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The Last Notification

When your phone knows you're running out of time—but you don’t.

By HabibullahPublished 6 months ago 3 min read
The Last Notification

The Last Notification

It was 11:11 PM when Ethan’s phone buzzed. Normally, he wouldn’t have even looked—he got hundreds of notifications a day. Likes, comments, updates, news flashes, random pings from apps he never remembered downloading.

But this one was different.

“You have 24 hours left. Log out wisely.”

The screen blinked once. No sender. No app name. Just those words.

Ethan stared at it. Was this some new ad campaign? A glitch? A virus?

He closed the notification, muttering, “Weird.”

But something inside him stirred. Not fear exactly. More like… a pause. A sense of something trying to whisper louder than usual.

Ethan lived alone in a small but sleek apartment, surrounded by tech. Smart bulbs, digital frames, voice assistants. His life was efficient, optimized. Automated coffee in the morning, scheduled Zoom calls, calendar reminders for even water breaks.

And yet, he hadn’t spoken to a real person in days. Maybe weeks.

His job as a freelance developer meant he could avoid the world. He liked it that way—or thought he did.

That night, he tossed and turned. Every time he closed his eyes, the words blinked behind his lids.

"24 hours left."

By morning, the message was gone. No trace in notifications. He Googled it. Nothing relevant. He scanned for malware. Clean.

He shrugged it off.

Until...

At exactly 11:11 AM, he received another notification.

“23:00 remaining. Still scrolling?”

His stomach twisted. He opened the message. Again, no app name. No data.

He felt watched.

He opened Twitter. Started scrolling memes. But they weren’t funny. Everything felt... shallow.

He switched to Instagram. Everyone smiling, traveling, hustling. None of it felt real.

He set his phone down. For the first time in years, the silence in his apartment felt loud.

He remembered his mom’s number. He hadn’t called her in months. She used to call every Sunday. He stopped answering. Her messages became fewer. Then stopped completely.

He hesitated. Then dialed.

“Ethan?” Her voice cracked on the first syllable.

“Yeah, hi Mom. Just… checking in.”

A long pause.

“Is everything okay?”

He opened his mouth to lie—but stopped.

“I just… realized I miss hearing your voice.”

She sobbed quietly on the other end. “I thought I lost you.”

Later, he visited the coffee shop down the street. The barista, surprised, asked, “You live nearby?”

He smiled. “Three years now.”

“You’ve never stepped in.”

“I guess I’m changing routines.”

He sat at a window table and just… watched.

People walking, talking, laughing. A toddler dropped her ice cream; her dad scooped it up and kissed her forehead. A street musician played a melancholy tune. None of it made him money. None of it boosted a post.

But it made his chest feel warm. Real.

At 5:11 PM, another notification.

“18:00 remaining. Not too late to feel alive.”

He put his phone face down.

He wandered through a nearby park he hadn’t visited since college. An old man fed pigeons with shaking hands. A girl read aloud to her little brother under a tree.

A couple walked by holding hands, arguing about something silly. Then laughed.

Everything hurt and healed at once.

He thought about her.

Leah.

The girl he once loved. The one he ghosted because he “got busy.” She used to write him poems. Waited on calls that never came.

He found her number. Still saved.

Fingers trembling, he texted:

“I’m sorry. For everything. If you’re okay with it… I’d love to hear your voice one last time.”

To his shock, the typing dots appeared.

Then a reply:

“Call me.”

The conversation lasted an hour.

Then two.

They didn’t speak about the past. Not much. Just life. Memories. What-ifs.

She laughed at one of his stories and whispered, “It’s good to know you still exist.”

He blinked back tears. “It’s good to feel like I do.”

At 11:11 PM, the screen blinked again.

“Time's up.”

He waited for something dramatic. A heart attack? A crash?

But nothing happened.

Instead, a new message:

“You lived today. Many don’t. Log out with peace—log in again tomorrow?”

Below was a single button:

[Accept New Terms of Life]

Ethan stared.

And then he tapped “Accept.”

🌟 Epilogue

It wasn’t magic. It wasn’t death.

It was a reminder.

Ethan deleted half his apps that night. He stopped auto-scrolling. Started journaling. Visiting. Calling. Smiling.

He never got another notification like that.

Because he didn’t need one anymore.

Moral: Sometimes, the warning isn’t about death—but about a life unlived. Don’t wait for a countdown. Make today matter.

AdventureFan FictionMicrofictionPsychologicalSci FiSeriesShort Storythriller

About the Creator

Habibullah

Storyteller of worlds seen & unseen ✨ From real-life moments to pure imagination, I share tales that spark thought, wonder, and smiles daily

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