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The Man Who Rented Time

Some people waste time. Elias borrowed it.

By ShahidaPublished 10 months ago 2 min read

There was this weird little shop in Eastbridge—no sign, no name. It sat squished between a bakery that always smelled like burned sugar and a laundromat where the machines made unsettling clanking noises. People didn’t really notice it. You could walk by a hundred times and swear it was never there.

But Elias noticed it one rainy Tuesday, right after everything in his life had started to unravel.

The bell over the door jingled like a thousand clocks ticking all at once.

“Looking for something?” a voice asked from the back. Raspy. Calm. Like it had been waiting.

Elias hesitated. “I… think I’m looking for more time.”

From the shadows stepped an old man—tall, a little bent, with these giant glasses that made his eyes look like moons. He wasn’t creepy, exactly. Just... odd. Like he didn’t quite belong in this century.

“You can rent it,” he said.

Elias blinked. “Rent time?”

The old man nodded, like this was a totally normal thing to say.

“An hour. A day. A week. We collect the time people waste and store it here. All yours—for a price.”

“How much?”

The man smiled slowly. “Depends. What are you willing to give?”

Elias said what most desperate people say when they don’t really think they have anything left.

“Anything.”

One Week of Borrowed Time

He meant it.

And the time… it worked.

For a whole week, Elias moved like he was outside the clock. No pressure. No rushing. He wrote the first draft of a book he'd been dreaming about for years. He called his brother—the one he hadn’t spoken to since their mom died. He sat with his elderly neighbor and played chess even though he didn’t know how. He watched the sunrise. He made time for love, even just for a moment.

And it all felt right.

He didn’t check his phone. He didn’t watch the news. He was, for the first time in forever, present.

But borrowed time has a price.

Time’s Up

He went back to the shop seven days later. The jars behind the counter weren’t glowing anymore.

“You used a lot,” the old man said. “Time to pay.”

Elias pulled out his wallet, but the old man didn’t even glance at it.

“You said anything.”

That was the last time anyone saw Elias.

The Quiet Reminder

Some say he disappeared. Some think he just left town. But sometimes, late at night, if you listen carefully—when you're lying in bed and regretting every wasted minute of your day—you might hear it.

A whisper, soft as dust:

“Time is precious. Don’t waste what’s yours.”

ClassicalFableFan FictionMicrofictionShort Story

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