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The Mirror Doesn’t Lie

“You came for the truth. So did I.”

By FAIZAN AFRIDIPublished 8 months ago 3 min read

The Mirror Doesn’t Lie

No one ever stayed in the Holloway House past midnight. The stories were old—handed down like warnings whispered through generations. They said there was a mirror on the second floor that didn’t reflect reality. It showed... possibilities. Or worse, replacements.

Seventeen-year-old Elena didn’t believe in stories. She believed in evidence.

That’s why, at 11:37 p.m., she stood at the top of the Holloway stairs with a flashlight in one hand and her phone recording in the other.

The house groaned around her. Wind crept through the broken shutters, and the chandelier above her swayed with every sigh of the old bones of the place.

She found the mirror in the upstairs hallway, just where the legend said it would be.

It was massive—floor to ceiling, framed in twisted, blackened wood carved with symbols she didn’t recognize. The glass itself was spotless, too clean for a place no one had entered in years. It looked... awake.

She stepped in front of it.

At first, it was normal. Her own reflection stared back—wide eyes, messy ponytail, flashlight beam shaking slightly in her grip.

Then it smiled.

But Elena didn’t.

She blinked. The reflection didn’t.

Her stomach turned to ice.

The mirror Elena raised a hand and began to write on the inside of the glass, though nothing touched it.

“You came for the truth. So did I.”

Elena stumbled back. Her heart pounded so loud she could barely hear herself think.

The mirror Elena smiled wider—an unnatural, stretching grin like her face wasn’t meant to do that.

“Who are you?” Elena whispered, barely breathing.

The reflection tilted its head, then pointed to the left.

Elena turned her flashlight—and saw nothing but peeling wallpaper.

When she looked back, the mirror had cracked.

A single fracture ran from the top to the center, splitting her reflection’s face down the middle.

Then the room went cold.

Her phone screen glitched. The flashlight flickered, then died. Darkness swallowed her.

She turned to run—but the hallway behind her had changed. The staircase was gone. There was only a wall, and the mirror now glowed faintly behind her, bathing her in pale blue light.

“Let me out,” a voice whispered—so close it felt like it came from her own throat.

She turned again.

The mirror was rippling like water.

And something was stepping out.

It was her. But... not.

Same face. Same hair. But her eyes were solid black. Her clothes were cleaner, her skin flawless, her movements too smooth.

Elena backed away, tripping on debris.

“Stop!” she shouted. “You’re not real!”

The thing smiled again. “Neither are you, not yet.”

Then it lunged.

Elena screamed—but instead of attacking, the doppelgänger reached for her face... and pressed their foreheads together.

Images flooded her mind—memories that weren’t hers. A version of her life where she never ran away from the accident. Where she let the guilt consume her. Where she chose to disappear into the mirror.

The glass behind them glowed brighter.

“No,” Elena whispered, eyes wide with horror. “You’re not me.”

“But I could be,” the creature purred. “This world doesn’t want the truth. It wants replacements.”

Elena struggled, her body frozen, her breath shortening. The mirror pulled at her like gravity, like drowning in her own reflection.

“I’m not leaving,” she gasped. “This is my life. My story.”

The other Elena laughed. “Then fight for it.”

With all her strength, Elena shoved the creature back. It stumbled toward the mirror—and cracked the surface.

The glass shattered into a thousand pieces, and with a terrible, distorted scream, the doppelgänger was sucked backward, piece by piece, vanishing into the void beyond.

Then silence.

The house returned to stillness.

Elena lay on the floor, shaking, her flashlight dimly flickering back to life.

She looked up.

The mirror was gone.

Only an empty frame remained.

She stood slowly, heart pounding, and looked at the phone still recording in her pocket.

It was dead.

As she turned to leave, she passed a broken shard of glass lying on the floor.

It reflected her face—exactly as it should.

But just before she looked away, the shard shimmered.

And her reflection blinked... a second too late.

HorrorMysteryPsychologicalShort StoryYoung Adult

About the Creator

FAIZAN AFRIDI

I’m a writer who believes that no subject is too small, too big, or too complex to explore. From storytelling to poetry, emotions to everyday thoughts, I write about everything that touches life.

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