min read

It was raining the night it happened, one of those slow, steady rains that makes the road shine like black glass. I was driving home from work, tired, half-listening to the radio when I saw her.

A young woman, standing by the side of the road, drenched under a flickering streetlight. She was holding her arms tight across her chest, shivering.

Normally, I don’t pick up strangers. It’s late, it’s risky, and you hear too many stories. But something about her—maybe the way she looked so desperate, so small in the rain—made me pull over.

I leaned across and pushed the passenger door open. “Need a ride?”

She hesitated, then nodded, sliding into the seat. Her hair clung to her face, and she smelled faintly of wet earth and something floral, like old perfume.

“Thank you,” she whispered, barely audible.

“No problem,” I said, pulling back onto the road. “Where are you headed?”

She gave me an address on the other side of town. A quiet neighborhood, not far from the cemetery.

For a few minutes, we drove in silence. I tried to make small talk. “Rough night, huh?”

She smiled faintly but didn’t answer. Instead, she kept glancing out the window, as if she were watching something in the dark.

Her silence felt heavy, so I let it go. We passed through stretches of road where the streetlights vanished, the trees leaning close on either side. The rain hammered harder, and I gripped the wheel tighter.

When I glanced in the rearview mirror, my heart nearly stopped.

She wasn’t in the front seat anymore.

She was sitting in the back.

I blinked hard, telling myself I was just tired. I hadn’t heard her move. I forced a nervous laugh. “Decided the back seat was more comfortable?”

She met my eyes in the mirror. Her expression was unreadable, but her lips curved into the faintest smile.

Then she said something that sent a chill straight down my spine.

“You missed the turn.”

I swallowed hard. “What turn?”

“The one to my house.”

I checked the GPS on my phone. No turn had come up. The road was straight, leading toward the address she’d given.

I forced another laugh. “Don’t worry. We’ll get there.”

But when I looked again in the mirror—

She was gone.

The seat was empty.

My chest tightened, my breath coming fast. I slammed the brakes and pulled the car to the shoulder, heart hammering so hard I thought I might pass out.

I twisted around. The back seat was empty. No sign of water, no damp clothes, nothing.

But the passenger door… was still locked.

I sat there shaking, trying to make sense of it. Had I imagined everything? The rain, the long day—maybe my mind was playing tricks.

Then I noticed something on the seat beside me.

A single white flower. A lily, fresh, the petals glistening with rain.

I stared at it, unable to breathe.

I didn’t drive home right away. Instead, I found myself following the road toward the cemetery. Something inside me said that’s where I’d find the truth.

When I pulled up, the rain slowed to a mist. The iron gates stood open, and the path glistened in the moonlight.

I walked through, clutching the lily in my hand, my shoes sinking into the wet earth.

And then I saw it.

Her face.

On a gravestone near the front.

Her name etched in stone. The same woman I had seen under the streetlight, her picture smiling up at me from a photograph fixed into the marker.

She had died five years ago. The date—exactly five years from that night.

I stood frozen, the world spinning around me. My hand trembled as I placed the lily at the base of her grave. Somehow, I knew that’s where it belonged.

The air felt lighter then, almost peaceful. The weight pressing on my chest lifted.

When I finally got back into my car, the passenger seat was empty. Truly empty this time.

But in the rearview mirror, for just one second, I thought I saw her. Sitting quietly, her eyes soft, her lips curved in that faint smile.

And then she was gone.

I drove home in silence, the road stretching out before me.

I never told anyone about that night. Who would believe me?

But sometimes, when it rains and the roads glisten like black glass, I find myself glancing in the rearview mirror.

Part of me hoping—part of me dreading—that I’ll see her again.

The passenger who wasn’t there.

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