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The House of Whispers

Secrets Whispered by the Walls

By Benhadja AbdallahPublished about a year ago 3 min read
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The village of Blackthorn was cloaked in perpetual mist, its cobblestone streets echoing with tales of terror passed down through generations. At its heart stood an abandoned mansion, known only as “The Whispering House.” Locals spoke of a curse—a malevolent spirit said to haunt its halls, feeding on the secrets and fears of those foolish enough to enter.

For decades, the house remained untouched, until Evelyn Crane arrived. A journalist with a penchant for unraveling mysteries, Evelyn had heard the rumors during her travels. Unlike the villagers, she scoffed at the idea of spirits and curses, attributing the stories to superstition and fear. Yet, something about the house intrigued her—a pull she couldn’t explain.

On a damp October evening, armed with her notebook, flashlight, and an old camera, Evelyn approached the mansion. The iron gate creaked under her touch, revealing a garden overrun with thorny vines and twisted trees. As she stepped onto the porch, the air grew colder, her breath visible in the dim light.

Inside, the house seemed frozen in time. Dust-covered furniture sat undisturbed, cobwebs hung like drapes, and the faint scent of mildew filled the air. Evelyn’s flashlight danced across peeling wallpaper and shattered mirrors, each reflecting fragmented versions of herself.

“Just an old house,” she muttered, jotting down notes.

But then she heard it—a whisper, faint and unintelligible, coming from the shadows. She froze, her pulse quickening. “Is someone there?” Her voice echoed in the silence, but no reply came.

Brushing off the sound as wind, Evelyn pressed on. The whispers, however, grew louder the deeper she ventured. They seemed to come from nowhere and everywhere at once, murmuring in a language she couldn’t understand.

In the dining room, she found a dusty journal lying open on the table. Its pages were filled with scrawled handwriting, some lines so frantic they tore through the paper.

"Do not listen to them. The whispers lie."

The words sent a shiver down her spine. She turned the page and gasped. A sketch of a figure stared back at her—a tall, shadowy being with hollow eyes and elongated fingers. Beneath it, the words read: “The Keeper.”

Evelyn snapped a picture, but as the flash illuminated the room, she saw something in the corner of her eye—a shadow darting past the doorway.

“Hello?” she called, her voice trembling.

The air grew heavier, oppressive, as if the house itself was alive and aware of her presence. The whispers now seemed to form words.

"Evelyn..."

Her name. Clear as day.

Heart pounding, she stumbled back into the hallway. The front door was mere steps away, but something compelled her to stay—to uncover the truth.

On the second floor, she discovered a room filled with mirrors, each one cracked and clouded. As she stepped inside, the whispers ceased. The silence was deafening.

Then, her reflection in one of the mirrors moved.

It smiled.

Evelyn gasped, stumbling back. The reflection did not mimic her fear—it simply stared, its grin widening unnaturally. And then, it whispered.

"Run."

The door slammed shut behind her. The whispers returned, louder, more insistent. Shadows began to creep along the walls, converging into a single figure—the Keeper. It towered over her, its hollow eyes fixed on hers.

“You came to listen,” it rasped, its voice a chorus of whispers. “Now, you will speak.”

Evelyn’s scream was swallowed by the shadows as they engulfed her.

The next morning, the villagers found the house silent once more. Evelyn’s camera lay on the porch, its film undeveloped. Rumors spread of her disappearance, adding yet another chapter to the legend of the Whispering House.

And deep within its walls, the Keeper waited, whispering her secrets to the next curious

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Benhadja Abdallah

I’m passionate about crafting realistic and fictional horror and mystery stories that immerse readers in every moment, letting them feel the details and emotions, as if they’re part of the story, facing its challenges and secrets.

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