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The Man Who Painted the Rain

The town of Bellhollow had not seen rain for seven years. The riverbeds cracked like old glass, and the fields turned to dust.

By Muhammad MehranPublished 3 months ago 3 min read

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The town of Bellhollow had not seen rain for seven years. The riverbeds cracked like old glass, and the fields turned to dust. Children had grown up without ever knowing the sound of thunder.

But every morning, just before sunrise, an old man named Jonas Reed climbed the hill behind his cottage and began to paint the sky.

He carried a weathered easel, a box of paints, and a canvas so stained with old colors that it looked like a fragment of a storm. The townsfolk called him the mad painter. They said he used to be a great artist in the city — until his wife died, and he walked away from everything.

Jonas didn’t mind the names. He only minded the silence. The silence where her laughter used to be.

Every dawn, he stood beneath the colorless sky and painted clouds — hundreds of them — as if his brush could coax the heavens to weep again. He painted until his fingers cramped, until the sun burned through the haze, and then he went home to his empty cottage, where her portrait hung by the window.

“Still no rain,” he would whisper to it.

And somehow, he imagined she smiled back.


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One morning, as he unpacked his paints, Jonas noticed a little girl standing at the bottom of the hill. She couldn’t have been more than eight. Her dress was patched, her hair wild as dry grass.

“Are you painting the rain again, Mister?” she called.

He smiled faintly. “Trying to.”

“My mama says you’re wasting paint,” the girl said, tilting her head.

“Your mama’s probably right,” he chuckled. “But maybe the sky just needs to see what it’s forgotten.”

The girl came closer. “Can I help?”

He hesitated, then handed her a brush. “If you promise not to stop believing.”

So she dipped her brush into blue paint and made a clumsy stroke across the canvas. “Like this?”

“Perfect,” he said softly. “You just gave the sky a reason to remember.”

From that day on, she came every morning. Her name was Marin, and she painted beside him — suns, clouds, rivers, everything the world had lost. The townsfolk laughed when they saw them, an old man and a child chasing storms that would never come.

But one evening, when Jonas was cleaning his brushes, he noticed something strange. The air smelled faintly of wet earth. He stepped outside and saw a dark cloud low on the horizon.

His heart skipped. “Impossible,” he whispered.

The next morning, he climbed the hill with Marin. The sky was still empty — except for a single gray streak. She giggled. “You did it, Mister! You painted a real cloud!”

He laughed, though his hands trembled. “Maybe we both did.”

Over the next week, the gray spread. A shadow moved across the hills, and the wind began to carry the soft promise of rain. The people of Bellhollow grew restless. They stared at the sky, whispering prayers.

And then, on the seventh morning, as Jonas dipped his brush into blue, a drop fell onto his canvas.

Not paint — rain.

He froze. Marin gasped and looked up. More drops followed, splashing onto their faces, their hands, their artwork.

Jonas fell to his knees, laughter and tears mixing on his cheeks. “You see, Marin? It remembered!”

The rain fell harder, soaking the hill, washing away the dust of seven years. Down in the town, people ran into the streets, arms raised, shouting and crying.

For the first time since his wife’s death, Jonas felt alive.


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But as the rain poured, he realized something else. The clouds above — they looked exactly like the ones he had painted. Every brushstroke, every curve.

He turned to Marin, but she was gone.

He scanned the hillside. No footprints. No sign she’d ever been there. Only a small paintbrush lying in the mud — hers.

He picked it up, heart pounding. The rain fell harder now, and thunder echoed in the distance. A voice drifted through the storm — soft, familiar, impossible.

“You did it, Jonas.”

He looked up. In the swirling gray sky, for just a moment, he saw her — his wife, her hair streaming like rain, her eyes shining with tears.

“I missed you,” he whispered.

“And I missed you,” she said. “But you had to remember how to paint again — how to hope.”

Then lightning flashed, and she was gone.

When the storm ended, the town bloomed again. Rivers filled, flowers returned, and people whispered of a miracle. They said the mad painter had brought back the rain.

But Jonas never painted again. He spent his days tending the new flowers and teaching the village children how to see color in the clouds.

And every evening, when the sun dipped low, he climbed the hill and left two paintbrushes at the top — one for himself, and one for the little girl who had helped him remember that love, like rain, always finds its way home.

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  • Aarish3 months ago

    The imagery of the cracked riverbeds and the colorless sky is stunning. It makes the arrival of rain feel earned and almost miraculous, carrying the weight of seven long years.

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