The Keyhole and the Tower
Sometimes, the act of looking opens the door home.

(A Short Story for the Vocal Media Keyhole Challenge)
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The slit in the dome opens like a wound in the sky.
Wind claws at the aluminum skin of the Observatory where I work, and the shutter parts with a groan that I can feel in my borrowed rib. Inside the darkness, the telescope waits—thirty tons of glass and intent.
Every night I open the dome and unbolt the massive, cathedral-shaped door, and every night the sky presses its cold face to the gap and peers back.
We call it a slit, an aperture, a field—but it is a keyhole. It always has been.
If you line the world up just right—your eye, a curve of glass, the Earth—you can look through it and see something you were never designed to see.
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“Guiders online,” I say. My voice sounds too loud in the empty void. “Mount tracking. Offset eight arcminutes west.”
The scope murmurs to itself. On the screen, stars smear, then snap to points. I press my brow to the eyepiece anyway, a small act of faith in an age of automation. a nod to the rituals of the days before technology began to make our participation as humans obsolete. There is power in rituals.
The glass is cold against my skin. There is no image there, only the memory of a thousand nights spent waiting for the universe to speak. I lift my head and take the night in like everyone else.
Beyond the keyhole of the telescope, the universe is whispering again.
I start the sweep. Exposures tick by—forty seconds, forty seconds, forty seconds—three frames that will become a single field.
Beyond the keyhole, the cosmos exhales. The faint whispering begins.
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The computer blinks through the exposures, looking for movement.
Mostly that means satellites tracing idiot-straight lines, or asteroids meandering slowly through the fabric of space unbothered by trajectory left to the whims of unseen gravitational pulls.
On the eleventh field, something jerks.
“Got you,” I whisper.
Then I freeze, because it’s all wrong.
Most things that move, move like everything else—predictable, obedient to the handwriting of gravity.
This one moves like a memory someone keeps rewriting.
Frame one: a smear at the top right.
Frame two: a clean point at center.
Frame three: gone.
Then the computer stacks them—a skip, a snap, an absence.
I run it again. Same. Something is off. I sip coffee that tastes like cold pennies and try to ignore the coiling ache in my neck.
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For weeks, the network has tracked a strange body in the outer system, tagged 3I-ATLAS—the third interstellar object we’ve ever seen.
A rock, they called it, until its trajectory began to bend in ways no rock should.
Now it hovers near Saturn’s rings, poised as if waiting for permission to enter the inner sanctum of the solar system.
A fast, silent paradox.
A rock that behaves like it remembers the rules of this galaxy.
I increase magnification. On the monitor, the reflection flickers—not tumbling, not inert.
Turning.
What should be a solid mass hurtling through space is simply going with the flow. Hell, it might even be creating the flow itself. This rock is not a rock at all; it is the river.
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My father once told me about Devil’s Tower—an impossible column of stone rising eight hundred feet from Wyoming soil, bark turned to basalt, the skin of the Earth frozen mid-breath. Petrified wood. Life turned solid.
The screen sharpens. 3I-ATLAS gleams in striations that look like the Tower’s columns—bark hardened into stone, a scar carved across the universe itself.
Some call the structure a remnant of the gods. Others say it’s the stump of the world-tree itself. In every creation myth, there is always a ladder between heaven and earth. And there is always a moment when that ladder is destroyed. Then the giants normally appear to help the survivors rebuild what has been lost to catastrophe.
Is this our boat from the sky moment? Have the heavens returned to reclaim this hell on Earth we have created?
The telescope hums.
The object brightens in deliberate steps—two seconds, three, five, eleven.
Prime numbers, as if answering back.
“Planes don’t do prime numbers,” I mutter, half to the mountain, half to whatever is listening.
“What are you?”
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Analysts call it debris, a space rock.
NASA calls it inert, nothing to worry about.
Harvard calls it questionable, perhaps even alien.
Reddit calls it the apocalypse, the return of the mother ship.
I call it alive, unpredictable.
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A rock is never just a rock.
A rock is a warning, a relic, a paradox—creation slowed to stillness.
Our temples were carved from it. Our gods were born of it.
Even now, we worship what can crush us.
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My musings are interrupted when my storm alert pings.
Cell service on ridges is more prayer than technology. Still, for a heartbeat, the world below connects.
I know I should have called this in already. Instead, I narrow the aperture a little more.
“Let me see you,” I whisper. The point obliges.
It doesn’t grow larger—it grows clearer.
The light is wrong, no familiar fingerprints of hydrogen or iron, just a reflection that seems to shape itself around my looking.
A mirror made of memory.
When I switch to a spectroscopic slit, the point sharpens.
When I widen the imager, it softens—its brightness diffusing into a crisp ring, like an iris tightening.
“It’s adjusting to observation,” I say aloud, because the silence feels like pressure.
“It knows we’re watching.”
Or maybe it’s built to act as if it does. I am not sure which is the scarier option in this scenario.
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Then a thought hits hard enough to make me stand up straight, toppling my old, off-balance, three-legged, government-issued office chair in the process:
The gravitational keyhole.
A hair-thin corridor between Earth and Moon. Thread it once, and one can slingshot into the beyond. Thread it again, and one comes back exactly where—and when—one means to return.
“Jesus,” I whisper. “It’s aiming for the keyhole.”
I exhale the thought like a curse. “And it wants us to know.”
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I watch entranced as the light fractures and a silhouette unfolds from the heart of the object
—a tree made of flame and memory, its branches branching into infinity.
For a single frame, I see it clearly:
The Tree of Life, its crown piercing the cosmic veil, its roots tangled in starlight.
Then the image collapses.
Only a seam remains—thin, bright, vertical. A doorway.
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Static fills the comms. But inside the noise, there’s rhythm—language before language. A relentless hum.
When the giants walked among us, they climbed that tree to reach the heavens.
When it fell, the world fell with it.
What if 3I-ATLAS isn’t a visitor at all?
What if it’s the memory of that loss—returning?
A needle rethreaded.
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A seed from a civilization older than we can imagine, finally circling back home.
The slit feels smaller now. The sky presses harder against the dome. The monitors flare white.
For one instant—before the system overloads—I see faces: long, luminous, ancient.
Beautiful enough to make one forget to breathe.
Then the feed dies.
And so does the comfort of believing the universe doesn’t see us, my innate desire to be left alone now impossible because I blinked. I made first contact.
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“I looked,” I whisper. The words sound like a confession.
Looking is a verb with gravity—we pull things closer by noticing them, push them away by refusing to see.
I have spent my life measuring light that left its home before the first stories of Earth were ever told.
Tonight, something measured me back.
A seed of that lost civilization of giants that walked amongst us in our ancient myths returned home
--to sprout hope, knowledge, and advancement again?
The slit of the dome feels smaller now —
a keyhole through which heaven peers back.
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Then the feed dies.
As does my hope of finding any way to rationally explain what I have observed this evening.
There is no hope that I will report this and survive unscathed.
There is no scientific, mathematical, or even religious lexicon that explains what I have observed.
Honestly, my discovery tonight undermines the comfort of our existing paradigm.
Is this the moment that by simply recording what I have observed, I am labeled and ostracized as the mad scientist?
“What do I do now? This observatory is my whole life.”
I have spent my life measuring light that left its home long before the first stories were told here on Earth, and tonight something measured me back.
I file the logs.
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When the liaison calls to ask about “aberrant imagery,” I say the instruments glitched in the major storm we had last night.
When he asks about the trajectory through the lunar keyhole, I say the mountain was loud with wind.
I answer more questions I don’t want to and refuse to answer others.
He notes these answers. He does not blink.
No one does when they have just learned that doors can open in the middle of the sky and show you a home you don’t recognize.
As dawn begins to rise and my shift comes to an end, we quickly end our discussion.
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By dawn's first light, it is clear that the storm has spent itself against the ridges.
I stand on the catwalk and let what passes for warmth at this elevation crawl back into my cold fingers.
The world below is rinsed, glistening, full of new mistakes it has not had time to make.
Down the mountain, the day is starting to make its usual demands. In my pocket, my phone beeps a series of codes as cell service staggers back to life.
One beep is from my mother.
It’s a photo. My father’s old brass key ring, resting in her palm.
The biggest key—the one to our front door—has a small dimple punched through the bow.
Light filters through it, casting a perfect halo on her hand.
She’s typed only four words:
What’s on the other side?
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By the afternoon, NASA has labeled last night's events a "disintegration event.” No debris. No trace. Just a thin aurora tracing the equator — green fire humming faintly when the wind is still.
I do not sleep.
I replay the final image frame by frame: a column of light descending through clouds over Wyoming.
I book a flight.
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At Devil’s Tower, the air vibrates.
Tourists are gone. The monolith glows under the aurora, its basalt ribs pulsing like breath.
I kneel and press my palm to the stone. It’s warm. Alive. A heartbeat beneath the world’s crust.
The tower is remembering. And from somewhere deep within it — from the roots of a world-tree turned to stone — petrified by its traumatic demise-- comes a sound like a door unlatching.
As if I am the key.
As if I was the missing piece all along.
As if the Journey of my soul was always destined to return to the myths shared by my father when I was a child.
A child of this very “world-tree.” A child of the mother tree.
A living branch from the original tree of life.
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Perhaps 3I-ATLAS was never a ship but rather a seed.
A renewal. A rebirth. A promise that what was cut down can grow again.
Maybe the universe is replanting a garden.
Maybe this is our chance to do the same.
Maybe what I saw through the keyhole was not an invasion,
but a restoration,
a reclamation of a civilization
lost to modern conveniences and overwhelmed apathy.
Perhaps, this is our chance to change paths.
To grow straighter and taller.
A chance to create our own way back to the heavens.
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The sky opens-- Golden light spills through—not fire, not ruin, but memory taking shape.
Beams of sunlight offering passage to millions of dancing motes.
Branches of gold stretching down through the clouds, reaching for the ground as if to reclaim her lost children.
The ancient trunk trembles, shedding its petrified shell, reclaiming its living flesh. Reunited.
The light fills my lungs, warm and infinite.
The Earth exhales.
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The tower splits with a sound older than thunder.
And from the wound, the branches of the tree rise again—
A rebirth and a return towards the stars:
A second coming,
a return to the beginning,
a homecoming.
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The threading of a needle.
An unexpected glance through the keyhole.
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Author's Note:
When an astronomer peers through her telescope at an interstellar object called 3I-ATLAS, she expects another cold fragment of rock. What she finds instead is a living myth — a mirror of Earth’s first tree, the bridge between heaven and earth, returning through the keyhole of space. As the object draws closer, science, memory, and divinity converge in a breathtaking rebirth that could either save or unmake humanity.
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Stacey Mataxis Whitlow (SMW)
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Comments (1)
I love how you incorporated the keyhole! Great story