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The Lost Map of Devil's Ridge

A twelve-year-old didn’t expect it to change her summer.

By Md.Nayeemul Islam KhanPublished 8 months ago 3 min read
The Lost Map of Devil's Ridge
Photo by Chris Lawton on Unsplash

Twelve-year-old Maya Daniels was surprised to discover a hand-drawn map titled "Devil's Ridge: 1892 – Gold Cache" when she opened the dusty trunk in her grandfather's barn in Arizona. She most definitely did not anticipate her summer being altered by it.

While her parents traveled throughout Europe for work, she was transported from Chicago to spend three exhausting weeks with her grandfather Roy. The bustle of her city life was a world different from his ranch, which was tucked away in the red rock area outside of Sedona.

“This old thing?” Grandpa Roy squinted at the map when she brought it into the kitchen. “That’s just one of your great-great-grand pappy's tall tales. He used to chase treasure when he wasn’t chasing trouble.”

But Maya wasn’t convinced. The map had symbols, coordinates, even a warning scrawled in faded ink: “Beware the Raven Mark.” That night, while the desert wind howled outside, she studied it with a flashlight under her blanket. And the next morning, she packed a backpack with water, jerky, a flashlight, and her phone—and set out.

She wasn’t alone.

Her cousin Tyler, fourteen and always up for something dumb or dangerous, caught her sneaking out. He took one look at the map and said, “I’ll go if I get half the gold.”

“You can have a quarter,” Maya said.

“Deal.”

They biked for three miles, ditched their bikes near a dry creek bed, and hiked into Devil’s Ridge, a jagged rock formation locals avoided. The sun was scorching, and the red dust clung to their legs. Every so often, Tyler would mutter, “This is crazy,” but he never turned back.

The map led them through narrow canyons and across old cattle trails until they found a strange marker: a carving of a raven etched into a rock face. Just beneath it, an arrow pointed toward a cave entrance, dark and cool like the inside of a mouth.

“Still want to go in?” Maya asked.

Tyler hesitated, then pulled a flashlight from his bag. “Only if you go first.”

Inside, the cave twisted like a snake. Dust and cobwebs filled the air, and the beam from their flashlights trembled with their hands. They followed markings on the walls—a spiral, a triangle, and finally an “X” scratched into stone.

Under the X was a pile of loose rocks. Maya knelt down and started clearing them away, heart pounding. After a few minutes, her fingers hit something hard—wood.

They uncovered a small, weathered chest, held shut by rusted iron hinges.

Maya took a deep breath and opened it.

Inside were old coins, gold nuggets, and a journal with yellowed pages. Tyler let out a low whistle. “Holy cow. It’s real.”

The journal belonged to a man named Elias Daniels—her great-great-grandfather. It told of an outlaw gang, a hidden stash, and how Elias had betrayed the gang and hidden the loot before disappearing.

As they flipped through the pages, Maya noticed a faint sound—like a whisper of movement. She turned and saw something on the cave wall: a raven symbol glowing faintly red.

“Tyler,” she said slowly, “we should go.”

But it was too late.

The ground rumbled beneath them, and a section of the cave collapsed, blocking their way out.

Panic surged. Dust filled the air. They backed away, coughing. Tyler tried calling for help, but his phone had no signal. “We’re trapped!”

“No,” Maya said. She remembered something from the map. She pulled it from her pocket, now crumpled and torn, and saw a second route marked with dashed lines—an exit path.

“Come on!”

They followed the new path deeper into the cave. Bats fluttered overhead, and the floor sloped downward before turning up again. After what felt like hours, they saw daylight.

They emerged on the far side of Devil’s Ridge, covered in dust and sweat, clutching the journal and the chest.

When they returned to the ranch, Grandpa Roy was waiting on the porch, arms crossed.

“I told you that map was trouble,” he grumbled. Then he smiled. “But Elias would’ve been proud.”

They handed him the chest. He opened it, eyes misting over.

“I never thought I’d see this again.”

Maya grinned. “Guess treasure hunting runs in the family.”

That summer, Maya learned the best adventures weren’t in video games or storybooks—they were buried beneath your feet, waiting to be found.

AdventureFantasyHistoricalMysteryShort Story

About the Creator

Md.Nayeemul Islam Khan

I write such topics that inspire and ignite curiosity. With a sharp eye for detail and a passion for storytelling, I turn complex topics into clear, compelling reads—across variety of niches. Stay with me.

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