“The Last Whisper in the Pines”
When the forest speaks, not everyone survives to tell the tale.

Marnwood was the kind of village forgotten by time and remembered only in ghost stories. Surrounded on all sides by ancient pine forests, it lay quietly between mist-covered hills where the sun rarely broke through. The elders spoke of things best left untouched—old paths, stone circles, and voices that whispered just after dusk.
Seventeen-year-old Leya had never believed in the legends. That was, until her brother, Tomas, disappeared three nights ago after heading out to gather firewood. Search parties found no sign of him—no footprints, no broken branches, no scent for the hounds to follow. Just silence.
But Leya had a different memory. She remembered the way the wind carried her name that night—Leya... Leya...—as if the forest itself had called to her. She hadn’t told anyone. Who would believe that the trees were speaking?
On the fourth night, just before the moon rose, she packed a small bag, lit a lantern, and stepped into the woods.
The deeper she went, the quieter everything became. No crickets. No owls. Just the soft crunch of pine needles beneath her boots and the occasional creak of tree limbs overhead.
She followed the old hunter’s trail—long abandoned, overgrown with moss and half-swallowed by roots. It was said no one returned from this path. That it “led to the breath between worlds.” Whatever that meant.
After what felt like hours, Leya came upon a clearing she had never seen before. In its center stood a circle of stones, waist-high and covered in runes older than the village itself. Her lantern flickered.
She stepped closer.
A sudden gust blew through the clearing, though the trees did not sway. The flame died. Darkness swallowed her.
And then—she heard it.
"Leya..." The voice was unmistakable. Her brother’s. Faint, desperate.
“Tomas?” she called out.
“Behind... the veil... don’t trust the whisper...”
Then silence again.
She lit the lantern with shaking hands. The stone circle shimmered, like heat on summer stone. A faint glow pulsed from beneath the stones, and the ground vibrated with a hum, almost like breath.
Something was alive here.
Leya stepped back. Every instinct screamed at her to run. But she had come too far. She pulled the old charm her grandmother had once given her from around her neck—a small silver pinecone etched with symbols she had never understood.
As soon as it touched the stones, the circle flashed, and a rippling veil of light opened before her—a window into another forest, darker, twisted. And in its heart stood Tomas, pale and unmoving, his eyes empty.
Leya gasped. “Tomas!”
But the figure didn’t respond. Instead, another voice filled the clearing—cold, ancient, and amused.
“You seek what is taken, child. What will you give to take it back?”
She turned in all directions, heart pounding. “Who are you?”
“Not who... what. I am the memory of these woods. The whisper that binds. Your kind broke the oath long ago. Now we take what we are owed.”
Leya’s grip tightened on the charm. Her grandmother had warned her once: "If the forest calls, do not answer with fear—answer with truth."
She stepped forward, tears in her eyes. “Then take me. Let Tomas go.”
The silence that followed was heavy. The veil flickered.
“Willing sacrifice,” the voice mused. “Rare. Very well.”
A sudden wind howled. Light burst from the circle. Leya’s body lifted, weightless, and in a flash—it was over.
Back in the village, Tomas stumbled out of the woods just before sunrise, confused and weakened but alive. The villagers rejoiced.
But they never found Leya.
And on some nights, when the wind blew just right through the pines, you could still hear a voice—soft, sad, and forever whispering...
“Tomas...”
About the Creator
M Fawad
I'm a passionate fiction writer who loves crafting stories that blend imagination with emotion. From magical realism to futuristic adventures, I aim to create worlds that spark curiosity and leave a lasting impact.




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