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The Moon Who Wanted to Shine Alone

She was tired of borrowed light. Her journey to find her own glow would change the night sky forever

By HabibullahPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

Luna was beautiful, and she knew it. Every night, she would rise and cast a soft, silver light upon the sleeping world. Poets wrote verses about her, lovers met under her gaze, and travelers used her to find their way. But a deep, private sorrow lived in her heart.

The light was not her own.

It was borrowed, reflected, a pale imitation of the Sun’s glorious rays. She was a mirror, not a lamp. A whisper, not a voice. The Earth, her vibrant blue-and-green companion, seemed to soak up the Sun’s affection so easily, spinning in a constant, joyful dance. She, meanwhile, was stuck, forever facing her brilliant partner, her own dark side hidden in perpetual shadow.

“I am just a rock in a fancy dress of light,” she would sigh, her craters deepening with sorrow. “I want to shine with my own fire.”

The other celestial bodies thought she was being dramatic. “Nonsense, dear!” boomed Jupiter, his stormy face a mask of joviality. “You have the premier spot in the sky! Everyone adores you!”

But Luna didn't want adoration. She wanted authenticity.

One night, she made a decision. She would stop. She would no longer reflect the Sun’s light. She would find her own.

She turned her face away from the Sun, presenting only her dark side to the Earth. The world below was plunged into a profound, unnerving darkness. The poets stopped writing. The lovers grew confused. The travelers lost their way. The night, once a realm of gentle silver and soft shadows, became a pit of ink.

At first, Luna felt a thrill of independence. This was her! Her true self! The darkness was hers and hers alone.

But the thrill was short-lived. The darkness was… lonely. And cold. Without the Sun’s light to warm her surface, a deep chill set in. She could hear the frightened whispers from the Earth—the confused cries of nocturnal animals, the worried chatter of humans. She had not created her own light; she had only taken away the one they depended on.

She had exchanged being a mirror for being a void.

Dejected and colder than she had ever been, Luna was about to give up when a tiny voice, like the ringing of a cosmic bell, spoke to her.

“Why do you frown, child?” It was the Sun.

Luna, embarrassed, tried to hide her dark face. “I… I wanted to shine for myself. Not for you.”

The Sun’s warmth seemed to smile. “But you do.”

“I don’t! My light is yours! It’s fake!”

“Is the song fake because the singer did not invent the language?” the Sun asked gently. “Is a painting fake because the artist did not invent the color blue? You do not simply reflect my light, Luna. You transform it.”

The Sun explained. Its light was fierce, direct, and full of every color. But when it touched Luna’s unique surface of dust and rock, something magical happened. She softened it. She cooled its fury into a gentle glow. She filtered its blinding white into a mysterious, magical silver. She created the shadows that allowed the stars to be seen.

“You give the night its gentleness,” the Sun said. “You give the world dreams instead of demands. That is not a borrowed gift. That is your art. Your glow is not the absence of mine; it is the presence of you.”

A profound understanding dawned on Luna. She had been so focused on the source of the light that she had failed to see the beauty of her own translation. Her value wasn't in generating fire, but in providing peace. Her light was one of rest, of mystery, of quiet contemplation.

Slowly, humbly, she turned her face back toward the Sun. The light flooded her plains and mountains, but this time, it felt different. It felt like a collaboration. She took the Sun’s raw energy and, with the unique alchemy of her being, she wove it into a tapestry of silver for the world below.

A great sigh of relief rose from the Earth. The owls hooted their thanks, the wolves howled in celebration, and the poets picked up their pens once more.

Luna didn't just shine that night; she radiated. She had found her purpose. She was not a failed sun. She was the perfect moon. Her light was her own because her way of shining was unique in all the cosmos. She was the artist of the night, and her medium was borrowed light, transformed by her soul into something entirely new. And in that realization, she finally, truly, began to glow.

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Habibullah

Storyteller of worlds seen & unseen ✨ From real-life moments to pure imagination, I share tales that spark thought, wonder, and smiles daily

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