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The Last Message

A Forgotten Phone, A Cry for Help, and a Race Against Time

By NIAZ MuhammadPublished 6 months ago 3 min read

The café was almost empty. Rain tapped gently against the windows, and a low jazz tune played in the background. Sarah leaned over her cup of coffee, lost in thought. She had just ended a long day at the hospital, her mind still buzzing from the chaos of the ER. She needed quiet — not a mystery.

But life had other plans.

As she got up to leave, she noticed a phone on the seat across from her. It was small, cracked at the corner, and had no case. She looked around — no one seemed to be missing anything. After a moment’s hesitation, she picked it up.

The screen lit up with a notification.

"1 New Message: Please help me. Don’t let him find me."

Sarah froze.

She tried to unlock the phone, but it needed a passcode. She felt a chill run through her spine. Was this a prank? A drama-obsessed teenager? But something about the message felt real. Urgent. She couldn’t ignore it.

She took the phone to the counter. “Anyone drop this?” she asked the barista.

The young man shook his head. “Not that I know of. You could try calling someone from it, if you can unlock it.”

She nodded, though the locked screen stared back at her like a secret that didn’t want to be revealed.

Sarah drove home, the phone resting beside her. Part of her wanted to hand it to the police. The other part — the part shaped by years of saving lives and trusting instincts — couldn’t let go.

That night, the phone buzzed again.

"He’s close. Please. I don’t have much time."

Still no name. Still no sender. Still locked.

Sarah tried calling emergency services. But as soon as she did, the phone shut down.

Dead battery.

She stared at it in frustration. It didn’t feel like coincidence. It felt planned.

---

The next morning, she went back to the café. She showed the barista the phone again, pressing him for details. After some back and forth, he remembered a girl who had been sitting alone the day before. Quiet. Nervous. She had ordered tea and stared out the window most of the time.

“She dropped a note,” the barista added suddenly. “I threw it away, but I remember one word. ‘Run.’ That’s all it said.”

Sarah’s gut twisted.

She took the phone to a tech-savvy friend who managed to charge it without unlocking it. He also found a way to access emergency contacts.

There was only one listed.

MOM – 555-0142

Sarah dialed the number. It rang twice before someone answered.

“Hello?” The voice was brittle. Weak. Tired.

“Hi, ma’am. My name is Sarah. I found a phone — I think it might belong to your daughter. I saw some alarming messages.”

The woman gasped. “You found Emma’s phone? Oh my God. Where? When?”

Sarah explained.

“My daughter’s been missing for two days,” the woman cried. “We thought she just ran away, but now… Oh God, those messages…”

“Do you think someone’s holding her?” Sarah asked gently.

“I don’t know. She had a boyfriend. Controlling. Violent. We warned her, but she wouldn’t listen. Then she went silent.”

Sarah’s hands clenched.

She promised the woman she’d go to the police, but before she could hang up, another message arrived.

"Train station. 4 PM. Blue coat. Help me."

This time, the phone allowed her to reply.

"I’m coming."

---

At 4 PM sharp, Sarah stood at the train station, eyes scanning the crowd. It was raining again, and people moved quickly, heads down, umbrellas up.

Then she saw her.

A girl in a blue coat, hunched over, trying not to be seen. She looked terrified. She clutched something — a torn bag, her hands shaking.

Sarah approached slowly. “Emma?”

The girl looked up. Recognition flickered in her eyes.

But before they could speak, a man appeared behind Emma. Tall. Lean. Rage in his eyes.

“Found you,” he snarled.

Sarah stepped in front of the girl. “Leave her alone.”

The man pushed Sarah aside and grabbed Emma’s arm.

That’s when the police sirens screamed.

Sarah had texted Emma's mother just before leaving. The mother, desperate, had called the police and given them everything.

Officers tackled the man. Emma collapsed in Sarah’s arms, sobbing.

---

Two weeks later.

Sarah received a letter in the mail. No return address. Inside was a simple card.

“Thank you for not ignoring a stranger’s cry. You saved my life. – Emma”

---

Sometimes, the smallest decisions — like picking up a forgotten phone — become the ones that change everything.

MysteryShort StoryYoung Adult

About the Creator

NIAZ Muhammad

Storyteller at heart, explorer by mind. I write about life, history, mystery, and moments that spark thought. Join me on a journey through words!

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  • Huzaifa Dzine6 months ago

    good

  • Umar Faiz6 months ago

    Wow, just when you think a left-behind phone is just lost and forgotten, it turns into a full-blown rescue mission—move over, Sherlock!

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