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The "most" symphony

We have been living in our dormitory for quite a few days now, and if there is one word that can be used to describe our dormitory, it is "most". Yes, "most", our dormitory is a dormitory full of "most".

By William C BurgessPublished 4 years ago 3 min read

We have been living in our dormitory for quite a few days now, and if there is one word that can be used to describe our dormitory, it is "most". Yes, "most", our dormitory is a dormitory full of "most".

First of all, let's take the dormitory number, which is the last one of all dormitory numbers - number 7, the last room on the second floor.

In all the dormitories, our dormitory has the most beds, densely packed with 26 beds in total.

In spite of the poor conditions, our dormitory was the best in the hygiene evaluation. We were always the "first". Mr. Yang, who was in charge of the dormitory, said that he would reward us with the best door curtain with flowers that were neither too big nor too small, colors that were neither too bright nor too light, and looks that were neither too vulgar nor too plain.

We have the most complete dormitory, from the first year to the senior one. The youngest is Li Yue of our class, she is lively and lovely, everyone calls her their sister and cares for her in every way. The oldest is naturally the senior's "Lord Guan" - Guan Jieluo. She is the head of our dormitory, and everyone calls her "Lord Guan", but she doesn't have any "adult" attitude, but she is like a big sister. She is very nice to everyone. In addition to the largest, smallest, there are the most capable, the most interesting, the most talkative, the least talkative, the most eatable ...... this "most" ah, more!

To say that the most capable, should be the second year of Liu Wangchun. She can play the willow qin, pipa, guzheng and other instruments, and has participated in many competitions and won many awards. The first program of our school festival was her performance of "Yangchun Baixue", a solo performance on the willow qin. Her wonderful performance was most enthusiastically welcomed by everyone.

Look, who is this big guy, with his head held high, his hands clasped in front of his face, his steps big and strong, singing the words: "I'll send you a 'forget-me-not'." She is the most interesting person I would like to introduce - Zhang Hua, a senior. Although the homework in senior year is very intense, but never see her frown, long face. She always likes to "find her own joy". As soon as you see her, you will feel that every cell of your body seems to be throbbing with her laughter, and your body will be full of energy.

Zhang Hua slept next to me, and I seemed to be infected by her, becoming the most talkative person in the whole dormitory, talking endlessly to everyone.

However, my sister and Chen Ru, the two bedmates downstairs from Zhang Hua, were the two least talkative people. Usually before going to bed, bedmates always talk a few words, but the two of them there, always the quietest place in the dormitory, no sound. People say that my sister and I look most alike, but the character is most different.

Next to Zhang Hua and me, lives Jin Xin, a junior, who can be considered the best eater. Every day, her mouth in addition to the class is always idle, is a short time after the exercise, she also want to run back to the dormitory, eat some cookies, melon seeds, or something. It is really "a moment of leisure is 'eat food", ah! At night before going to bed, Jin Xin also "extra", pick the largest apple, the largest duck pear to fill the stomach.

In our dormitory, everyone's character is different, have their own "most", like a naughty note, so you can not touch, can not catch. However, the common goal of learning for the motherland and the common ideal of becoming a pillar of the motherland link these distinctive notes together to form an active, beating and wonderful symphony.

Listen, this "most" symphony is sounding again, it is so full of vitality and intriguing.

Brief comments.

The perspective of the article is novel. It is easy to make a deep impression by using "most" to summarize the characteristics of the dormitory and its members. The introduction of the "most" of the dormitory is full of pride, and the members of the dormitory are the "biggest and the smallest", The introduction of "the most capable, the most interesting, the most talkative, the least talkative, the most edible" reveals the kindness. Each of them has its own characteristics, but they are full of harmony, which is in harmony with the word "symphony".

The language is lively, funny and infectious.

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