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The Mimic At The Edge

Microfiction on Attention

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 4 months ago β€’ 2 min read
The Mimic At The Edge
Photo by Artem Kovalev on Unsplash

City folks exhausted by routine. Figures moving through streets and parks, half-forgotten. Shadows hover strangely when no one watches.

When no one pays attention.

Attention that, when neglected, should be reclaimed--before things change.

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Lina was the quintessential workhorseβ€”she cared for nothing but the daily grind. She’d taken enough from a boss who wanted more than she could deliverβ€”all she wanted was home, and to soak in a bubble bath of kindness.

The park was empty of visitors, leaving only lamplight that bent oddly around puddles of rain for company. The air was coolβ€”so cool that shadows hesitated or lingered, almost as if they found the ground repugnant.

Lina trod the usual path, her bagpack slung carelessly, her eyes glued to the cracked pavement. Something at the periphery of her vision twitchedβ€”perhaps a passerby in a sonic hurry. Or likely a flickering shadow, drifting out of place. She blinked it and flitted out of sight.

A puddle rippledβ€”no wind blew. A leaf hovered in midair, remaining a second too long. Lina snapped her head. The figure appeared at the corner of her eye again, teased by the light.

Precise.

Too exact.

She turned right. It did too. She turned left. It did too. It mimicked every step she took. The light of a park lamp hovered over her, shining on distended shadows that stretched in ways that tightened her stomach.

She stopped. It did too.

She stepped forwardβ€”it moved first.

Her pulse raced. Each of her instincts screamed that she had a mimicβ€”one that tested and teased, floundering at the edges of her perception. Reality shivered.

Her movementsβ€”no longer hers.

She managed to leave the park. The pavement leading from it was familiar β€” yet out of place. The corners had taken on a razor-like quality that seemed to brush against her skin with ominous fingers. Shadows hung over herβ€”too long. The air bore an uncanny memory of what once was.

She couldn’t unseeβ€”it. It echoed every twitch, every glance with uncanny synchrony.

Something had shaped her awareness during those moments. Not in the best way.

She breathed, at last, at a normal rate. But her shoulder twitched, and it did too. It glanced towards unseen cornersβ€”together with her.

The street before here echoed the impossible rhythm. The shadow had consumed the edge of her attention.

That she had been too busy to give.

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Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Krysha Thayer4 months ago

    This gave me the chills while reading. It'll definitely make me look over my shoulder next time I'm walking at night!

  • Sean A.4 months ago

    Very spooky!

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