The Knock That Binds
And reminds.
Some knocks remind.
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Avi wasn't like others--he loved the late shift because it was-- Quiet.
Serene.
Because he could work alone.
Moments of solace in his apartment were a treasure--rare and city-free.
But something spoiled them one September night.
A knock.
Deliberate.
Purposeful.
It didn't belong to the hour.
He peeped through the keyhole with a light stamp of his foot-- No one.
Silence.
It then fractured--measured, urgent beats.
Each more demanding than the next, shifting from the door--
To a cabinet in his living room.
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Avi took a few hesitant footsteps towards the cabinet--he couldn't get the knock out of his head.
The door was locked.
But shuddered.
With each knock.
Then, shadows.
Lengthening across walls.
The family photo on the living room cabinet.
The knocks persisted
Like an alarm that couldn't turn off.
The floor creaked.
In sync with the knocks.
The same, persistent reminder
The family photo on the cabinet glowed.
Curiosity overcame fright---he flung the door open.
A package. To a familiar address.
Too familiar.
In it, a brass key.
Warm to the touch.
And a note---a memo.
"You forgot."
Then the knocks increased--
On the windows.
And the walls.
The ceiling.
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The brass key in his hand--
Hotter.
Heavier.
The elevator door creaked open.
Empty.
But the knocks grew louder--inside.
He stepped in---it descended.
Without him pushing a button.
Reopening--on a dimly lit floor.
The knocks softened--but became more
insistent, pulling him--
To a door.
With a number he knew--
But couldn't quite place.
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He approached the numbered door.
He knew it---needed to open it.
He raised the key to open it--the knocks stopped.
The door clicked open---almost unwillingly.
A room.
Smelling of antiseptic.
A corridor.
Of a hospice.
The family photo--now flashing insistently
in his head.
The number---to his parents room.
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He stood outside his parents' room, fighting with his mind.
With the brass key.
The photo.
The KNOCKS.
And the responsibility--he forgot.
He placed his hand on the knob--he didn't dare turn it.
After a few minutes--
The door opened fully.
The knocks softened--but not completely.
They now counted--like time.
Until he moved.
Did he?
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Original story by Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
For Mikeydred's Song of Seven Challenge
About the Creator
Michelle Liew Tsui-Lin
Hi, i am an English Language teacher cum freelance writer with a taste for pets, prose and poetry. When I'm not writing my heart out, I'm playing with my three dogs, Zorra, Cloudy and Snowball.
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Comments (5)
"The floor creaked In sync with the knocks." Super creepy, and the whole poem is mighty suspenseful and chilling. Very creative work, Michelle.👏
Well-wrought, Michelle!
thought this was a knock at the door challenge. Chilling.
Heart pounding!
That is brilliantly disturbing, and I love the image your sed for it