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The Magical Detective: Chapter 1 - Vanishing Whispers

Chapter 1 - Vanishing Whispers

By 醉翁忆梦换酒钱Published 3 years ago 6 min read

The sun had barely crested the horizon, casting an ethereal glow over the

bustling city as Porter stepped into the dimly lit room. His long black hair

cascaded over his shoulders, and his deep brown eyes gleamed with a

mixture of curiosity and determination. The room was flled with the

hushed whispers of detectives and ofcers, each one eager to get their

hands on the case fles scattered on the table.

Porter's supervisor, a stern but fair woman, approached him with a

grim expression. "We've got a string of peculiar disappearances in the

magical world," she said, her voice barely above a whisper.

Porter raised an eyebrow, his mind already racing with possibilities.

He was renowned for his ability to solve even the most complex cases,

and he knew that there was more to this than met the eye. Magic was at

play here, he could feel it in his bones.

As his supervisor delved into the details of the case, Porter listened

intently. "Three people have gone missing in the past week," she said, her

voice heavy with concern.

Porter nodded slowly, already piecing together clues in his mind. He

couldn't help but feel a sense of heroism stirring within him - this was his

chance to use his skills and knowledge to save lives and protect the city

from harm.

With a quick nod to his supervisor, Porter set out into the city, his

senses on high alert. The magic was calling to him, urging him to uncover

its secrets and put an end to this madness. He surveyed every alleyway

and every corner, looking for any signs of magic use or suspicious

behavior.

As an apprentice of the magical arts, Porter had learned to sense

such things instinctively. The elements whispered their secrets to him -

the wind carried with it the scent of lightning and thunder, while the earth

trembled under his feet with arcane energy.

He questioned every passerby, from humans to strange creatures

that towered over him or slunk around his ankles. They spoke in different

tongues, each one flled with a unique favour of magic. Despite the

cacophony of voices, Porter managed to decipher each one with his

analytical mind.

The witnesses offered different perspectives on the disappearances.

Some saw shadows darting away into alleys; others heard the sound of

wings fapping overhead. The clues were scattered, but Porter managed

to gather them all with a practiced hand.

He asked about the types of magic spells used in the area - wind,

earth, thunder, water, fre, light and dark - hoping to pinpoint which one

had been used to abduct the missing people. He also asked about the

levels of magic and alchemy - apprentice or Level 1-9 - hoping to narrow

down the suspects.

Porter's investigation was full of ups and downs. There were

moments of suspense when he thought he had hit a dead end, but then a

witness would offer a new piece of information that would send him off

in a new direction. He felt like a detective piecing together a puzzle - but

with magic thrown into the mix.

As night fell and the moon rose high above the city, Porter had

gathered all the clues he needed. He knew who the kidnapper was, what

type of magic they used, and where they were holding their victims.

But this was no ordinary criminal. The kidnapper was a practitioner

of Dark Magic, with power that surpassed even Porter's own abilities. And

they had been watching him every step of the way.

With a grin on his face and excitement in his heart, Porter set off

towards the culprit's hideout. He knew that he was walking into danger,

but he could not let fear overtake him. For he was a hero - and nothing

could stand in his way.

The streets were flled with magic and mystery, each one brimming

with secrets and clues that only Porter could decipher. The wind blew

fercely around him, carrying with it the whispers of ancient spells and

forgotten incantations. The earth trembled beneath his feet, as if the very

ground were alive with magic. Thunder rumbled in the distance, a

warning to all who dared to cross Porter's path.

He called forth the elements, tapping into the power of water and

fre, light and dark. He spoke in the dragon language, weaving intricate

spells that echoed through the streets like music.

Porter was no novice when it came to magic - he was an adept, a

master of his craft. His alchemy level was high, and his magic level even

higher. He had studied for years, honing his skills until they were razor

sharp.

And now...now he was ready to put them to use.

He reached the hideout and paused for a moment, taking in its dark

and foreboding aura. But he did not falter - for he knew that he was a

hero. And heroes do not shy away from danger.

With a deep breath, Porter stepped forward into the unknown...ready

to face whatever lay ahead.

The kidnapper's lair was shrouded in complete darkness. A chill ran

down Porter's spine as he set foot inside. The air was damp and musty,

suffused with a faint odour of decay. He could hear distant whispers,

speaking words he couldn't comprehend.

Drawing on his magical abilities, Porter cast a spell that illuminated

the room with a warm golden light. The cavern lit up like a beacon,

revealing rows upon rows of books and parchments stacked haphazardly

on shelves lining the walls.

But something was different about these books - they seemed to

pulse with power, as if they held within them secrets too great for human

understanding. And as Porter approached them cautiously, an unseen

force surged through his body, flling him with a sense of dread.

Suddenly, the walls began to tremble. The shelves shook violently,

and Porter could hear the sound of cracking stone. In the dim light, he

could see the vague outline of a fgure emerging from the shadows. It

was the kidnapper.

But this was no ordinary criminal. The kidnapper was a creature of

pure darkness, with eyes that glowed like embers in the night. Its voice

boomed like thunder, shaking the very foundations of the chamber.

"You should not have come here," it growled, its voice laced with

malice.

But Porter was not afraid. He had faced evil before and emerged

victorious. He stood his ground, drawing on every ounce of magic that

fowed within him.

The kidnapper launched itself at him with lightning speed, but Porter

was ready. He activated his Magician's Shield, a spell that created an

invisible barrier around his body. The creature collided with it like a

cannonball, but was defected instantly.

Porter retaliated with a burst of fery fames, casting it directly at the

attacker's chest. But to his surprise, it had no effect - only seemed to fuel

the kidnapper's dark power.

Spells were exchanged between them - their magic intermingling

with each other in a dazzling array of colours and sounds. The cavern

shook as they clashed, causing debris to fall from the walls and ceiling.

The battle raged on for what seemed like hours - Porter attacking

with every inch of his might, the kidnapper defecting and countering with

equal ferocity. But ultimately, it was Porter's skill and bravery that emerged triumphant. He cast one fnal spell - a beam of white light that enveloped the kidnapper and shattered its dark power forever.

It lay at his feet - defeated but not destroyed. For even though the

creature was vanquished, its existence had left an indelible mark on the

young apprentice. He knew that he would never forget the lessons he had

learned that day, nor the power of magic and the darkness that could

accompany it.

Breathless and exhilarated, Porter emerged from the cavern into the

crisp night air. He knew that the magical world would never be entirely

free of villains and monsters, but he also knew that he had done his part

to make it safer.

As he walked back into the city, with a renewed faith in his abilities,

Porter knew that what he had done was more than just solve a case. He

had uncovered a deeper truth about himself, about magic, and about the

world that surrounds us. And that was a real kind of magic - one that

could never be taken away.

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About the Creator

醉翁忆梦换酒钱

The Drunkard

A wise man who revels in the memories of the past.

He pursues the hidden stories through the glass of wine.

A unique perspective will be taken to re-present the legends forgotten by history, touching the heartstrings of dreams.

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