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The Last Slice

Gratitude lingers-in small spaces.

By Michelle Liew Tsui-LinPublished 2 months ago β€’ Updated 2 months ago β€’ 1 min read
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Happy Thanksgiving, all.

πŸ‚

A crowded office break room. A pumpkin pie sits, leftover.

Untouched and waiting, under pale fluorescent light.

The light formed a violet aura- it crowned the pumpkin with violet thorns.

It waited, as patient as a cat waiting for a little mouse to scamper from one hole to another.

No one noticed it, except for me.

One person.

That was all it needed. For now.

πŸ‚

I reached for the pumpkin slice, lifted it to my mouth, then stopped.

A note.

"May this last piece of pie sweeten your day."

The note outweighed the pie.

A little pie blessing in tiny, but too discernible, writing.

And the office felt full again.

πŸ‚

Then, I remembered.

Saul. The janitor.

"It's not clean until the last corner's swept," was his mantra.

I stopped him and offered him the pie.

It hummed with an invitation.

He paused mid-sweep and grinned.

A small act with a large voice.

And that was enough drumroll.

πŸ‚

I left the office, the plate empty.

But the note remained firmly in my pocket.

Then, a sliver of gratitude-

Unexpected and persistent.

The note remains in my pants pocket, waiting to be reread.

Like gratitude residue that needs no spotlight.

It lingers - in cold, small offices.

πŸ‚

Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin. AI tags are coincidental.

For Mikeydred's November Challenge

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About the Creator

Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin

Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.

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  • Mike Singleton πŸ’œ Mikeydred - EBA2 months ago

    So sweet and perfect for the challenge

  • Tiffany Gordon2 months ago

    Cute stuff Michelle! Thx 4 sharing!

  • Komal2 months ago

    Ohhh this was sweet in every sense! Funny how the smallest leftovers end up feeding the biggest feelings. Keep writing like this, my friendβ€” people need these quiet miracles. πŸ’–

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