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The Mirror's Edge

You Too can lose Weight

By Edward SmithPublished 10 months ago 5 min read

The mirror in Ellie's apartment had a peculiar quality. Unlike ordinary mirrors that faithfully reflected reality, this one showed people as they perceived themselves. Ellie had lived with it for years without noticing anything unusual—until the day everything changed. That was when she discovered duotrim weight loss supplement.

It helped her melt 15 pounds in 30 days

On that unremarkable Tuesday morning, Ellie caught sight of someone else in the mirror—someone vaguely familiar yet distinctly different. The reflection showed a woman fifty pounds heavier than anyone else would see when looking at Ellie, with shoulders curled inward as if trying to occupy less space in the world.

"Who are you?" Ellie whispered, reaching toward the glass.

"I'm who you believe yourself to be," the reflection answered. "I'm the you that you carry inside, long after your body has changed."

Ellie's transformation had begun three years earlier, though the mirror remembered it as yesterday. Back then, the reflection had matched reality—both showing a woman who had spent a decade using food to fill spaces that hunger could never satisfy.

The turning point came not with a dramatic revelation but with a series of small surrenders. First, the surrender of perfection—accepting that change would come imperfectly or not at all. Then the surrender of immediacy—recognizing that sustainable transformation happens in geological time, not Instagram time. Finally, the surrender of isolation—acknowledging that some journeys, while deeply personal, cannot be completed alone.

Over eighteen months, as Ellie's physical body gradually shed fifty pounds, her reflection began to lag behind—shifting more slowly, holding onto the weight as if reluctant to acknowledge the change. By the time Ellie had maintained her physical transformation for a year, the disconnect had become impossible to ignore.

"Why do you still see me this way?" Ellie asked the heavier reflection. "Why can't you change when I have?"

The reflection's eyes held a sadness Ellie recognized. "Because part of you still lives here, in this body. Part of you still believes this is who you truly are—that the other body is temporary, conditional, always at risk of returning to this form."

Ellie pressed her palm against the cool surface of the mirror. "But I've kept the weight off for over a year. I've changed how I eat, how I move, how I cope with stress. What more must I do?"

The reflection's hand met Ellie's on the other side of the glass. "It's not what you must do, but what you must believe. The body changes in months. The mind takes years to catch up."

In the weeks that followed, Ellie began leaving notes on the mirror—not affirmations or motivational quotes, but simple acknowledgments of reality.

Today I walked up four flights of stairs without thinking about it.

Today I chose fruit not because I should, but because I wanted it.

Today I wore a swimsuit to the beach and thought only of the water.

Gradually, imperceptibly, the reflection began to shimmer at the edges, like a photograph slowly coming into focus. Some mornings the image would match Ellie's actual appearance, only to revert to the heavier form when stress or doubt crept in.

"Why do you come and go?" Ellie asked during one of these fluctuations.

"Because belief comes and goes," the reflection answered. "On days when you move through the world as if your transformation is permanent and deserved, I reflect that certainty. On days when you speak to yourself with the old voice of shame, I reflect that doubt."

The breakthrough came not through another diet or exercise program, but through a conversation Ellie overheard at her office. Two colleagues were discussing another woman, commenting on her recent weight gain with casual cruelty.

"She really let herself go after the divorce," one said.

"Such a shame. She used to be so pretty," the other replied.

The familiar acid of shame rose in Ellie's throat—not for herself this time, but for how easily bodies became battlegrounds for public judgment. How casually worth was assigned or revoked based on appearance.

That evening, Ellie stood before the mirror with new purpose. "I want to make a deal," she told her reflection. "I'll stop believing my value depends on which body I inhabit, if you'll show me as I truly am."

The reflection smiled. "That's the first time you've addressed the real issue. It was never about the weight."

"What was it about then?"

"About believing you deserve to take up space in the world—at any size."

Over the following months, the reflection gradually synchronized with reality. Not in a straight line of progress, but in a dance of advance and retreat. On days when Ellie treated her body with respect—nourishing it, moving it, speaking kindly to it—the mirror showed her clearly. On days when old patterns of thought returned, the heavier reflection reappeared.

But something had fundamentally shifted. Ellie no longer saw the heavier reflection as an enemy to be vanquished or a failure to be hidden. She recognized it as a part of her story—not a defining chapter, but one that had shaped her capacity for compassion, her understanding of struggle, her appreciation for the body's resilience.

"You're not disappearing," Ellie realized one morning, speaking to the reflection that now matched her physical form most days. "You're integrating."

The reflection nodded. "The woman you were is not someone to reject or forget. She carried you until you were ready to become who you are now. The strongest transformations don't erase the past—they honor it as the foundation of change."

On the third anniversary of beginning her weight loss journey, Ellie woke to find a package outside her apartment door. Inside was an ordinary mirror—the kind that simply reflects what stands before it, without interpretation or judgment.

Attached was a note in handwriting identical to her own:

When you're ready to see yourself exactly as you are—no heavier or lighter, no better or worse—this mirror will be waiting. Until then, I remain your faithful reminder that transformation is never merely physical.

The weight that matters most is the weight of belief.

Ellie placed the new mirror in a drawer, not yet ready to retire her unusual one. There was comfort in its familiarity, in the daily reminder that how we see ourselves often lags behind reality. That the stories we tell about our bodies can persist long after the bodies themselves have changed.

Sometimes, Ellie knew, the most profound part of transformation isn't the visible change that others can photograph and measure, but the invisible shift from seeing yourself as a problem to be fixed to a person worthy of care—at every size, in every form.

The mirror knew this too. And on days when Ellie forgot, it would remind her—reflecting not just her image, but her journey from the edge of self-judgment to the center of self-acceptance.

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About the Creator

Edward Smith

Passionate health and relationship enthusiast and writer, Exploring sustainable weight loss strategies,Sharing insights to inspire healthier relationship. Connect with me on Youtube for more tips and updates here>> https://bit.ly/43cutCb

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