The House in the Jungle
Some Doors Should Never Be Opened
The jungle buzzed with the sound of rain. The trees danced, their leaves sharing secrets, while the thick, humid air clung to everything it encountered. In the center of this ancient forest stood a house. Its walls bore time marks, its windows cracked and draped in vines. It appeared deserted, yet there was something eerily vibrant about it.
For as long as anyone could recall, the locals in the nearby village had cautioned travelers: Never wander into the jungle after dark. Please don't go to the house.
But the warning felt like mere superstition for a group of four friends—Lena, Adam, Priya, and Luke. They were adventurers, always chasing the thrill of the unknown, the forgotten places. When they reached the village, the tale of the house in the jungle seemed like the ultimate challenge. The locals spoke in hushed tones, casting wary glances toward the trees, but the four friends remained unfazed.
"We can handle it," Lena declared, her eyes sparkling with excitement. "It’s probably just an old, abandoned house. There’s nothing to fear."
Adam, the most doubtful of the group, scoffed. "Right, because every creepy house in a jungle surrounded by warnings is just a perfectly normal place."
But even Adam couldn’t suppress his curiosity. They hired a guide from the village, a man named Marco, who seemed visibly anxious as he led them through the thick underbrush.
“The house is about two miles into the jungle,” Marco explained in a hushed tone. “You won’t see anything until you’re right on top of it. But once you get close, you’ll sense it.”
“Sense what?” Priya asked, trying to keep the atmosphere light.
Marco didn’t respond. He simply continued deeper into the jungle.
The House
After hours of trudging through the dense foliage, the group finally arrived at a clearing. The house emerged from the trees like a scene from a nightmare—a crumbling, dilapidated structure, overtaken by vines and moss. The once-white walls had faded to a sickly gray, and the windows were as dark as night, resembling empty eyes gazing into the jungle.
“I think we should turn back,” Marco said, his voice shaking.
“Come on, Marco. Don’t be such a coward,” Luke teased. “It’s just an old house. What’s the worst that could happen?”
Reluctantly, Marco agreed to wait outside while the friends approached the house. They could hear the faint rustle of wind in the trees, the soft croaking of distant frogs, and then—silence. Complete silence.
Lena pushed open the creaking door, which groaned as if it were alive, resisting their entry.
Inside, the house was a labyrinth of decaying furniture, peeling wallpaper, and dust-covered floors. It smelled stale as if the air had never been disturbed. The rooms were dim, with light filtering through the cracks in the walls. Yet, despite the overwhelming sense of decay, the place didn’t feel entirely deserted.
“Weird,” Adam muttered as he stepped into the living room. “I thought it would be more… empty.”
Priya wandered into a narrow hallway, where strange symbols were etched into the walls. These weren’t just random markings; they appeared ancient, worn into the wood by something beyond human touch. As she traced her fingers over the symbols, a chill crept down her spine. She turned to the others.
“Guys, check this out.”
Lena and Luke joined her, their eyes scanning the strange markings. They didn’t recognize the symbols, but they felt unsettling as if they were meant to convey a warning.
Then, from somewhere in the distance, a soft creaking sound echoed through the house—a door swinging open.
“What was that?” Luke asked, his voice suddenly laced with unease.
They exchanged glances, uncertain of what they had just heard. The house felt eerily still, yet the air was thick with an unspoken tension. It was as if the house itself was observing them, waiting for something.
The Voices
The unsettling feeling only intensified as they ventured further inside. The walls seemed to murmur, faint voices drifting in and out, just beyond their comprehension. Adam, the skeptic, attempted to brush it off as the wind or his imagination, but even he couldn’t shake the growing sense of dread that lingered in the air.
“Let’s stay close,” Lena suggested. “This place is creeping me out.”
They moved deeper into the house, their footsteps echoing on the creaky floorboards. Suddenly, a loud bang resonated from upstairs, as if something had fallen.
Priya froze. “Did you hear that?”
Before anyone could react, the door at the end of the hallway slammed shut with a force that rattled the walls. The temperature plummeted, and their breaths became visible in the icy air.
Lena tried the handle, but the door wouldn’t move. Panic seeped into her voice. “What the hell is happening here?”
Luke pulled out his phone and directed the flashlight at the walls. As the light flickered, something odd appeared in the corner of the room—a shadow, long and distorted. It stretched across the wall, reaching out toward them.
“Is anyone else seeing that?” Luke’s voice trembled now.
They all turned, but when the light swept back, the shadow had vanished.
“This is crazy,” Adam muttered. “There’s something off about this house.”
As if on cue, the air felt heavier, pressing in on them. The faint voices grew clearer, like whispers right in their ears. They looked around, but no one was there.
“Who’s there?” Lena called, her voice shaking.
The house responded with a deafening silence.
Then came the loudest bang yet—a door slamming open, followed by the unmistakable sound of footsteps. They were not alone.
The Basement
Lena’s heart raced in her chest. “We need to get out. Now.”
But as they turned to flee, the house seemed to contort. The hallway stretched endlessly. The windows were shrouded in darkness as if the night had consumed the light. The house was alive, and it didn’t want them to escape.
In a panic, Priya dashed for the stairs, pulling the others along with her. They reached the basement door, which was already slightly open as if it had been anticipating their arrival.
The moment they entered the basement, the air thickened, suffocating them. The walls were adorned with strange symbols like those on the upper floor, but these were far more intricate, carved deep into the stone. The floor was littered with old, brittle bones—human bones.
“I think we need to get out of here,” Luke said, his voice barely a whisper.
But it was too late.
The door slammed shut behind them, and the whispers returned—louder now, closer, almost mocking. Shadows in the basement seemed to shift, coiling like serpents around their feet. In the dark corner, they saw it—a figure, pale and featureless, standing still.
The figure stepped forward.
The Escape
In a blind panic, they flung the door open and ran, but the house felt like it was stretching infinitely, trapping them in its cursed halls. The figure’s hollow eyes followed them, its lips moving, but no sound emerged.
Just when they thought they would be consumed by the house, they stumbled out of the front door and back into the jungle. The air outside was damp, but it felt real. The sounds of the jungle—the chirping of crickets, the rustling of leaves—flooded their senses like a lifeline.
They ran, not daring to look back, the jungle swallowing the house behind them.
When they reached the village, Marco was waiting, wide-eyed, as if he had expected their return.
“You’re lucky,” he said, his voice grim. “No one ever comes back from that house. It was built on cursed land.”
The friends didn’t speak for a long time. They didn’t need to. They knew they had witnessed something no one should ever see. And though they had escaped the house, the whispers never ceased. They could hear them, faint but ever-present, in the corners of their minds.
The house in the jungle had left its mark.
And now, it was waiting for someone else to open its door.
About the Creator
Sazia Afreen Sumi
I craft stories that delve into love's many facets—romantic, unrequited, and lasting—plus other intriguing themes. Discover tales that resonate!

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